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I really like this. Other than the other isekai into novel tropes, this one has an original twist that makes it interesting. I wont leave any spoilers though.
Honestly not a bad novel, mixes cliches along with original troupes quite well. I would, no offense, recommend you polish the grammer used in earlier chapters cause that could easily be off putting for people starting your novel. IMO
I just want to know if there is something interesting I'm in chapter 200 right now because I'm very bored now
Great book haven’t read it yet just want to get my fast pass reward I’m sure it’s great I know writing can be really difficult your doing great
It's well written and worth reading if you like the genre. Not a fan o how MC never claims credit after helping though.
I definitely recommend this novel. It does have a decent amount of cliches but I do love the personalities of the characters and dialogue. This is a great novel to read to relax, you can just keep scrolling and be put in a pleasant mood. I also like the story and world so far but the characters are the biggest reasons why this novel stands out and why I personally love it. Good job author 👍
I am new to Web Novels. I started reading this because of a friend and I have 0 regrets! I have early enjoyed the character development and plot. I check daily for new chapters like an addict. Thanks for the new obsession!
will there be any female lead for us . and if not please try to add at least one .
The overall plot is good so far. If you wanna stay away from senseless harem then it's good but romance is very minimum so far.
author why don't you just make it harem, I mean there are four main female characters Irene, alya, lily, and Ruby. If you look at it both alya and Ruby has the potential to be a female lead and i even root for alya to be a female lead because she's fun. if the novel becomes one main female lead character it will become boring. pls or just make it in between, no harem and no one female lead. and everything about this novel is perfect except the #noharem. and there is a second problem and it is the updating stability you sometimes don't upload. other than those 2 problems this novel has a high potential don't ruin it pls❗️◼️.
the only reason I use this app because of this novel and everyday i check on it. I hope author will be healthy and continues update this novel 😁😁😁
Author I have a question there is c+ so should there not be s+ I’m asking because you said that the last mc had in every stat s and that that is the best?
Yooo.....remind me of novels extra and Especially authors pov, also the Main character name is similar..but still a i honestly like this one
This novel should be up there in the top 5 instead of current place Everything bout this novel is perfect👍👍^_^^_^ .good .good .good .good .good
While there are certainly a few things I didn’t fully understand or that didn’t quite make sense, I’ve definitely enjoyed the story up until now. I’m eagerly looking forward to reading the rest.
The story was a bit touch and go at the beginning, but it go progressively better, especially mcs character and his interaction with other characters. I have only read about 50 chapters so far and would definitely read more.
This story is very good so far. This is light hearted this far but with quality writing and plot .
I really love it. Has similarities to my other favorite novel "The Demon Prince Goes to the Academy" but this one has its own style and it's really beautifully done. Can't wait to read more
Honestly, my new favorite novel since the last one was dropped (Maybe). Please keep it up, and I look forward to always reading. 👍 Strong recommendation! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very beautiful novel, enjoyable events, and the development of beautiful and wonderful characters. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Continue.👍👍
A novel that can only be described as excellent because of the beautiful world building, interesting characters, and the development of a very good main character. Continue writing. I support you.^_^
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As I was reading this story, but I felt like I had already read it somewhere else, which doesn't make sense since this is actually the first time I've read it, that's when I realized that this story is heavily inspired by. I will kill the author, extra novel and tapov, it is also inspired by others that I can't remember right now. Now is that bad? not exactly, but she suffers from the same problem as the others, which is the protagonist, the protagonist is simply empty, has no motivations, or has a great personality, he just wants to follow the script and be a sidekick to the fake protagonist, honestly, that's it. It's very frustrating to read.
pretty good novel just fix some plot holes in the beginning and it'll be so much better also how is there busses and but no cars
Spoiler de révélation
The story is okay at the beginning, but it quickly pick up and gets better later on. When Ren get back to the acedemy, that is when i get hooked. Would definetely recommend.
