The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]

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joe_caa

the entire story seems too convenient for the mc. The mc has literally faced no setbacks, opposition and struggle. The way he confidently dismisses more powerful people than him is frankly laughably absurd because we all know he ain't that smart and charismatic enough to not get burned by daemon or ruined by his own hubris.

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KK9494

It's a good one, I like it. Trust me in this. I tried to write a HOTD SI fanfic myself, so I can speak with experience this is a good fanfic

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SonDio

This novel might get more attention if it is published in June, but I have little to say about the whole thing. It needs more development and much more kingdom construction but it's coming, good story.

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Bob_Bob_8597

Really good novel to be honest. Pacing is good and the story is new and cool with good grammar. One of the best Game of Thrones fan fictions out there

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ssyffix

Gave me crabs once. 5/5 would crab again

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L0st_3368

Recently re-read the old fanfic because I enjoyed it so much. Really glad your picking it back up.

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RegalObscure

While I personally didn't like this work. I am giving a 5 star just to offset joe_caa abysmal review.

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NyxOuroboros

How the hell could this masterpiece have gone unnoticed? . . .

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Mr_Scrutiny

if you drop this I swear to God I'll find you and kill you one or the other.

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Aniket_Aggarwal

One of the best and most unique HOTD fanfics, its enjoyable to read a non targaryen mc fanfics, please keep updating...

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Luis_Salinas_8936

I can’t wait for the next part to come out

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Darkiling

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pp_pp_pp

i don't usually like asoiaf fanfic but it's pretty good. it's pretty well paced for my taste and the dialogue is interesting, with it being enhanced by the choice of words the author/chatgpt used. my main gripe is the lingo is sometimes a bit too much, and there's some parts that the ai ruined that haven't been edited yet. overall, great use of chatgpt, unlike 90% of the fanfic in this app which just copy paste the content that has been paraphrased by the ai and didn't edit it at all.

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Blighty_1004

It's fantastic to see this story back again!! I am happy to see the use of a underutilised house, will we see the MC venturing to Essos at all? Keep up the good work!!

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Theghost_

Welcome back bro. Read your fic like 5 times and don’t forget to make him learn sword fighting🤌

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Aria_sakti

awesome story, love the MC, love the realistic timeline, love the fast Pace, absolutely amazing story

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SUPER_BOY

this story so far is great overall this is a great house of the dragon fan fic keep it up i love the characters and i can't wait to see your take on the dance and how the celtigar fit in the dance than the original one in fire and blood keep it up.

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YorzaKaril

I LOVE this fanfic! It has the potential to become one of the best ASOIAF fanfics on this app. I had doubts when I saw it but reading it (as of 16 chapters), that doubt is so far gone, a black hole has sucked it up.

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Jerman_R_5720

Update your book I want more ch on attack titan of game thrones