White-Haired Template System

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Mikey_3214

He gets a template from another whole universe and he just starts awaking random humans who want revenge 😐 trash 🚮

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Sakuta_01003

Give him the 'One-Winged Angel Sefirot' Template.........................................................................................................

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GOD_001

The first episode was so bad I couldn't finish it. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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Emerald_Knight_1388

Ok I just wanted to know what time I can work out the door for the bus driver to get my car fixed so we could do that and I don’t think you would have a good time at all today but I don’t know how long you are there for me up today if I can work 👌

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waszi

what is it with these stories it is always devil slave of rias or human suprematist. there are so many different races who you could use as character, most of them underused, fallen, youkai (there is almost no catboys/foxboys in stories), explore different angle.

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JackalVadim

Очень интересная идея для истории. С нетерпением жду продолжения. Хочу увидеть как семья мафии занимает свое место в сверхъестественном мире. Спасибо автору за труд!

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Kukukuku

Solid, good action, have high potential, hope the author can improved this novel to his best

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Crus_reads

I didn't like the loopholes in chapter 27, but I'm too lazy to explain. If someone wants to know what it is just go and check that chapter's comments

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Lordmoonlight

Tbh it’s an ok fic first couple chapters or rough but got a little better but then from the yokai came in the story when down hill n they just came to scene so you can see the little faith im having rn I just want to know why did you give her the flame it shouldn’t have been so easy

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Wail_Oualid

I wonder what the next template would be if we go for power or op character we have accelerator(to aru) gojo satoru(jjk) karna(fate) for versality and experience we have kakashi hatake(naruto) shiro emiya counter guardian, merlin(fate) prety much all the counter guardian from fate have white hair other usefull characters that can realy help are kilua(HxH) he can use nen and he can teach his men and friend about nen Allen walker(D Gray man) with his arc and as the 14th noa he have a whole dimension for his faction and he can teleport to every city or other dimension if he alreadys know about their wherabout and also it would be a good way to see how the innocence respond to dark creature like vampire and devil we also have toshiro hitsugaya, gin, jushiro ukitake and hollow ichigo(bleach) for reiatsu and zanpakuto, usui tengen and sanemi(demon slayer) breathing style, inuyasha, seshomaru(inuyasha) we also have Near(death note) his brain like shiro from no game no life we also have ken kaneki(Tokyo ghoul) undertaker(Black butler) elfman, acnologia (fairy tail) magic, armakan amun-ra (magi) djinn equip and magoi king(one piece) garou (one punch man). If we go with womman we have yamato(one piece) haki and devil fruit kaguya(naruto) myrajain, lisana,sorano,yukino(fairy tail) najenda(akame ga kill) reiko yanagi, mirko, eri (MHA) that prety much all that come to me for character with white hair take in count i didn't chose old men and women because i am not sure it work neither did i take character who can transform and have white hair like goku ultra Instinct luffy gear five or zeref fusion with the fairy heart anyway good fanfic i like it waiting for more

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fiction_writer

Story is good if you want some thing to read without using most of you brain power it's simple and easy to digest fic good to pass time if you have nothing else to read

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Peter_Slonaker

is good .

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Edwin_ar1

It has an interesting premise and the story up to chapter 17 is good.

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shut_in

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Lizrock

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Deadaimbro

please 🙏 continue this is a amazing fanfic

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Deadaimbro

please continue thin fanfic i love it very much