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Brother/sister where are the chapters of this amazing ff If this was abandoned it's a shame because it was one of the best novels written and was very interesting
This fanfiction is very well-written, with clear stakes, political intrigue and a good main cast. I would recommend to anyone wanting to kill some time, since everything about this story is of high quality.
OMG U GOT ME CRAVING SOME MORE FIRST BOOK LIKE THIS I'VE EVER READ LOVED IT
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Love This Story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ It is really so good. I cried hard when I read about Aemma's death like crazy😭😭 Really really amazing story🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰Good luck. and give us more amazing chapters
i liked how the author followed the canon until a CERTAIN event, and then started to create their own events. I also liked how the 2 main Mc's have their own personalities and weren't op off the bat, and actually had to train for it. Reading it was also pretty easy since i could barley find any misspelt words if not all. i just wished i found this later this month because there would be more chapters.
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Well, I really like this one. At first you have my curiosity now you got my attention. Please keep up your good work Sir thanks. Thanks again
gotta ask author so aemon Targaryen is the reinrcarnator MC since I'm quite confused and gotta give a 4 star since it's quite a good concept
good story featuring reincarnated protag,love how you use the blood of the dragon and connection between dragon and rider
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Rien a dire. Tu écris une super bonne fan fiction sur game of throne avec une très bonne intrigues uniques en son genre. Toutes les émotions sont présentes et merci
Sigh ~ I've come here one last time to remind people that I've been warning CONSTANTLY that I'll delete any reviews or comments pertaining to the subjects I've warned about. I don't care about my score, as I don't make any money here; it's just a hobby of mine. This is the last time I'm trying to be civil. I won't even read your comments or reviews anymore if I see what they're about—I’ll just delete them. Go read something else if you don't like it.
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Writing Quality: Very good I liked how the story is proceeding so far, with Aemon (Main Protagonist) who is someone from our world and Rhaenyra who is Aqua from the Oshi No Ko world mix together. it's like a pineapple and pizza, it doesn't sound good but it is pretty good. I like their dynamic and their development as character especially Aemons, he isn't someone perfect, albeit a perfect warrior, but isn't as smart as his sister. I felt like each time the characters appear it makes me want to keep reading due to this. Also I like how you use chatGPT to fix your grammar and not use it to fill up your sentences. Story Development: So far, we are following cannon, but from what the author is saying it will diverge and it has diverge, since by the time I'm writing this 15 chapters isn't enough to give me a good review for development in terms of pace. But I like how it is going for now, but I do wish for it to move a bit slow, and I feel like we aren't given enough depth in regards to Aemon and Rhaenyra actions as a whole. It doesn't sounds important, but I feel like it gives more life to our character if we see them hanging out more with friends and their family to see more of that dynamic and background to the story. I hope you do improve on that, but I like how its going so far. Character Design: He has their character designs and I like them so far, I like to imagine the others as their actors in the actual show. Updating Stability: Updates 2 to 4 Chapters a week and is very consistent so far. World Background: Its House of The Dragons, a lot of people wouldn't know the world without reading Fire and Blood or look into the history of House Targaryen. But I believe they know as when reading the title they should have a bit of background in knowing the ASOIAF universe and if not this is a good place to start because what got me into ASOIAF was fanfiction. Conclusion: I really enjoy the story so far, I just wished we had more depth in Aemon and Rhaenyra lives since I feel we skimmed that a lot throughout the story, I would like if you could improve on that. Other than that, I really enjoy it.
this is truly a peak fiction truly i am speechless because i cannot describe my feelings in writing i just hope that the author will not drop this
Keep up the incredible work on this and other stories you write in the future, you definitely have talent as a writer and I wouldn't be surprised if you are recognized for it. I'm your number one fan and I'm so proud of you!!! ^.^ <3
This is super entertaining, I just hope that you give rhaenyra the ability that Dany has like the power to revive the fossilized dragon eggs and the ability to be immune to any fire, you can give a little extra like fire magic or blood magic from Old Valyria as Aemon has a warrior template while rhaenyra has the mage temple. Overall your story is super entertaining I hope you continue writing and not drop this amazing fanfic.
this story is absolutely fantastic it is nearly impossible to find a good story of two main characters love the story please keep doing what you're doing
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Очень интересная история, нравятся главные герои, их необычная связь друг с другом. Вдохновения вам, не торопитесь и радуйте нас своей рукописью.
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One of my new favourites, pls don’t drop it🙏🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊 Also, not gonna lie, if u continue with this it might ruin all house of dragon fics for me. One last thing, a good song would be a thousand years by Boyce Avenue
Супер, очень нравится, надеюсь у вас получится продолжить эту историю, удачи!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
very interesting story, hope you don't drop it pls update XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I do not read any novel less than 50 chapters, So I'm going to add it to my library for now. And until I read it I will give you 5 stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 for no harem
First Arc was amazing second arc already looks strong . I am surprised that it doesn't have 1 million reads. Literally a story with Chinese translation got more read than this. Webnovel is weird!.
