MMORPG: Evolver of Primordials

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Champsing

Yo, good to see you all. This is an initial review after writing 50 chapters to give everyone some idea about what is inside the book. Here’s what you can expect: (It is going to be long and will include the current 50 chapters along with how it's going to progress after that.) ### Introduction The novel starts with reincarnation into a universal-scale RPG game, full of action with slow build-ups that introduce the game mechanics and concepts spread throughout the narrative. One thing that separates the novel is player integration in the game world. Every player here is a ruler who can develop and evolve one species to their liking. All I can say here is that in the initial 50 chapters, you will find a lot of interesting concepts inside and outside the game. ### Character Development While the initial chapters focus heavily on the main character, many side characters are introduced. In the initial phase, there was little focus on them, but that is going to change with time as all the introduced characters will have their stuff that will unravel slowly. ### Game Mechanisms There will be three ways to progress. Although it might seem slow if you focus on just one path, there’s a lot of development happening across the game world, Space Village, and the outside world. If you look across all three things, a lot of development happens in all three ways. It is just that some people prefer fast development in one way. (You can read a few chapters to get an understanding of things.) [Note that in the initial chapters, the outside world gets less attention, and more focus would be on the game world and space village.] ### Pacing: The pacing of the story fluctuates, starting fast and then slowing down to develop the setting before picking up again. I will try to maintain a middle pace in the novel. ### Most important progression: I do not know if people will prefer it, but in this story, the progress would be scattered bits. What I mean is: Imagine Mc doing an important long quest in the game world. Now, this quest could take days, but here, the story won’t be focused on the quest alone. So along with the quest, there would be trouble going into the outside world, and some kind of experimentation would happen in Space Village. So far, the plan is to show a bit of progress in each direction. It can be annoying for some, but when things start to merge, it will give a grand feeling for the major events in the novel. (All I can promise is that the big events in the novel get elevated by this approach, as it would be a combination of all three progressions.) ### Stability: Many who joined me before 50 may be angry with the slow chapter release, but after 50 chapters, I plan to maintain a consistent update schedule. Important: I won’t lock the novel until I reach chapter 100. Early readers can enjoy up to 100 chapters before deciding if they want to continue. For those who join later, there will still be plenty of free chapters to get a feel for the story. ### Reader Expectations I hope to provide a unique reading experience. The scattered progression can initially seem challenging, but it ultimately leads to a grand and thrilling culmination of events. –> Feel free to use this review to ask any questions you have about the novel. Thank you for joining me on this journey. Enjoy the read!

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DaoistnlZ5H9

I LIKE IT .....................................................................................................................................................

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Luca_Zimmer

I really like the story, but i think the story development a bit to slow.

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black_dark2

A story with great potential, I just hope it doesn't get canceled. ًًٌٌٍٍٍٍُُُِِِّْ ًًٌٌٍٍٍٍُُُِِِّْ ًًٌٌٍٍٍٍُُُِِِّْ ًًٌٌٍٍٍٍُُُِِِّْ ًًٌٌٍٍٍٍُُُِِِّْ