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I got bored of the first arc and thought i would skip to the next one..... but the first arc is waaaaaaaaaaaaay too long and the next doesnt even start immediately. Too much noise in this fanfic not enough fun for me.
if I have to say anything about this story in one line then i say that it is legendary. there is much book like is kind of plot in all web novel. I wait for update every week . it is one of my favorite book in web novel . please don't drop off this book 🙏🙏🙏 please
Practically a copy of "A Cliche Multiverse Story" at the start, but worse. I don't know about anything more because I stopped reading after finding the interactions shallow.
Very good, although I don't like the protagonist's jokes that much, otherwise it's good 👍
i can describe this fic with two words: child fantasy. and like all others children fantasies it have: - hollow characters - absolutely bland mc - a lot of illogical actions
Everything is going too fast. You don't even have time to enjoy the fanfiction .. . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . .. . . ..
la historia tiene buen potencial tiene buen desarrollo lo recomiendo es graciosa la historia te puede entretener mucho tiene buena acción también el autor le pone imágenes para ver mejor la historia 😉👌
a great story. I do feel cheated, though. I saw at the end of every chapter that I could join his pateron for 3$, assuming I would get the 60~ extra chapters only to find out that the 3$ tier I only six chapters and that I need to pay 25$ for all of them.. 🥲
22 chapters, or something like this. Start was a mindless cliche, but that's just how webnovel are... But after this was something unexpected! A weirdly realistic and unnecessary "funny" overlord story... Nope, not from the start of the series, where mamonga gets to a new world. But from playing a game... Which doesn't operate like a game at all. Somehow, one guy could take a raid boss, newly one, means he didn't overleveled them. It's called a "WOLRD ENEMY" not just for show. Which online game works like this? I just don't know... I'm not intrested in Sao level of playing a game in the novel. The stakes are null, how is this supposed to be interesting? Oh, right... We got a clown on a main character. Truly, those npc would appreciate you sense of humor. ... You get my point, it's just that's useless and unbelievable.
Good fanfic in my opinion, but need more adjustments with power ranking, or maybe i need to read more?
author too freaky . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
fue una buena lectura, pero la personalidad del protagonista no me gusta, hace tantas referencia y chistes que luego empezaron a volverse aburridos. Las interacciones con los otros personajes fue entretenida, pero sus decisiones son demasiado aleatorias, no parece tener un gran plan o no parece tenerlo, talvez sea por la gran cantidad de comedia. No fue tanto de mi agrado. 3☆ Diseño personaje 4☆ Todo lo demás
[certain dragon god slide to your stream] BEHOLD!! this proud dragon approve. the story is good. 9/10 it would be 10/10 if first multiverse travel world aren't DXD. i mean DXD is overused (the 3rd DXD novel with overlord I read this week) I'm kinda waiting what next world is. umu! good job author! (p.s this proud dragon only reviews good fan fiction)
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Okay, the beginning was so-so, but it got better with the chapters. I like MC's personality. The interactions with the guild members were fun, which made me a little uncomfortable when they just disappeared. And now the chapters are getting shorter and lacking in content...
it's a pretty good read and the progress speed is also good I'm looking forward to the future updates
it's really good but i really want to see the new world, for me it hasn't really started, it just introduced the characters and their background (in my opinion)
well there is quite a few mistakes like things being mentioned that we're actually never mentioned but even though the MC says they were mentioned even though they weren't and it's a Pokemon harem not my cup of tea
10/10 le tengo muchas expectativas, espero que puedas terminar ya que muchos escritores siempre lo dejan a la mitad, igualmente se los entiende tienen una vida
Good start and good potential only thing I don't like to much is the story being a bit heavy on the comedy aspect. Every sentence has a comedic comparison in it even while he is fighting. The unseriousness of the mc just doesn't make me feel like he is a vampire god just feels like a cocky jokester.
