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Benjamin 'Soldier Boy' Gilman awakens on the shores of Westeros. Disoriented and groggy, he finds himself in a foreign land, surrounded by the rugged cliffs and dense forests of the North. As he gathers his bearings, the reality of his situation begins to sink in—this is not his world.
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Écrire un avisA good story, I didn't detect any major writing errors, and the idea of the story is very innovative, since the soldier boy is in Westeros, unfortunately many things are off the radar, especially how the characters are reacting to him, frankly, the what he did at the beginning of the story would already put the entire North behind his head, him also behaving kindly towards Jon or Arya seems a bit... no soldier boy, along with him being with the Starks for a long time, frankly, it's plus the soldier boy character just goes away and becomes a mercenary while completely ignoring the nobles, it's actually kind of fun watching him crush all the nobles seeking revenge for him humiliating their egos and there are also all the female characters falling in love with him because nothing, I mean... Cersei would absolutely hate him. Other than that I really like this story, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
por lo que voy leyendo, la historia promete mucho, tiene buenos diálogos, los personajes no se siente planes y no es tan cliché como las otras historias que se encuentran en este sitio.
since the character is not a good person (racist...) it doesn't make me want to follow him, I would have rather watched Captain America in Westeros if the translator did a good job.
This is a pretty solid start for a fanific. I don't much about got since i didn't watch it so i don't kno how accurate this is but i love how soldier boy is portrayed here. it feels very accurate to his characterization in the boys.
Someone got inspired by a certain Captain America fanfic, though I wonder which one gor I have two nickels with Captain America ending up in Westeros, this will be a honorary nickel for Soldier Boy is a parody of good ol Rogers
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Yes YESSS now this is a story you better keep this up author-san. I am counting on you!!!!!!!!!