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The story is kind of unique and I can see great potential in it just post more often. Looking forward to character development of mc.And it is not cliche like some other imitations of great works
Thank you everyone for reading this novel. Support this novel by giving power stone or maybe you can check out my patreon for 60 advanced chapters for all my works.
Translation is not upto the mark but it is understandable. But, overall the story is quite good. Just read it while ignoring grammatical mistakes.
I really like this novel, so please don't put it on hiatus or drop it. This novel is really good, so I will definitely recommend you to try it onlce.
Translation is not that good but overall the story is enjoyable. If you can ignore the grammatical mistakes, then you should definitely give it a try.
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The only thing dragging down this work is the translation. Goes between she and he ect. The story idea is something refreshing to me. so 4 stars. Anyone got the name of the Raw's?
The story is kind of unique and I can see great potential in it just post more often. Looking forward to character development of mc.And it is not cliche like some other imitations of great works
Thank you everyone for reading this novel. Support this novel by giving power stone or maybe you can check out my patreon for 60 advanced chapters for all my works.
Translation is not upto the mark but it is understandable. But, overall the story is quite good. Just read it while ignoring grammatical mistakes.
I really like this novel, so please don't put it on hiatus or drop it. This novel is really good, so I will definitely recommend you to try it onlce.
Translation is not that good but overall the story is enjoyable. If you can ignore the grammatical mistakes, then you should definitely give it a try.
Although the translation isn’t perfect but the story is enjoyable [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The only thing dragging down this work is the translation. Goes between she and he ect. The story idea is something refreshing to me. so 4 stars. Anyone got the name of the Raw's?