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Chapitre 21: Fight of Survival (PT. 1) (Edited)

(3rd POV Throne Room)

Inside the throne room of Castle De Martel, there are 20 vampiric guards in dull grey armor split into different groups between the 3 exits of the throne room. They are protecting 4 servants who are currently feeding all the newly turned residents of the Castle their blood. 3 guards are at each exit and the other 11 are standing before the steps of the throne protecting the servants, feeding their blood to 68 newborn vampires. Dressed in everything from the clothes of servants, cooks, guards, and nobles. To make sure they don't kill the servants feeding them or each other.

When the door to the Count and his family's rooms is opened, two female vampires enter the room. The first looks 22. She has strawberry blonde hair, braided in the style of royalty, with steel grey eyes, wearing a red dress fit for a queen. The other looks 27 and has curly red hair resting over her right shoulder, with green-blue eyes. Wearing a green dress that's left side from ankle to mid-thigh is cut open.

The one in green is talking when they enter, stopping only long enough to look around. Then they walk to the throne, towards the back of the room.

"I'm telling you Juliette; something is not right with the way you're acting. Most of the time you, are yourself, and normal, then whenever Erik, says something... You listen to him like it was a commandment from God. What is going on with you? You're a princess, and the sister to the king. What is going on with you?"

Juliette looks at the other women just as they get to the throne. As she sits down, she sighs and says.

"Nothing Sage. It must be your imagination. I can't see what you are talking about.... All I know is, I found the love of my life, and I get eternity with him."

Before Sage could respond, a blur is seen entering through the main doors of the throne room. Stopping in the center of the room was a male vampire with dark brown hair and Forest green eyes, wearing black boiled leather armor. Over his shoulder is the unconscious and bleeding body of another male vampire, with dark brown hair and eyes, in traveling clothes in a brownish-green color. Carved into his forehead is a runic mark, his neck has been torn out. It continues to bleed slowly. As the one in armor unceremoniously dropped the other vampire, before saying, while looking at Juliette,

"Hello Love. I had a nice chat with my brother. Then my other brothers came."

Looking back at the unconscious vampire kicking him in the side he said.

"I don't think Elijah enjoyed our discussion."

As the musical laughter of Juliette was heard. Two other male vampires, with dark brown hair and eyes, appear in blurs. A little away from the one in armor. The first in brown traveling clothes said while looking at Sage,

"Come love, we must leave quickly."

Then the second looked from Elijah on the floor, to the one in armor sadly and said to him.

"I know your emotions are off brother... I just hope you don't regret your decision. See you soon Erik."

Sage nodded to Erik and hugged Juliette. Then all 3 left in a burst of speed. As Erik looked at Juliette and asked,

"So love, I see the rift raft of the castle has finally awoken. This will take me a minute to do."

"Yes my love, I think it will."

Erik then started to use mass compulsion on groups of 13 vampires at a time. While Juliette laughed at his muttering.

"How am I the one stuck doing this?"

Before Erik Compelled the twenty vampires by saying.

"You will lie in wait for Mikael, whenever he comes. You will not leave this room. If you need to feed, you can all vote for who to feed on and become your blood bank... You will not run from Mikael. You will fight to the death and any that survives the fight, will walk out into the sun."

(3rd POV road leading from Castle De Martel)

The road leading to the castle runs against a forest on one side of the road. A male vampire in black traveling clothes with dirty blonde hair and blue-green eyes, appears from a blur right before the forest and looks into it when another blur appears. It's a female vampire wearing a blue dress, with fire-red straight hair, and green eyes, as the female vampire says.

"Klaus, what is it?"

Klaus holds out his hand for silence and says.

"Shhhh Aurora, I thought I heard something."

Just then, another blur is seen crashing into Klaus, showing another female vampire, with blonde hair and bright blue eyes. Wearing a light blue dress, crying hysterically saying.

"Klaus, we...we need to run he's here. Father, is here."

Klaus immediately picked her up saying.

"It's okay Rebekah, let's get out of here. Did you find Lilly?"

Instead of answering... Rebekah, buried her head into Klaus, breaking down in sobs. So Klaus looks at Aurora saying.

"Let us be gone love. We need to get back to the stables, then leave.... quickly."

(Mikael POV)

I pull my head back from the mutt's neck as I watch her desiccate. Just as Jack does the same. We both look at her body as it falls lifelessly to the ground of the forest. She was wearing a yellow dress, but it was her face that caught my attention. It was the daughter of Ansel. The only wolf of his pack to escape me, thanks to Erik getting in the way. I look at Jack, who is wearing brown traveling clothes and a black cloak. The same outfit and colors that I am wearing and I say.

"Let us go. My children should be in the castle. Let us give them a surprise."

We use our supernatural rushing towards the castle in the distance.


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I was going to post the confrontation in Castle De Martel tonight. But but I wanted to try giving a more detailed writing with a 3rd Person view. Let me know if you like it or not if enough people like it I might change the previous chapters to this style of writing.... this type of writing is more like my other fanfiction. (the punctuation will be coming to all the chapters) if you liked the chapter leave me a power stone. have a nice day

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