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This Web novel is Getting better with every chapter can't wait to learn more about the story also the world building is nice and the scale of the world is unlike anything I've ever seen before
keeping his sister aside from the whole world building and power ups it's One of the best fantasy novels.
The translation quality after chapter 200 or so takes a massive nosedive. Names become inconsistent both of characters as well as skills/abilities. It becomes near impossible to keep a solid flow going as at times the mistranslated text is near incomprehensible. The novel itself seems to be great in terms of content but the English translation leaves a LOT to be desired. Going to try and stick through another 100 or so chapters to see if it ever improves but if the quality stays the same for the remaining chapters I will not be able to continue reading
can someone tell me is it me or is the chapter missing at 504 I think there should a chapter about his return from the ancient battlefield and the reaction of his teachers
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It's not a bad story, the characters and the world building is good but I find the MC just too overpowered, the fighting is just boring because he is way too strong. Another thing that turned me off was the translation, it's not consistent so many things have different names in different chapters. I have read about 650 chapters, it was an entertaining journey but it's over for me. Thank you.
translation quality took a nosedive after chapter 210. the story is very good. Although the MC is a bit too much of a simp at times, I'm enjoying this read quite a lot. mostly due to there being dungeons and game elements.
I really enjoyed the work, but honestly, it's been extremely difficult and exhausting to continue reading after chapter two hundred, precisely because the translation often makes the text lose its meaning, or simply adds sentences that don't even seem to be from the work. I sincerely hope that this changes, because I'm really looking forward to reading this work in its entirety, but I'll wait, hoping that they fix this.
I noticed that they are correcting a lot of pages these days. I started reading it recently, and honestly, I'm also very happy with the care they are taking in correcting page by page. About the work, my opinion: Extremely satisfying to see the progress of our Lin. ( By the way, is it possible for me to send a donation to help with the translation of the work?)
Been hooked on this story for the past 2 years and it's always getting better. Also this is the best place to read this story for free as the updates are constant and when there are issues with translation or chapter updates they are resolved quickly.
Very good story. Gets even better once he leaves the small world. Great world building and over 3000 chapters and its still very interesting with 4 chapters released per day. Thanks for translating Toki!
Chapter starts at over 200 episodes can someone please explain how to find the starting point
This is one of the best novels I've read and I keep reading it every day) Everything's great: characters, their lore, storyline, background, main character and complicated backstories. Bravo to the writer and Bravo to the translator)
Soy su fan. Muchas gracias por esforzarse. Ver cómo evolucionar de fan a creador es satisfactorio y un ejemplo a seguir. Terminaré este libro y seguiré con los próximos que tengas. Gracias
Recomendado, lo único malo que tiene, que hay un cambio de nombres (de un capítulo a otro, no recuerdo de cual), pero con compresión lectora se entiende. La traducción es muy buena, nuevamente, recomendado
Muito bom obrigado. Muito obrigado. Muito obrigado.Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado.
Greatest book I ever read. It has everything and the stories scope is just amazing. I would love to see where it leads in the future. There are just too many paths to follow and the world building just incredible.
OP MC and has common sense. Doesn't do stupid things, calm, collected and is able to think things through before doing. 5/5 recommend. Also has a fair few chapters since it's been out a while. translations are active too!
Very good story line, very strong character, regular updates. Overall good novel to read. I read it daily. Thank you. [img=recommend] [img=update]
Nice novel but it keeps me want more new chapters. Please update it everyday, if possible make it 30 to 40 new chapters. I want chapter 3042 right now. If you do so, I will ask my fellow fans reading this novel to read here. Please read this comment and ignore those ignorant fools who disrespect your novel. Have a nice day.
I've been reading this novel since last year and the story just keeps getting better.Can't wait for Lin moyu to meet antares.The updates also regular.Translation is decent
One of the best chinese novel i have ever read. The world building is very good . The story pace differs from time to time,generally it's good. Never feels repetitive,always new content and adventures. Very less plot holes(which is unlikely in chinese novels)and some old characters and things are not forgotten and shown again in new chapters. Overall this is definitely worth your time. Very highly recommend.
Very good... Very satisying... Thanks... Master Lin is angry.. hahaha Waiting for more fighting and leveling episodes 7 wife is waiting lol...
Aunque algo lento el desarrollo de algunos arcos, el desarrollo del personaje principal siempre ha sido constante, desearía más información sobre el avance la hermana del protagonista
I'm rating this low cuz everyone else had rated it high. generic, most edgiest mc i could find. weak female characters who only depends on mc instead of working hard. simp. idk why author wants to show him as righteous when he clearly isn't. never saw mc working hard. he just let his monsters do all the work when he and his girl (with whom he is dating ig?) just sit back and earn free xp. mc is said to be isekaid but never act as a one. just a few chapters and boom now he is one of the strongest. wonder what these 3000+ chapters about. well now that i think about it it's not only mc who is edgy, his every single companion is edgy. the girl I was talking about use to be a fan of a guy and use to like him but cuz now she have mc...... you know what I'm saying. i think Chinese people need a philosopher or something.
