Btth: Tie Xiao Xun'er at the beginning and get ten times feedback

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GayBriel

I honestly liked how the author didn't paint Xiao Yan as a villain.

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Venalter

Before I forget I'm gonna write a review here You better fix how to address cultivation level properly and about Techniques level too. I'm know you are using MTL, but please do proof read and fix some words if you do you will get more audience. The best MTL that I know in here is from Kiss Shot with novel called btth simulator

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REFO

trash translation ... the story is GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️

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Cozmic_Dragon

The translation is good enough to understand and read, but at times names are mixed up. This is being Updated pretty often. The story development is a solid 5, it is a very interesting story. Character design is alright, could be improved by spending a little more time on the main side-characters. World background is just btth, so if you know that than you are good to go. All together it is a pretty enjoyable read, and i hope this translator doesn't stop updating this.

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deMiLemnSAdvenTure

put a harem tagggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

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HekAnwdn_

Bem, o que dizer? A tradução É HORROROSA. Ortografia e Gramática INEXISTENTES. O enredo embora forçado, até que é legal. Mas fora isso, muito clichê, o mesmo clichê que todas as outras obras de BTTH. Para completar, o desenvolvimento do personagem fica aquém, os níveis de poder são emaranhados... Leia por conta e risco. OBSERVAÇÃO: Antes de ler, pratique uma técnica, use um tesouro ou tome algum elixir para prevenir desvios de Qi e demônios do coração.

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Madara6116

I just want to know are you going to put romance and harem or are you just going to have mc drag the girls on for along time and then just leave or something

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but please

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deMiLemnSAdvenTure

Put a harem tag [img=disgusted].. ..... ...

Main problem is translation. It kinda varies, from barely readable to bad-mtl level, and considering that it is just that, and mtl that is not even properly proofread, I shouldn't expect too much. Honestly, if that was just tidied up a bit, some grammar here and there, names and cultivation levels, things like that, it would be more or less readable. The plot itself is not original and it is quite predictable. We get typical OP MC who gets everything he wants (if Xiao Yan needs something that MC wants/need then MC gets something better so Xiao Yan can still exist in the background... but here his existance makes some sense with the nature of the system). The system itself makes less sense to me with each story arc, as we get some 'rules' on which it operates, but it still feels too off to me as those rewards sometimes make no sense (like how devouring souls suddenly coincide with being able to see the whole continent from above? And how no one felt power capable of something like that?). Beyond that there is typical harem that gets basically all girls that Xiao Yan would get and then some (at least I think 'then some' from how story gets, but he at least gets Xiao Yan's girls). Basically no struggle for his powers, especially in later chapters, problems that should stump him for at least are just opportunity to show off... overall typical Chinese MC + Cultivation + Reincarnation + Golden Finger combo. Not that bad that you wouldn't be able to read it, but I can't recommend when you had more than 3 hours of sleep or just trying to wait for sleeping pills to finally completely kick in.

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Opposed_god394492

So far, I like this novel. Keep up the good work. And continue to update regularly.

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Saravos

Just the fact of staying low profile makes me puke

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JimmyHD

Good fanfic so far. But is it so hard to not f up the names for the cultivation levels? They get mixed way to much.

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RedX

It's great writing story devolepment has a good pace. Just one complaint for some reason all previous chapters were erased.

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schmitt

Estou adorando. .

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Omarian_Bedward

It’s really good no complaints yet. Keep it up[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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godofdarknees

This is very good I always wait for next part

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Omarian_Bedward

Keep it up. You doing a good job.[img=recommend][img=recommend]