I got bored of the first arc and thought i would skip to the next one..... but the first arc is waaaaaaaaaaaaay too long and the next doesnt even start immediately. Too much noise in this fanfic not enough fun for me.
if I have to say anything about this story in one line then i say that it is legendary. there is much book like is kind of plot in all web novel. I wait for update every week . it is one of my favorite book in web novel . please don't drop off this book 🙏🙏🙏 please
Practically a copy of "A Cliche Multiverse Story" at the start, but worse. I don't know about anything more because I stopped reading after finding the interactions shallow.
Very good, although I don't like the protagonist's jokes that much, otherwise it's good 👍
i can describe this fic with two words: child fantasy. and like all others children fantasies it have: - hollow characters - absolutely bland mc - a lot of illogical actions
Everything is going too fast. You don't even have time to enjoy the fanfiction .. . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . .. . . ..
la historia tiene buen potencial tiene buen desarrollo lo recomiendo es graciosa la historia te puede entretener mucho tiene buena acción también el autor le pone imágenes para ver mejor la historia 😉👌
a great story. I do feel cheated, though. I saw at the end of every chapter that I could join his pateron for 3$, assuming I would get the 60~ extra chapters only to find out that the 3$ tier I only six chapters and that I need to pay 25$ for all of them.. 🥲
22 chapters, or something like this. Start was a mindless cliche, but that's just how webnovel are... But after this was something unexpected! A weirdly realistic and unnecessary "funny" overlord story... Nope, not from the start of the series, where mamonga gets to a new world. But from playing a game... Which doesn't operate like a game at all. Somehow, one guy could take a raid boss, newly one, means he didn't overleveled them. It's called a "WOLRD ENEMY" not just for show. Which online game works like this? I just don't know... I'm not intrested in Sao level of playing a game in the novel. The stakes are null, how is this supposed to be interesting? Oh, right... We got a clown on a main character. Truly, those npc would appreciate you sense of humor. ... You get my point, it's just that's useless and unbelievable.
Good fanfic in my opinion, but need more adjustments with power ranking, or maybe i need to read more?
author too freaky . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
fue una buena lectura, pero la personalidad del protagonista no me gusta, hace tantas referencia y chistes que luego empezaron a volverse aburridos. Las interacciones con los otros personajes fue entretenida, pero sus decisiones son demasiado aleatorias, no parece tener un gran plan o no parece tenerlo, talvez sea por la gran cantidad de comedia. No fue tanto de mi agrado. 3☆ Diseño personaje 4☆ Todo lo demás
[certain dragon god slide to your stream] BEHOLD!! this proud dragon approve. the story is good. 9/10 it would be 10/10 if first multiverse travel world aren't DXD. i mean DXD is overused (the 3rd DXD novel with overlord I read this week) I'm kinda waiting what next world is. umu! good job author! (p.s this proud dragon only reviews good fan fiction)
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Spoiler de révélation Okay, the beginning was so-so, but it got better with the chapters. I like MC's personality. The interactions with the guild members were fun, which made me a little uncomfortable when they just disappeared. And now the chapters are getting shorter and lacking in content...
it's a pretty good read and the progress speed is also good I'm looking forward to the future updates
it's really good but i really want to see the new world, for me it hasn't really started, it just introduced the characters and their background (in my opinion)
well there is quite a few mistakes like things being mentioned that we're actually never mentioned but even though the MC says they were mentioned even though they weren't and it's a Pokemon harem not my cup of tea
10/10 le tengo muchas expectativas, espero que puedas terminar ya que muchos escritores siempre lo dejan a la mitad, igualmente se los entiende tienen una vida
Good start and good potential only thing I don't like to much is the story being a bit heavy on the comedy aspect. Every sentence has a comedic comparison in it even while he is fighting. The unseriousness of the mc just doesn't make me feel like he is a vampire god just feels like a cocky jokester.
cringe as fuck. the story makes no sense. a lot of contradictions