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Sorry, naughty five-star review. By the way, the story is being written and translated by Google translator so there will be some inconsistencies, there's no other way. I could even pay for a good translation app, but this story is just to kill boredom.
Only the writing has some inconsistencies, but as the author said he uses a translator. So it's ok, the story is well written so far and I really liked the comedy about the system. I really like your Supernatural stories.
Only two chapters so far but I liked the story, it's been a long time since I've seen anything comedy style ahahahha. Looking forward to the next chapters
I was only able to say two chapters and even then I couldn't finish the second, as I said in the comments I deserve better than to read something so bad. the only positive point of this story is the universe chosen by The Boys.
Sorry, naughty five-star review. By the way, the story is being written and translated by Google translator so there will be some inconsistencies, there's no other way. I could even pay for a good translation app, but this story is just to kill boredom.
Only the writing has some inconsistencies, but as the author said he uses a translator. So it's ok, the story is well written so far and I really liked the comedy about the system. I really like your Supernatural stories.
Only two chapters so far but I liked the story, it's been a long time since I've seen anything comedy style ahahahha. Looking forward to the next chapters
I was only able to say two chapters and even then I couldn't finish the second, as I said in the comments I deserve better than to read something so bad. the only positive point of this story is the universe chosen by The Boys.