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The author is going through some things right now, so it's on hiatus. Stopped at chapter 75 and will come back after he started updating again. The story itself is actually really enjoyable. Characters act like they would in the movies and don't have weird personalities. Solid strength progression as well as keeping the fights funs.
sua escrita é fantastica, você e sua mãe irão supera isso tire um tempo para você, adoro suas historias, em relação o que aconteceu com seu pai não deixe sua mãe sozinha em casa leve ela pra sair, as vezes alguns dias foras do lugar onde você apenas lembra dessa traição pode fazer mal busque apoio da familia amigos e vizinhos
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no es mala pero tampoco es buena, el único problema esque para ser el "estafador" más grande es basten inocente .
If you are actually doing monster house then I thank you from the bottom of my heart
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I just kept cooking bro. What you're doing here is really good so keep cooking, To finish my random writing, know that I like French fries and sweet popcorn.
La historia está buena, y me gusta, también la integración con los personajes es buena y es intrigante, pero se está volviendo un personaje demasiado cliche, no es que no me guste, pero me gustaba más la otra personalidad que tenía, se sentía diferente. Oye, Aladin va a estar en esta historia? Y si es así, puedes hacer que Yasmin sea una de sus chicas? ✌️
i have to change the review , this story started out strong but right now it seems like we are crawling forward , it became boring and incredibly slow
(Review made as of Chapter 88/85 - During The Happening!) I'm not great at writing reviews, all I can say is it's a great fanfic. Starts off pretty good, though not too amazing, and gets better and better as it goes on. The character development is amazing, relationships are fairly realistic, the power progression is pretty balanced - not world hopping from something absurd like Highschool Of The Dead, to Naruto, and back to Demon Slayer as some Fanfics do. In other words, somewhat slow, yet fairly decent growth with the MC not being weak, nor overpowered in any particular world - just right. This is one of my favourite Multiversal Fics, for sure, one that I'd find not tedious, but rather enjoyable re-read, and holds a great deal of potential going forward.
It is seen that he put effort into the work and that is why he fails. The introduction (chapter 20) is very slow, it is summarized in training to obey the system and some talks that are not interesting at all, he obtains the ability to travel between worlds and returns to train again, now being an extra behind the protagonist. . You give a lot of weight to the boring plots and the system, it basically carries the entire plot.
Mark of the Multiversal Idiot more like Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - Awesome Story Development ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay Character Design ⭐ - horrible or negative World Background ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay The more you read the more stupid story gets. At the beginning it was normal but the more you read more it hurts.
I think its a pretty great story, and those reading for the first time would definitely like it. Although in my opinion, I feel like the first story had some things which were better. I’m not that big of a fan of the whole ‘great pretender’ thing as it just feels strange to me. I also liked the character interactions and personalities more in the previous story than this one. I am happy it was rewritten as some of the choices in the previous version were questionable, but I’m torn about which I like more
I think the author is forgetting the backstory of the main character because his personality is moving further and further away from that of the great pretender and turning into a typical beta anime protagonist
The story is very good but after he leaves Moana's world things start to take a turn that I hate, the moment he buys Wilson Fisk's powers it starts to go wrong, it went from 100 to 0 very quickly. I'll wait for it to release about 10 episodes so I can skip this part and see if it improves by then I dropped it
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feels like a remake of the last story with small differences... it could just be a remake without saying it is
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5 stars, that's all I wanted to say. This fanfic contains some slice of life and battles at the same time. And, the thing with templates is also cool because have you ever imagined that a guy would be saying "Wakanda FOREVER!!!" to increase just a certain percent of his template, but not mentioning what does it seem when he says it in front of hyenas, wolfs and so on. Actually, that's hilarious! I thought it would be some ordinary fanfic, but it is more than a fanfic. It is a "GREAT PRETENDER JOURNEY"![img=Feeling it]
umm Author-San i came from your last work and i just notice Leo is pair with Elsa when its Jin who will choose him as the middleman... im confuse. but still 5 star for the best work i and a wonderful author who make's some good stuff.
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What can I say? Only an idiot would not rate his own fanfic for 5 stars whether it is good or not.
