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so many mistakes.......but I still like it, will change the review once I feel like it is fine. (v:)
Although its only been twelve chapters, the author has churned out a good enough story to be read, although perhaps he should use grammarly or something to better the writing even further
i have been keeping an eye on this novel for a while and being a naruto fan i can say this, the novel is good enough,hope the host puts more effort into some fight scenes and the rest is good
Its a good enough novel, and unlike most other system novels, the system doesn't reward its host with powers out of the narutoverse so thats a plus in my books
hey! Author here what you can expect from this novel, Death of Danzo being a promise,lol and a normal to strong mc, multiversal travel, ninja oriented power system
You can push quality over quantity or vice versa but you can't compromise both man. The rest word count.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I won't say it's bad but at the same time I won't say it's good if you have ntg to read just lower your IQ a bit and read this novel
so many mistakes.......but I still like it, will change the review once I feel like it is fine. (v:)
Although its only been twelve chapters, the author has churned out a good enough story to be read, although perhaps he should use grammarly or something to better the writing even further
i have been keeping an eye on this novel for a while and being a naruto fan i can say this, the novel is good enough,hope the host puts more effort into some fight scenes and the rest is good
Its a good enough novel, and unlike most other system novels, the system doesn't reward its host with powers out of the narutoverse so thats a plus in my books
hey! Author here what you can expect from this novel, Death of Danzo being a promise,lol and a normal to strong mc, multiversal travel, ninja oriented power system
You can push quality over quantity or vice versa but you can't compromise both man. The rest word count.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I won't say it's bad but at the same time I won't say it's good if you have ntg to read just lower your IQ a bit and read this novel