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Low updates and some grammatical errors. Overall, it's a good novel with a good writing style.
A very good novel, with a good world background. I hope the author could keep updating and maintain the writing style. Its a good novel so far and i wish the author the best of luck.
it's a mess. The story keeps jumping from one thing to the next without proper explanation or any description of details, where it begins and no details provide to time skips. its very dificult to engage with the story. just like reading a summary, no emotions attachment.
The jumping around and rushing is this novel is leaving me confused and wondering why the world endings didn’t have a wrap up. Also, I like to use the audio feature but the way that the system text is formatted, the audio skips it completely which defeats the purpose of listening to the story. The story plot is interesting but the delivery of it needs some help. That being said, I will continue to read the story since the plot itself is interesting.
A whole new type of novel with a system with both mother / son benefitting. I like that she’s competent in combat and has a space to hide in dangerous circumstances . Good read.
This is a well crafted long story have ever read and I will say the starting is good and also the finishing is perfect......👌........😃........✌
The story has an interesting start, but there are many name and spelling/ grammar mistakes that make reading difficult. There a few scene changes that don't have any continuity so not sure what is happening in the story. If those details are sorted, I'm sure this would be a fun read.
Writing Quality: Minor mistakes, tolerable. Story Development: The arcs are fast-paced and there 's nothing wrong with that but, it's not seamlessly done. Nevertheless, you can still understand the story. The plot is promising. Character Design: There are inconsistencies with the characters, especially the protagonist. 1) She was a world class assassin but she's easily started. She's also easily embarrassed. There 's also the fact that she always brushes something off her mind, though it can still pass off as thinking of what's more important. Still, I don't think it matches her background. I forgot the other things. 2)For the side characters, I would've liked it more if they'd have a character development. Flat characters are fine if not everyone is flat. However, it seems that only those "good" people would have round characters. 3) Unreasonable characters are also fine but, don't make everyone unreasonable. There's always that one person in a group but a group can't survive if everyone is like that. 4) I think that's it, or maybe I forgot. Updating Stability: I don't know. World Background: It's being built as she goes back to the space.
Overall, great story! The English is a little rough to read, but not bad enough to stop reading. It’s a good thing the plot gripped me from the beginning because I wasn’t able to tell it was a multiple transmigration novel until the 3rd life, and I L.O.V.E. multiple transmigration novels! My only complaint is that the author could elevate this story a hundred fold by just flushing out the characters’ and worlds’ settings more.
The writing is well articulated And the story, world background and character design are top notch Indeed this is the work of someone who's brilliant. I will give you five Stars Because is worth
Nice book here the first 3 chapters are extremely dope, I'm wondering where you got the idea from? Anyways, I'll keep on reading so please keep on updating
Good work Author, I can see the solid improvement. I hope you can keep up the pace.
A good work..... Different genres and different twist. If you ignore some Grammatical errors which are not really noticeable, and read up to the later chapters, you would love the book.
Love the work. ....... The book that made me come on Webnovel couldn't find it and rather found this. This could keep me busy. I hope to get more from you author.
More grease to your elbow or more so fingers to type more chapters for me to read 😊😊
Shameless author here to give her book a five star review 😁. Do add to your library, share with your friends and support me with power stones, golden ticket, coins, gifts etc ☺️😉
Low updates and some grammatical errors. Overall, it's a good novel with a good writing style.
A very good novel, with a good world background. I hope the author could keep updating and maintain the writing style. Its a good novel so far and i wish the author the best of luck.
it's a mess. The story keeps jumping from one thing to the next without proper explanation or any description of details, where it begins and no details provide to time skips. its very dificult to engage with the story. just like reading a summary, no emotions attachment.
The jumping around and rushing is this novel is leaving me confused and wondering why the world endings didn’t have a wrap up. Also, I like to use the audio feature but the way that the system text is formatted, the audio skips it completely which defeats the purpose of listening to the story. The story plot is interesting but the delivery of it needs some help. That being said, I will continue to read the story since the plot itself is interesting.
A whole new type of novel with a system with both mother / son benefitting. I like that she’s competent in combat and has a space to hide in dangerous circumstances . Good read.
This is a well crafted long story have ever read and I will say the starting is good and also the finishing is perfect......👌........😃........✌
The story has an interesting start, but there are many name and spelling/ grammar mistakes that make reading difficult. There a few scene changes that don't have any continuity so not sure what is happening in the story. If those details are sorted, I'm sure this would be a fun read.
Writing Quality: Minor mistakes, tolerable. Story Development: The arcs are fast-paced and there 's nothing wrong with that but, it's not seamlessly done. Nevertheless, you can still understand the story. The plot is promising. Character Design: There are inconsistencies with the characters, especially the protagonist. 1) She was a world class assassin but she's easily started. She's also easily embarrassed. There 's also the fact that she always brushes something off her mind, though it can still pass off as thinking of what's more important. Still, I don't think it matches her background. I forgot the other things. 2)For the side characters, I would've liked it more if they'd have a character development. Flat characters are fine if not everyone is flat. However, it seems that only those "good" people would have round characters. 3) Unreasonable characters are also fine but, don't make everyone unreasonable. There's always that one person in a group but a group can't survive if everyone is like that. 4) I think that's it, or maybe I forgot. Updating Stability: I don't know. World Background: It's being built as she goes back to the space.
Overall, great story! The English is a little rough to read, but not bad enough to stop reading. It’s a good thing the plot gripped me from the beginning because I wasn’t able to tell it was a multiple transmigration novel until the 3rd life, and I L.O.V.E. multiple transmigration novels! My only complaint is that the author could elevate this story a hundred fold by just flushing out the characters’ and worlds’ settings more.
The writing is well articulated And the story, world background and character design are top notch Indeed this is the work of someone who's brilliant. I will give you five Stars Because is worth
Nice book here the first 3 chapters are extremely dope, I'm wondering where you got the idea from? Anyways, I'll keep on reading so please keep on updating
Good work Author, I can see the solid improvement. I hope you can keep up the pace.
A good work..... Different genres and different twist. If you ignore some Grammatical errors which are not really noticeable, and read up to the later chapters, you would love the book.
Love the work. ....... The book that made me come on Webnovel couldn't find it and rather found this. This could keep me busy. I hope to get more from you author.
More grease to your elbow or more so fingers to type more chapters for me to read 😊😊
Shameless author here to give her book a five star review 😁. Do add to your library, share with your friends and support me with power stones, golden ticket, coins, gifts etc ☺️😉