Marvel: X-98 Quantum Spider

LV 3

Dawn_Nexus

This is really a unique work than other fiction, just need to improve the flow of the story

LV 2

GaZe_Zero

Solid 4 star, it’s good and I like the idea but there’s some issues with going into details and character interactions. Still good, just can use some more details and sprucing up with dialogue.

LV 1

Yeshua_

I think the main problem with this story is that most of the characters are terrible, Alice is just a massive pushover, Felicia just makes the story really uncomfortable and shes pushy and gives stalker vibes.

LV 4

Anant_Gupta_1245

Book has been reallllyyy good so far…. Hope author continues and doesn’t drop🙏🙏🙏

LV 4

lNell

It's amazing. I hope you can keep writing