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Uma ótima história, apesar de ter palavra floridas, não é incompreensível como outras histórias,é realmente interessante a ideia que vc teve..............
A very interesting book if I do say so myself. The beginning is a bit choppy but you grow into it. The idea is pretty interesting, nothing I have read before. If I have this is certainly better. I would definitely recommend you to read it.
it's a good story to read. However, that's the only thing its enjoyable and likeable. nothing really bad about it, but not like omg amazing or best thing ever. the idea is really good like a dbz super insured I think.
I think we all appreciate your hard working and always trying to make better as well and hope you continue this way in future and we will try to support you in everyway possible, thanks really for your hard work and hope you will be always to keep up and stay strong, safe and healthy, take care
Boy, the writing style kills me every time I want to continue reading the story, it's so overdramatic, a quarter of the story is the story, the rest is just other nonsense.
Three stars for now. Starting to read yet. Just notice the girl in the cover have six fingers each hand. So wanna comment on that. Hahaha haha
To be honest it’s a good story, but the way the MC is, he doesn’t feel like an endless/abstract. At the start he has the pride of one, but as the story goes on, he seems weak. He’s also getting tricked but a SHIELD agent. It just doesn’t make sense. Other than that it’s good.
Author here😎 Just a student who decided to write a fanfic of my own. My brain was killing me with all the possibilities certain event could have ended, how the world would be like if so and so was included. So this is just my way of letting it all out. There will be mistakes, grammar will be near perfect, stability of updates will be a bit choppy since I'm a student and all, Story Development will depend on my imagination, Character design will be up to you to decide, World Background will be the tricky part. I plan on incorporating a bunch of characters from different show and realities but they will all serve a purpose, hopefully. I have great plans for this book and if all goes well, this will be my wonder child, my most notable achievement so bear with me. Thank you for reading😊🫡🫡
Uma ótima história, apesar de ter palavra floridas, não é incompreensível como outras histórias,é realmente interessante a ideia que vc teve..............
A very interesting book if I do say so myself. The beginning is a bit choppy but you grow into it. The idea is pretty interesting, nothing I have read before. If I have this is certainly better. I would definitely recommend you to read it.
it's a good story to read. However, that's the only thing its enjoyable and likeable. nothing really bad about it, but not like omg amazing or best thing ever. the idea is really good like a dbz super insured I think.
I think we all appreciate your hard working and always trying to make better as well and hope you continue this way in future and we will try to support you in everyway possible, thanks really for your hard work and hope you will be always to keep up and stay strong, safe and healthy, take care
Boy, the writing style kills me every time I want to continue reading the story, it's so overdramatic, a quarter of the story is the story, the rest is just other nonsense.
Three stars for now. Starting to read yet. Just notice the girl in the cover have six fingers each hand. So wanna comment on that. Hahaha haha
To be honest it’s a good story, but the way the MC is, he doesn’t feel like an endless/abstract. At the start he has the pride of one, but as the story goes on, he seems weak. He’s also getting tricked but a SHIELD agent. It just doesn’t make sense. Other than that it’s good.
Author here😎 Just a student who decided to write a fanfic of my own. My brain was killing me with all the possibilities certain event could have ended, how the world would be like if so and so was included. So this is just my way of letting it all out. There will be mistakes, grammar will be near perfect, stability of updates will be a bit choppy since I'm a student and all, Story Development will depend on my imagination, Character design will be up to you to decide, World Background will be the tricky part. I plan on incorporating a bunch of characters from different show and realities but they will all serve a purpose, hopefully. I have great plans for this book and if all goes well, this will be my wonder child, my most notable achievement so bear with me. Thank you for reading😊🫡🫡