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Translation is done well, story so far is good as well; worth a read. Translation is done well, story so far is good as well; worth a read.
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Pretty decent so far. Keep it going ..............................................................................................................................
Well.... it's just your typical chinese ff. Just take a story (in this case OP), drop the IQ of the characters by a large margin, make them chinese, insert an overpowered character with the mentality of a mostly psychotic and arrogant teenager yet he is still admired by most people and you have it. Of course you often need to change the established rules of said world too (actually I'm surprised, that i have yet to see a chinese ff, where they use Haki for cultivation). But I have to say, this translation is readable, so if you like chinese fanfics go ahead
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Translation is done well, story so far is good as well; worth a read. Translation is done well, story so far is good as well; worth a read.
Spoiler de révélation Pretty decent so far. Keep it going ..............................................................................................................................
Well.... it's just your typical chinese ff. Just take a story (in this case OP), drop the IQ of the characters by a large margin, make them chinese, insert an overpowered character with the mentality of a mostly psychotic and arrogant teenager yet he is still admired by most people and you have it. Of course you often need to change the established rules of said world too (actually I'm surprised, that i have yet to see a chinese ff, where they use Haki for cultivation). But I have to say, this translation is readable, so if you like chinese fanfics go ahead
It's good but needs better translation........
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