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Amazing story. Didn't think I would enjoy it this much. These next words are to fill up the word count though. Filler words filler words filler words.
What a rubbish novel, the protagonist is unbearable, annoying and stupid. It is the typical cliché novel where the protagonist hides his power, the worst of all is that I have gone through more than 30 chapters and I still have not seen the protagonist fight. Boring novel, what a waste of time.
I'm confused, Is this a harem? It is okay to me two Raiden waifu but a lot of girl chasing him and it's okay for them to join harem tch. Last chapter i read Qian Renxue confess to him and he didn't refuse nor agree. But my guts telling me it's a harem route.
A história é muito boa, continue. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
The story is good where mc is focused on getting stronger and living his own life rather than ostracising tang san. The story has huge potential if the author keeps posting consistently.
umm i read something similar with this kind of fanfiction in 69shu.pro but this is not a translated chinese fanfic right if so please tell me so that i know it's a different story not a translated one. Thank You :)
This is good, keep it up......................... ..........................................................................................
I can't even describe how happy I am as someone who likes both Soul Land and Genshin Impact. It's a jackpot to find a fic like this, which incorporates elements from both. I recommend you all read it, as there are few mistakes and the characters feel realistic.
This story had great potential but I am starting to dislike the harem as it was that this was a single fl fanfic
Amazing story. Didn't think I would enjoy it this much. These next words are to fill up the word count though. Filler words filler words filler words.
What a rubbish novel, the protagonist is unbearable, annoying and stupid. It is the typical cliché novel where the protagonist hides his power, the worst of all is that I have gone through more than 30 chapters and I still have not seen the protagonist fight. Boring novel, what a waste of time.
I'm confused, Is this a harem? It is okay to me two Raiden waifu but a lot of girl chasing him and it's okay for them to join harem tch. Last chapter i read Qian Renxue confess to him and he didn't refuse nor agree. But my guts telling me it's a harem route.
A história é muito boa, continue. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
The story is good where mc is focused on getting stronger and living his own life rather than ostracising tang san. The story has huge potential if the author keeps posting consistently.
umm i read something similar with this kind of fanfiction in 69shu.pro but this is not a translated chinese fanfic right if so please tell me so that i know it's a different story not a translated one. Thank You :)
This is good, keep it up......................... ..........................................................................................
I can't even describe how happy I am as someone who likes both Soul Land and Genshin Impact. It's a jackpot to find a fic like this, which incorporates elements from both. I recommend you all read it, as there are few mistakes and the characters feel realistic.
This story had great potential but I am starting to dislike the harem as it was that this was a single fl fanfic