Baki: Martial System

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racecarsthegodcar

man this has such potential i really hope u don’t end up like how the author of the jack hanma self insert went place yourself please and get to new jack arc i love your fic so far and see so much potential just please don’t burn out

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Shishume

This is such a disappointment, for real. I've been looking for good Baki fanfic, and then I saw this. I was hoping that this fanfic would be great, but it turned out to be the biggest disappointment on the app.

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MirageKing

Kindly make it harem bcz martial artist without harem looks mid af.

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Parth_Anandpara

too much time spent on family and side character development it's a baki fanfic .the focus should always be martial arts .not when half the chapters are useless family interaction.

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M_Static

For the martial arts ff in baki's world there is awfully small amout of fights and their description in ff is.... pathetic. Author like to talk about martial art but dont like to act... MC is the same

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Billy_Agustian17

Continue your work.................................................. ...................................................................... ... .......................

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The_HonorableGhost

I have to rate my novel a 5/5, otherwise what kind of author would I be?

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CouchPotatoDandy

A somewhat nice fanfic, the grammar is good without any mistakes that I could find. Though for me personally I have reached chapter 24 before I dropped it cuz I didn't quite enjoy the banter and flow of the story. But I'm sure that for other people they might enjoyed more.

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jackson_smith

The_HonorableGhost Excellent Fanfic Keep up the amazing work You can do this Kengan Ashura fanfic after Baki: Martial System Jack Sampson always loved fighting so he became an mma fighter and he had many fights. Until He met his demise being caught in a yakuza gunfight. He meets the God of Fighting and He gives him the Hanma Bloodline along with a fighting style template system . he will send him a year before episode one of the anime. Traits: Alpha Male, Strategic, Smart, Calm in Complex Situations, Loves his women, Helps his women defend themselves and get strong. Harem Akiyama Kaede Soryuin Shion Matsuda Tomoko Kirayoshi Rino Ann Banecroft Toga Tomari Jennifer love hewitt Katahara Sayaka Jane Seymour Elena Robinson Connie Britton Akiyama Sakura Kure Karura Kure Fusui Maria Kanellis Maryse Mizanin Nikita Lyons Ashley Mae Sebera Mandy Rose CJ Perry Chun Li Mikumo Kushinada Tiffany Stratton Christa Monteiro Nina Williams Miharu Hirano

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thesacredmenace

Here is my review after reading the first volume. This story had a lot of potential at the beginning but it climaxed too early at the raitai tournament and even then it was a vague way of writing from that moment forward that had you confused. In short, you can tell where the passion disappeared. Give it a shot if you want to kill time but as for final evaluations, I think this should be rewritten.No hate for the author though as they seem very nice.

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Random_Entity

Reading the bad reviews I thought this would be horrible, but it wasn’t bad at all. I’m even looking forward to more chapters.

Caramba eu comecei a ler ontem... e só terminei agora! Eu simplesmente amei!! (uωu*) por favor continue e não abandone essa história. É muito raro eu falar da obra de alguém, mas adorei que você respeitou a obra (foi o que me pareceu) posso imaginar isso acontecendo. E como você consegue escrever tão rápido isso é incrível! Por favor continue (ФωФ), por que eu estou muito curiosa pelo que vem a seguir. (Claro que deve ir no seu tempo)

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jeffmiste

peak baki fanfic, the only complaint I have is that the female love interests are kind of annoying and somehow able to sneak up or even restrain the mc but that seems to be just for comedic value

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HolyDK

Not read but name baki =10/10 y go read 🤭 am si uytrey yeefgiufv je utrxghytrgjuyfv ghhhhhgghhhgvvv🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭qsfhkoitfssdcjiyfxjutdc

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Deadauthor

awesome! xd

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Shaunw

I've deleted my previous review because I feel like I gave it a bit too low of a rating. The story is fine, but the beginning is an absolute slog. I also STILL absolutely hate the sister.She is an absolute annoyance. In the beginning, it focuses more on family, which I didn't really like. But in later chapters, this changes and becomes much much better as it focuses more on martial arts.

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Metachrono_Exodus

One of the best reincarnate stories based on Baki. Character Development is Peak. All in all a good read.