This Web novel is Getting better with every chapter can't wait to learn more about the story also the world building is nice and the scale of the world is unlike anything I've ever seen before
keeping his sister aside from the whole world building and power ups it's One of the best fantasy novels.
The translation quality after chapter 200 or so takes a massive nosedive. Names become inconsistent both of characters as well as skills/abilities. It becomes near impossible to keep a solid flow going as at times the mistranslated text is near incomprehensible. The novel itself seems to be great in terms of content but the English translation leaves a LOT to be desired. Going to try and stick through another 100 or so chapters to see if it ever improves but if the quality stays the same for the remaining chapters I will not be able to continue reading
can someone tell me is it me or is the chapter missing at 504 I think there should a chapter about his return from the ancient battlefield and the reaction of his teachers
Spoiler de révélation It's not a bad story, the characters and the world building is good but I find the MC just too overpowered, the fighting is just boring because he is way too strong. Another thing that turned me off was the translation, it's not consistent so many things have different names in different chapters. I have read about 650 chapters, it was an entertaining journey but it's over for me. Thank you.
translation quality took a nosedive after chapter 210. the story is very good. Although the MC is a bit too much of a simp at times, I'm enjoying this read quite a lot. mostly due to there being dungeons and game elements.
I really enjoyed the work, but honestly, it's been extremely difficult and exhausting to continue reading after chapter two hundred, precisely because the translation often makes the text lose its meaning, or simply adds sentences that don't even seem to be from the work. I sincerely hope that this changes, because I'm really looking forward to reading this work in its entirety, but I'll wait, hoping that they fix this.
I noticed that they are correcting a lot of pages these days. I started reading it recently, and honestly, I'm also very happy with the care they are taking in correcting page by page. About the work, my opinion: Extremely satisfying to see the progress of our Lin. ( By the way, is it possible for me to send a donation to help with the translation of the work?)
Been hooked on this story for the past 2 years and it's always getting better. Also this is the best place to read this story for free as the updates are constant and when there are issues with translation or chapter updates they are resolved quickly.
Very good story. Gets even better once he leaves the small world. Great world building and over 3000 chapters and its still very interesting with 4 chapters released per day. Thanks for translating Toki!
Chapter starts at over 200 episodes can someone please explain how to find the starting point
This is one of the best novels I've read and I keep reading it every day) Everything's great: characters, their lore, storyline, background, main character and complicated backstories. Bravo to the writer and Bravo to the translator)
Soy su fan. Muchas gracias por esforzarse. Ver cómo evolucionar de fan a creador es satisfactorio y un ejemplo a seguir. Terminaré este libro y seguiré con los próximos que tengas. Gracias
Recomendado, lo único malo que tiene, que hay un cambio de nombres (de un capítulo a otro, no recuerdo de cual), pero con compresión lectora se entiende. La traducción es muy buena, nuevamente, recomendado
Muito bom obrigado. Muito obrigado. Muito obrigado.Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado. Muito bom obrigado.
Greatest book I ever read. It has everything and the stories scope is just amazing. I would love to see where it leads in the future. There are just too many paths to follow and the world building just incredible.
OP MC and has common sense. Doesn't do stupid things, calm, collected and is able to think things through before doing. 5/5 recommend. Also has a fair few chapters since it's been out a while. translations are active too!
Very good story line, very strong character, regular updates. Overall good novel to read. I read it daily. Thank you. [img=recommend] [img=update]
Nice novel but it keeps me want more new chapters. Please update it everyday, if possible make it 30 to 40 new chapters. I want chapter 3042 right now. If you do so, I will ask my fellow fans reading this novel to read here. Please read this comment and ignore those ignorant fools who disrespect your novel. Have a nice day.
I've been reading this novel since last year and the story just keeps getting better.Can't wait for Lin moyu to meet antares.The updates also regular.Translation is decent
One of the best chinese novel i have ever read. The world building is very good . The story pace differs from time to time,generally it's good. Never feels repetitive,always new content and adventures. Very less plot holes(which is unlikely in chinese novels)and some old characters and things are not forgotten and shown again in new chapters. Overall this is definitely worth your time. Very highly recommend.
Very good... Very satisying... Thanks... Master Lin is angry.. hahaha Waiting for more fighting and leveling episodes 7 wife is waiting lol...
Aunque algo lento el desarrollo de algunos arcos, el desarrollo del personaje principal siempre ha sido constante, desearía más información sobre el avance la hermana del protagonista
I'm rating this low cuz everyone else had rated it high. generic, most edgiest mc i could find. weak female characters who only depends on mc instead of working hard. simp. idk why author wants to show him as righteous when he clearly isn't. never saw mc working hard. he just let his monsters do all the work when he and his girl (with whom he is dating ig?) just sit back and earn free xp. mc is said to be isekaid but never act as a one. just a few chapters and boom now he is one of the strongest. wonder what these 3000+ chapters about. well now that i think about it it's not only mc who is edgy, his every single companion is edgy. the girl I was talking about use to be a fan of a guy and use to like him but cuz now she have mc...... you know what I'm saying. i think Chinese people need a philosopher or something.