I really like this. Other than the other isekai into novel tropes, this one has an original twist that makes it interesting. I wont leave any spoilers though.
Honestly not a bad novel, mixes cliches along with original troupes quite well. I would, no offense, recommend you polish the grammer used in earlier chapters cause that could easily be off putting for people starting your novel. IMO
I just want to know if there is something interesting I'm in chapter 200 right now because I'm very bored now
Great book haven’t read it yet just want to get my fast pass reward I’m sure it’s great I know writing can be really difficult your doing great
It's well written and worth reading if you like the genre. Not a fan o how MC never claims credit after helping though.
I definitely recommend this novel. It does have a decent amount of cliches but I do love the personalities of the characters and dialogue. This is a great novel to read to relax, you can just keep scrolling and be put in a pleasant mood. I also like the story and world so far but the characters are the biggest reasons why this novel stands out and why I personally love it. Good job author 👍
I am new to Web Novels. I started reading this because of a friend and I have 0 regrets! I have early enjoyed the character development and plot. I check daily for new chapters like an addict. Thanks for the new obsession!
will there be any female lead for us . and if not please try to add at least one .
The overall plot is good so far. If you wanna stay away from senseless harem then it's good but romance is very minimum so far.
author why don't you just make it harem, I mean there are four main female characters Irene, alya, lily, and Ruby. If you look at it both alya and Ruby has the potential to be a female lead and i even root for alya to be a female lead because she's fun. if the novel becomes one main female lead character it will become boring. pls or just make it in between, no harem and no one female lead. and everything about this novel is perfect except the #noharem. and there is a second problem and it is the updating stability you sometimes don't upload. other than those 2 problems this novel has a high potential don't ruin it pls❗️◼️.
the only reason I use this app because of this novel and everyday i check on it. I hope author will be healthy and continues update this novel 😁😁😁
Author I have a question there is c+ so should there not be s+ I’m asking because you said that the last mc had in every stat s and that that is the best?
Yooo.....remind me of novels extra and Especially authors pov, also the Main character name is similar..but still a i honestly like this one
This novel should be up there in the top 5 instead of current place Everything bout this novel is perfect👍👍^_^^_^ .good .good .good .good .good
While there are certainly a few things I didn’t fully understand or that didn’t quite make sense, I’ve definitely enjoyed the story up until now. I’m eagerly looking forward to reading the rest.
The story was a bit touch and go at the beginning, but it go progressively better, especially mcs character and his interaction with other characters. I have only read about 50 chapters so far and would definitely read more.
This story is very good so far. This is light hearted this far but with quality writing and plot .
I really love it. Has similarities to my other favorite novel "The Demon Prince Goes to the Academy" but this one has its own style and it's really beautifully done. Can't wait to read more
Honestly, my new favorite novel since the last one was dropped (Maybe). Please keep it up, and I look forward to always reading. 👍 Strong recommendation! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very beautiful novel, enjoyable events, and the development of beautiful and wonderful characters. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Continue.👍👍
A novel that can only be described as excellent because of the beautiful world building, interesting characters, and the development of a very good main character. Continue writing. I support you.^_^
goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgood
As I was reading this story, but I felt like I had already read it somewhere else, which doesn't make sense since this is actually the first time I've read it, that's when I realized that this story is heavily inspired by. I will kill the author, extra novel and tapov, it is also inspired by others that I can't remember right now. Now is that bad? not exactly, but she suffers from the same problem as the others, which is the protagonist, the protagonist is simply empty, has no motivations, or has a great personality, he just wants to follow the script and be a sidekick to the fake protagonist, honestly, that's it. It's very frustrating to read.
pretty good novel just fix some plot holes in the beginning and it'll be so much better also how is there busses and but no cars
Spoiler de révélation The story is okay at the beginning, but it quickly pick up and gets better later on. When Ren get back to the acedemy, that is when i get hooked. Would definetely recommend.
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