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I like this fic, it’s a new concept and has a great plot. My issue with this fic is that it is very slow, i considered author trying to find his bearings and introduce characters, but it’s too slow for my liking. I hope author can pick up the pace in plot.. maybe true time skips or just skipping over certain minor plot because most of the episodes feel like fillers.
It's perfect, great development, I love that Minato doesn't just return with full memories intact, but gradually gets snippets into his previous life
pretty accurate synopsis. bit of a slice of life and slow paced. nice story though. keep it up!
“It’s good, Minato was my favorite character, and creating a Naruto world where Minato doesn’t die is a very good idea. But there’s always a downside… and that’s Minato’s personality in this Fic. Of course, Minato has always been a good person, as shown in the anime itself. But watching and reading are totally different experiences; when reading, you have to pay more attention and imagine. So, when you read about a protagonist who is very altruistic and innocent, from my perspective, it makes the fic a bit disappointing. And about hiding his own power, that’s something I simply hate, especially when the MC just wants to hide because he’s afraid others will think he’s too strong and fear him. That didn’t sit well with me. But for those who like a politically correct MC or a Hero, this fic is for you. The author, in general, did a good job, but the fic is not for everyone.”
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I like this fic, it’s a new concept and has a great plot. My issue with this fic is that it is very slow, i considered author trying to find his bearings and introduce characters, but it’s too slow for my liking. I hope author can pick up the pace in plot.. maybe true time skips or just skipping over certain minor plot because most of the episodes feel like fillers.
It's perfect, great development, I love that Minato doesn't just return with full memories intact, but gradually gets snippets into his previous life
pretty accurate synopsis. bit of a slice of life and slow paced. nice story though. keep it up!
“It’s good, Minato was my favorite character, and creating a Naruto world where Minato doesn’t die is a very good idea. But there’s always a downside… and that’s Minato’s personality in this Fic. Of course, Minato has always been a good person, as shown in the anime itself. But watching and reading are totally different experiences; when reading, you have to pay more attention and imagine. So, when you read about a protagonist who is very altruistic and innocent, from my perspective, it makes the fic a bit disappointing. And about hiding his own power, that’s something I simply hate, especially when the MC just wants to hide because he’s afraid others will think he’s too strong and fear him. That didn’t sit well with me. But for those who like a politically correct MC or a Hero, this fic is for you. The author, in general, did a good job, but the fic is not for everyone.”
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muito bom continua assim