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Nice book 🔥🔥🔥🔥 Author, I want to discuss something with you that's very important please I'm Nigerian, i don't know how to reach out to you, if with email or Instagram or WhatsApp
It's a good novels , with no errors that stand out. thou since advice for the author, it's wayyy too fast paced and chapters are very short. you could have really spent 2-5 on every development of his story it'll still be faced paced but filled with more detail and depth. there's not much attachment to the mc now as everyone praises him,his parents(after not believing in him in the first few chaps),the fans ,the system ,the coaches ,the world. you've got something with alot of greatness all over it, but it needs more realism ,conversations, depth and length. at this pace he'd become the goat in a few years.
Not a sports fan, clicked out of curiously. Definitely something I can get behind, rooting for Mate!
It's okay, though sometimes I feel like the novel was written by an AI, a few plot holes, and the story just processes too quickly, also doesn't feel like the main character has any actual problems or challenges, as he usually always wins
wow! This book was able to pique my interest, even from the first chapter. Matthew is so unique, I'll feel complete if I have such passion.
I'm still reeling from the fact that I devoured an entire book in one sitting! The author's masterful storytelling and skillful plotting had me hooked from start to finish. The writing was engaging, the characters were well-developed, and the story was utterly addictive. I'm in awe of the author's talent and can't wait to read more of their work!
Author's Shameless Review 😁 Nice story though I promise you'll enjoy it if yo do help promote it ✌🏾 New to writing Support me Please
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You know I don’t wish to come off as a hater but so far iv read up to 10 chapters and all I can say is this book is trash
Nice book 🔥🔥🔥🔥 Author, I want to discuss something with you that's very important please I'm Nigerian, i don't know how to reach out to you, if with email or Instagram or WhatsApp
It's a good novels , with no errors that stand out. thou since advice for the author, it's wayyy too fast paced and chapters are very short. you could have really spent 2-5 on every development of his story it'll still be faced paced but filled with more detail and depth. there's not much attachment to the mc now as everyone praises him,his parents(after not believing in him in the first few chaps),the fans ,the system ,the coaches ,the world. you've got something with alot of greatness all over it, but it needs more realism ,conversations, depth and length. at this pace he'd become the goat in a few years.
Not a sports fan, clicked out of curiously. Definitely something I can get behind, rooting for Mate!
It's okay, though sometimes I feel like the novel was written by an AI, a few plot holes, and the story just processes too quickly, also doesn't feel like the main character has any actual problems or challenges, as he usually always wins
wow! This book was able to pique my interest, even from the first chapter. Matthew is so unique, I'll feel complete if I have such passion.
I'm still reeling from the fact that I devoured an entire book in one sitting! The author's masterful storytelling and skillful plotting had me hooked from start to finish. The writing was engaging, the characters were well-developed, and the story was utterly addictive. I'm in awe of the author's talent and can't wait to read more of their work!
Author's Shameless Review 😁 Nice story though I promise you'll enjoy it if yo do help promote it ✌🏾 New to writing Support me Please
Spoiler de révélation
You know I don’t wish to come off as a hater but so far iv read up to 10 chapters and all I can say is this book is trash