001 - What Makes it Hard to Go Home ?

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Auteur: IamReallySalad

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Rei suddenly woke up in Granblue Fantasy and had the appearance and powers of Lucillus.

But he met Djeeta and Vyrn, who helped him adapt to the world there. They then met Lyria, Katalina, and many other people.

They all embarked on an adventure towards Estaulica, the legendary home of the Astrals, where anyone who finds it can have their wishes granted.

But their adventure was not as easy as they thought, and many dangerous events threatened their lives.

However, in the end, they successfully reached Estalucia, and several years had passed.

This time, Rei, who could now control the power of Lucilius, wanted to create a portal to his world so he could bring his fiancées there.

But he realized that it would not be as easy as he had thought.

First World : DxD
Second World : Nasuverse

[This is gonna be Dimensional Travel because Rei gonna try to find his way to his own world]

[Hey there This fanfic is just a side story that I created so maybe i can increase my writing skills, I'm not sure how frequently I'll update this fanfic because I work on it when I have the time.
btw I use AI to correct my grammar, so I apologize if you find any strange text. Please let me know so I can fix it.
Thank you!]

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Bilal_Arshad

My only problem was how author wrote where they keep delaying going back to the portal even though they knew it was going to close I mean hit kokabiel alright, why fight vali, stop for rias, sirchez etc.

5mth 4

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Pantano_87

nice premise and character dialogue, i just hope that he isn't going to be swept by supernatural politics of dxd, and if possible, since it's a dxd FF, chose just good women for the harem (quality>quantity) 👍🏻

6mth 3

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Kingless898

I Love It ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

6mth 2

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Garland

Despite being initially interesting, the story overall suffered from some plotholes, writing and grammar. First of all, the major plothole that came was how initially it was portrayed that Rei couldn't simply go back to Granblue due to the portals closing but then its eventually revealed that he can actually just open it and go. What was the whole point of it then and even the very concept of the title and the story. Him being stuck in a world could have been fine if opening a portal took a lot of energy and he couldn't actually control where it was connected thus giving a valid reason on why he would remain in the current world he is stuck in. Having a problem that actually wasn't a problem and just him being their for reasons just made the story overall confusing. The story itself suffers from the problems in the original story: Rei still being bland and not overall interesting to read. Forced Harem with characters being in different situations in the Canon for the sake of being with Rei such as Grayfia. The whole situation with Saber was good but then suddenly her being with Rei felt so forced. Pacing combined with the plotholes just makes it worst.