Brother/sister where are the chapters of this amazing ff If this was abandoned it's a shame because it was one of the best novels written and was very interesting
This fanfiction is very well-written, with clear stakes, political intrigue and a good main cast. I would recommend to anyone wanting to kill some time, since everything about this story is of high quality.
OMG U GOT ME CRAVING SOME MORE FIRST BOOK LIKE THIS I'VE EVER READ LOVED IT
please more chapters please.............................................................................................................................
Love This Story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ It is really so good. I cried hard when I read about Aemma's death like crazy😭😭 Really really amazing story🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰Good luck. and give us more amazing chapters
i liked how the author followed the canon until a CERTAIN event, and then started to create their own events. I also liked how the 2 main Mc's have their own personalities and weren't op off the bat, and actually had to train for it. Reading it was also pretty easy since i could barley find any misspelt words if not all. i just wished i found this later this month because there would be more chapters.
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Well, I really like this one. At first you have my curiosity now you got my attention. Please keep up your good work Sir thanks. Thanks again
gotta ask author so aemon Targaryen is the reinrcarnator MC since I'm quite confused and gotta give a 4 star since it's quite a good concept
good story featuring reincarnated protag,love how you use the blood of the dragon and connection between dragon and rider
Spoiler de révélation Rien a dire. Tu écris une super bonne fan fiction sur game of throne avec une très bonne intrigues uniques en son genre. Toutes les émotions sont présentes et merci
Sigh ~ I've come here one last time to remind people that I've been warning CONSTANTLY that I'll delete any reviews or comments pertaining to the subjects I've warned about. I don't care about my score, as I don't make any money here; it's just a hobby of mine. This is the last time I'm trying to be civil. I won't even read your comments or reviews anymore if I see what they're about—I’ll just delete them. Go read something else if you don't like it.
tooooooooooooooooop morrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Writing Quality: Very good I liked how the story is proceeding so far, with Aemon (Main Protagonist) who is someone from our world and Rhaenyra who is Aqua from the Oshi No Ko world mix together. it's like a pineapple and pizza, it doesn't sound good but it is pretty good. I like their dynamic and their development as character especially Aemons, he isn't someone perfect, albeit a perfect warrior, but isn't as smart as his sister. I felt like each time the characters appear it makes me want to keep reading due to this. Also I like how you use chatGPT to fix your grammar and not use it to fill up your sentences. Story Development: So far, we are following cannon, but from what the author is saying it will diverge and it has diverge, since by the time I'm writing this 15 chapters isn't enough to give me a good review for development in terms of pace. But I like how it is going for now, but I do wish for it to move a bit slow, and I feel like we aren't given enough depth in regards to Aemon and Rhaenyra actions as a whole. It doesn't sounds important, but I feel like it gives more life to our character if we see them hanging out more with friends and their family to see more of that dynamic and background to the story. I hope you do improve on that, but I like how its going so far. Character Design: He has their character designs and I like them so far, I like to imagine the others as their actors in the actual show. Updating Stability: Updates 2 to 4 Chapters a week and is very consistent so far. World Background: Its House of The Dragons, a lot of people wouldn't know the world without reading Fire and Blood or look into the history of House Targaryen. But I believe they know as when reading the title they should have a bit of background in knowing the ASOIAF universe and if not this is a good place to start because what got me into ASOIAF was fanfiction. Conclusion: I really enjoy the story so far, I just wished we had more depth in Aemon and Rhaenyra lives since I feel we skimmed that a lot throughout the story, I would like if you could improve on that. Other than that, I really enjoy it.
this is truly a peak fiction truly i am speechless because i cannot describe my feelings in writing i just hope that the author will not drop this
Keep up the incredible work on this and other stories you write in the future, you definitely have talent as a writer and I wouldn't be surprised if you are recognized for it. I'm your number one fan and I'm so proud of you!!! ^.^ <3
This is super entertaining, I just hope that you give rhaenyra the ability that Dany has like the power to revive the fossilized dragon eggs and the ability to be immune to any fire, you can give a little extra like fire magic or blood magic from Old Valyria as Aemon has a warrior template while rhaenyra has the mage temple. Overall your story is super entertaining I hope you continue writing and not drop this amazing fanfic.
this story is absolutely fantastic it is nearly impossible to find a good story of two main characters love the story please keep doing what you're doing
Spoiler de révélation Очень интересная история, нравятся главные герои, их необычная связь друг с другом. Вдохновения вам, не торопитесь и радуйте нас своей рукописью.
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One of my new favourites, pls don’t drop it🙏🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊 Also, not gonna lie, if u continue with this it might ruin all house of dragon fics for me. One last thing, a good song would be a thousand years by Boyce Avenue
Супер, очень нравится, надеюсь у вас получится продолжить эту историю, удачи!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
very interesting story, hope you don't drop it pls update XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I do not read any novel less than 50 chapters, So I'm going to add it to my library for now. And until I read it I will give you 5 stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 for no harem
First Arc was amazing second arc already looks strong . I am surprised that it doesn't have 1 million reads. Literally a story with Chinese translation got more read than this. Webnovel is weird!.