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The story seems good and from the looks of it, the writer has a great way with words, I enjoyed it and looking up for more. good luck author
The author does great work with the characters and the story progression as well as the descriptions. With the past experiences, this should also be another great bager~!
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Shameless Author here to review his own book. You can use this as a Q&A, I try to answer all your questions. I'M still in the process of improving my English, but I hope that my readers will find the story enjoyable.
Is there anything that needs to be said about this banger of a novel? The writing quality, the effort, the writing style! It's all much better than author's other book! That's improvement right there! The action scenes, the drama, the characterisation, the world, Everything is straight up amazing!
the story has a lot of spark. full of mysteries, power and action it gives me thrill to read. thank you author for this gem. good luck
Velstad's new book is off to an amazing start! The world-building is immersive, and the characters feel incredibly real. It's as if they exist beyond the pages. Can't wait for more chapters. Great work, Velstad! Keep it up!
So far so good, interesting characters, interesting world/setting, cool introduction scene. The updates are quite frequent so that doesn't seem to be a problem either!
Great start so far. You can tell the author has laid out a pretty well thought out story. The Mc is likable and the characters don't feel 2-dimensional, which is a big plus for me. The pacing is also okay as we learn more about characters and the world as the story goes on, another big plus in my opinion since I hate info-dumps. Updates are also consistent and no grammatical problems. I highly recommend you try this hidden gem
I have only read the first few chapters but I can tell author has planned everything before hand. Also I noticed the action scenes are fluid in the chapters I have read and Jin's power of lightning or electric current is interesting. I added this to my collection, keep up good work author.[img=update]
Loving the start, Velstad! The world building was well placed, and the characters felt like they're really living beyond the paragraphs! Keep up the good work, and more chapters~!
AUTHOR! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE A BOOK ON YOUR FAVOURITE GENRE... ? FEM****!
Spoiler de révélation The story seems good and from the looks of it, the writer has a great way with words, I enjoyed it and looking up for more. good luck author
The author does great work with the characters and the story progression as well as the descriptions. With the past experiences, this should also be another great bager~!
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Shameless Author here to review his own book. You can use this as a Q&A, I try to answer all your questions. I'M still in the process of improving my English, but I hope that my readers will find the story enjoyable.
Is there anything that needs to be said about this banger of a novel? The writing quality, the effort, the writing style! It's all much better than author's other book! That's improvement right there! The action scenes, the drama, the characterisation, the world, Everything is straight up amazing!
the story has a lot of spark. full of mysteries, power and action it gives me thrill to read. thank you author for this gem. good luck
Velstad's new book is off to an amazing start! The world-building is immersive, and the characters feel incredibly real. It's as if they exist beyond the pages. Can't wait for more chapters. Great work, Velstad! Keep it up!
So far so good, interesting characters, interesting world/setting, cool introduction scene. The updates are quite frequent so that doesn't seem to be a problem either!
Great start so far. You can tell the author has laid out a pretty well thought out story. The Mc is likable and the characters don't feel 2-dimensional, which is a big plus for me. The pacing is also okay as we learn more about characters and the world as the story goes on, another big plus in my opinion since I hate info-dumps. Updates are also consistent and no grammatical problems. I highly recommend you try this hidden gem
I have only read the first few chapters but I can tell author has planned everything before hand. Also I noticed the action scenes are fluid in the chapters I have read and Jin's power of lightning or electric current is interesting. I added this to my collection, keep up good work author.[img=update]
Loving the start, Velstad! The world building was well placed, and the characters felt like they're really living beyond the paragraphs! Keep up the good work, and more chapters~!
AUTHOR! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE A BOOK ON YOUR FAVOURITE GENRE... ? FEM****!
Spoiler de révélation