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This is a good translation that has pretty good grammer and only says weird things sometimes with a villain main character that kinda just does what he wants how he wants.
Question:: Will Mc take WB devil fruit or any other devil fruit as his second fruit. BTW Loved your fanfic!!! continue your work.........................
You should expand your pirate crew and It's seriously a good story, those who comment negatively are the ones who don't know how to appreciate beauty. Ctrl+c / ctrl+v It's seriously a nice story, those who comment negatively are the ones who don't know how to appreciate beauty.
don't listen to those idiots who don't understand the real art(I have already read up to the 100 chapter in MTL version which i stop because of reasons)for real tho the story actually go on a very stable route with the characters and what not so keep up the good work my dude[img=Feeling it]
I'm glad I came across this piece, I have to admit the beginning is a little confusing. But please give it a chance. Because it's worth it. What I like is the MC and also the background of the world. Another plus I can point out is that the author does not waste the readers’ time on nonsense, thank you for that.
although the beginning is a bit like a knife because there is no character development, the story holds together and is pleasant to read, if you ignore careful writing
story with an MC who is too strong quickly for nothing, he has no development of the character who although reincarnated, kills easily and is evil without any explanation. those who continue are fans of fast food (you need it) but it's not for me
At one point the mc says " If you like treasure, grab it, if you like a woman, go get her, and if you meet an enemy, kill it". This pretty much describes his character and if you are okay with that then this is pretty good, especially for a translation. Translations is like a 8.5/10
This is a good translation that has pretty good grammer and only says weird things sometimes with a villain main character that kinda just does what he wants how he wants.
Question:: Will Mc take WB devil fruit or any other devil fruit as his second fruit. BTW Loved your fanfic!!! continue your work.........................
You should expand your pirate crew and It's seriously a good story, those who comment negatively are the ones who don't know how to appreciate beauty. Ctrl+c / ctrl+v It's seriously a nice story, those who comment negatively are the ones who don't know how to appreciate beauty.
don't listen to those idiots who don't understand the real art(I have already read up to the 100 chapter in MTL version which i stop because of reasons)for real tho the story actually go on a very stable route with the characters and what not so keep up the good work my dude[img=Feeling it]
I'm glad I came across this piece, I have to admit the beginning is a little confusing. But please give it a chance. Because it's worth it. What I like is the MC and also the background of the world. Another plus I can point out is that the author does not waste the readers’ time on nonsense, thank you for that.
although the beginning is a bit like a knife because there is no character development, the story holds together and is pleasant to read, if you ignore careful writing
story with an MC who is too strong quickly for nothing, he has no development of the character who although reincarnated, kills easily and is evil without any explanation. those who continue are fans of fast food (you need it) but it's not for me
At one point the mc says " If you like treasure, grab it, if you like a woman, go get her, and if you meet an enemy, kill it". This pretty much describes his character and if you are okay with that then this is pretty good, especially for a translation. Translations is like a 8.5/10