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Started like something else but then became something else. Also, the inconsistencies and repeated chapters in the middle that only feel very shallow. It's a lovey-dovey story and a short read. It had a lot of potential but now feels like I am reading excerpts from a jumbled up diary. A once-over read is fine but I would not recommend it proactively. Writing quality is good though.
Started like something else but then became something else. Also, the inconsistencies and repeated chapters in the middle that only feel very shallow. It's a lovey-dovey story and a short read. It had a lot of potential but now feels like I am reading excerpts from a jumbled up diary. A once-over read is fine but I would not recommend it proactively. Writing quality is good though.