The author is going through some things right now, so it's on hiatus. Stopped at chapter 75 and will come back after he started updating again. The story itself is actually really enjoyable. Characters act like they would in the movies and don't have weird personalities. Solid strength progression as well as keeping the fights funs.
sua escrita é fantastica, você e sua mãe irão supera isso tire um tempo para você, adoro suas historias, em relação o que aconteceu com seu pai não deixe sua mãe sozinha em casa leve ela pra sair, as vezes alguns dias foras do lugar onde você apenas lembra dessa traição pode fazer mal busque apoio da familia amigos e vizinhos
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no es mala pero tampoco es buena, el único problema esque para ser el "estafador" más grande es basten inocente .
If you are actually doing monster house then I thank you from the bottom of my heart
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I just kept cooking bro. What you're doing here is really good so keep cooking, To finish my random writing, know that I like French fries and sweet popcorn.
La historia está buena, y me gusta, también la integración con los personajes es buena y es intrigante, pero se está volviendo un personaje demasiado cliche, no es que no me guste, pero me gustaba más la otra personalidad que tenía, se sentía diferente. Oye, Aladin va a estar en esta historia? Y si es así, puedes hacer que Yasmin sea una de sus chicas? ✌️
i have to change the review , this story started out strong but right now it seems like we are crawling forward , it became boring and incredibly slow
(Review made as of Chapter 88/85 - During The Happening!) I'm not great at writing reviews, all I can say is it's a great fanfic. Starts off pretty good, though not too amazing, and gets better and better as it goes on. The character development is amazing, relationships are fairly realistic, the power progression is pretty balanced - not world hopping from something absurd like Highschool Of The Dead, to Naruto, and back to Demon Slayer as some Fanfics do. In other words, somewhat slow, yet fairly decent growth with the MC not being weak, nor overpowered in any particular world - just right. This is one of my favourite Multiversal Fics, for sure, one that I'd find not tedious, but rather enjoyable re-read, and holds a great deal of potential going forward.
It is seen that he put effort into the work and that is why he fails. The introduction (chapter 20) is very slow, it is summarized in training to obey the system and some talks that are not interesting at all, he obtains the ability to travel between worlds and returns to train again, now being an extra behind the protagonist. . You give a lot of weight to the boring plots and the system, it basically carries the entire plot.
Mark of the Multiversal Idiot more like Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - Awesome Story Development ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay Character Design ⭐ - horrible or negative World Background ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay The more you read the more stupid story gets. At the beginning it was normal but the more you read more it hurts.
I think its a pretty great story, and those reading for the first time would definitely like it. Although in my opinion, I feel like the first story had some things which were better. I’m not that big of a fan of the whole ‘great pretender’ thing as it just feels strange to me. I also liked the character interactions and personalities more in the previous story than this one. I am happy it was rewritten as some of the choices in the previous version were questionable, but I’m torn about which I like more
I think the author is forgetting the backstory of the main character because his personality is moving further and further away from that of the great pretender and turning into a typical beta anime protagonist
The story is very good but after he leaves Moana's world things start to take a turn that I hate, the moment he buys Wilson Fisk's powers it starts to go wrong, it went from 100 to 0 very quickly. I'll wait for it to release about 10 episodes so I can skip this part and see if it improves by then I dropped it
Spoiler de révélation Traducir texto con la cámara I gave you many power stones so update [img=recommend]
More Chappter 🔥pls more more more more more more!!! ..........................................................................................................................................................................................
I am giving all my power stones every day Dear Slimesage please give more chapters 🙏 #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou #weliveyou
feels like a remake of the last story with small differences... it could just be a remake without saying it is
For author ❤ 💕 ♥ 💙 💖 💗 ❤ 💕 ♥ 💙 💖 💗 ❤ 💕 ♥ ......................................... Девушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгамиДевушка связанная с книгами
5 stars, that's all I wanted to say. This fanfic contains some slice of life and battles at the same time. And, the thing with templates is also cool because have you ever imagined that a guy would be saying "Wakanda FOREVER!!!" to increase just a certain percent of his template, but not mentioning what does it seem when he says it in front of hyenas, wolfs and so on. Actually, that's hilarious! I thought it would be some ordinary fanfic, but it is more than a fanfic. It is a "GREAT PRETENDER JOURNEY"![img=Feeling it]
umm Author-San i came from your last work and i just notice Leo is pair with Elsa when its Jin who will choose him as the middleman... im confuse. but still 5 star for the best work i and a wonderful author who make's some good stuff.
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
What can I say? Only an idiot would not rate his own fanfic for 5 stars whether it is good or not.