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Previously, a week ago, i contacted the online service to inform that the author/editor of the novel “Becoming a Son-in-Law to establish an Immortal Familly“ kept making translation error. He/She still confuse a Core Formation True Immortal to a Nascent Soul True Lord, they kept writting Nascent Soul True Immortal instead of Core Formation True Immortal. This mistake has been common ever since the introduction of Core Formation Taiyin True Immortal when she rap#d mc. Except for this translation error that now make the reading annoying the rest is quite good
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Clan leader my strength equals to the clan is much better...This one it feels too superficial and the MC gets stronger with more wives, and children. But they also added a whole how some arent able to cultivate, and how having kids hurts cultivation , life essence etc...I mean MC is adding women left right everywhere becoming indifferent to feelings or emotions...I mean just feels like some animal who is just breeding kids constantly and its not so interesting at all and too repetitive. Plus MC is a little wimpy sometimes...
It is a masterful blend of intrigue and cultivation. Lu Changsheng’s journey from overlooked youth to an immortal patriarch is both compelling and immersive. The novel's rich world-building and unique Multitude Progeny System create a fresh take on the genre. As Lu Changsheng navigates family dynamics and cultivates his legacy, the story weaves an epic saga of resilience and ambition. Fans of "The Patriarch is Taking Concubine Again" will find this novel equally captivating, with its engaging plot and well-developed characters. Highly recommended for lovers of immortal cultivation tales!
Overall, I like this story. Not fully 5/5 star because there are problem with sentence structures and name. Firstly, the sentence structure is somewhat separated due to line by line structure which is not a problem to other but to me, it is seems imcompleted due a whole sentence separated into different sentences. And secondly, the name has some problem on title and name structure. I saw some name like Lu daoist, Lu brother and other similar structures give me mind hemorrhoids. Please fix it into this format for english speaking audiences: title(daoist, elder, etc) then name.
Nice slice of life, slow grind to immortality. Not the book to read if you are expecting a ton of action, I’m at chapter 73 and I believe there has only been two fights. One where he was ambushed and saved before he even entered qi refining and one where robbers attack him. He’s just a man seeking to spread his lineage and grow stronger as a result. Slow snow ball build. I just wish the chapters were longer or more each day as the slow pace of the story is made slower by the amount released. Hardly any translation errors, I think there have only been a few pronoun mix ups.
Am enjoying the story line so far, l would like more time to read since I find it interesting book.
It’s not a bad novel. The pace of this story is very slow if you consider the advance in time related to his abilities. Only some of his wives so far have been described by the looks, saying very beautiful is not getting 5 stars for character design. There hasn’t been anything about the world description outside of his home, landmass wise. The grammar is very good, the best part so far. All 3 rewards are dumb at his current level. Talisman making is Op but he has to level up his cultivation to use it to the max. Which he has very slow cultivation it’ll take a decade at least to get there maybe 100 years. Beauty refinement technique, useless. The talisman is powerful but is also requires higher cultivation, yes it can be used but at 10% power.
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Previously, a week ago, i contacted the online service to inform that the author/editor of the novel “Becoming a Son-in-Law to establish an Immortal Familly“ kept making translation error. He/She still confuse a Core Formation True Immortal to a Nascent Soul True Lord, they kept writting Nascent Soul True Immortal instead of Core Formation True Immortal. This mistake has been common ever since the introduction of Core Formation Taiyin True Immortal when she rap#d mc. Except for this translation error that now make the reading annoying the rest is quite good
Spoiler de révélation Clan leader my strength equals to the clan is much better...This one it feels too superficial and the MC gets stronger with more wives, and children. But they also added a whole how some arent able to cultivate, and how having kids hurts cultivation , life essence etc...I mean MC is adding women left right everywhere becoming indifferent to feelings or emotions...I mean just feels like some animal who is just breeding kids constantly and its not so interesting at all and too repetitive. Plus MC is a little wimpy sometimes...
It is a masterful blend of intrigue and cultivation. Lu Changsheng’s journey from overlooked youth to an immortal patriarch is both compelling and immersive. The novel's rich world-building and unique Multitude Progeny System create a fresh take on the genre. As Lu Changsheng navigates family dynamics and cultivates his legacy, the story weaves an epic saga of resilience and ambition. Fans of "The Patriarch is Taking Concubine Again" will find this novel equally captivating, with its engaging plot and well-developed characters. Highly recommended for lovers of immortal cultivation tales!
Overall, I like this story. Not fully 5/5 star because there are problem with sentence structures and name. Firstly, the sentence structure is somewhat separated due to line by line structure which is not a problem to other but to me, it is seems imcompleted due a whole sentence separated into different sentences. And secondly, the name has some problem on title and name structure. I saw some name like Lu daoist, Lu brother and other similar structures give me mind hemorrhoids. Please fix it into this format for english speaking audiences: title(daoist, elder, etc) then name.
Nice slice of life, slow grind to immortality. Not the book to read if you are expecting a ton of action, I’m at chapter 73 and I believe there has only been two fights. One where he was ambushed and saved before he even entered qi refining and one where robbers attack him. He’s just a man seeking to spread his lineage and grow stronger as a result. Slow snow ball build. I just wish the chapters were longer or more each day as the slow pace of the story is made slower by the amount released. Hardly any translation errors, I think there have only been a few pronoun mix ups.
Am enjoying the story line so far, l would like more time to read since I find it interesting book.
It’s not a bad novel. The pace of this story is very slow if you consider the advance in time related to his abilities. Only some of his wives so far have been described by the looks, saying very beautiful is not getting 5 stars for character design. There hasn’t been anything about the world description outside of his home, landmass wise. The grammar is very good, the best part so far. All 3 rewards are dumb at his current level. Talisman making is Op but he has to level up his cultivation to use it to the max. Which he has very slow cultivation it’ll take a decade at least to get there maybe 100 years. Beauty refinement technique, useless. The talisman is powerful but is also requires higher cultivation, yes it can be used but at 10% power.
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Pretty good. Keep up the good work.......