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I came to find silver... But found DIAMOND INSTEAD! While the author is new, his wording and grammar doesn't have as many errors the other newbies have. Not only that, the scenes can be understood with proper thinking! It feels real, like I myself am inside it. The plot in the beginning may look same as most of the novels, but isn't after you reach the 1.5 chapter. Honestly, the author is doing great even though this is his first time. Keep going author!
VERY INTERESTING!!! I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE ITS BETTER THAN THE NOVEL/MANHWA/ETC ETC N MIXTURE OF THEM I LOVE 2 READ THIS NOVEL GUD WORK BRO/SIS..👍🏻🙃
Shameless author here! This is my first being published novel, so there may be some mistakes, but I hope you (The reader's) will point it out for me, and I will improve upon it. Anyways , the story is about a teenager who's a psychopath and insane. (Maybe these two terms are same?) He will be a different main character than most of them who are popping up. Expect the Mc to be ruthless and cold hearted, every action he takes will be for his own advantage and good. He will remain reasonable and logical till the end, and the story will contain a ton of pain as well, so sensitive readers may leave now. Hope it will be read by at least 100k people. Have a good day ahead.
I came to find silver... But found DIAMOND INSTEAD! While the author is new, his wording and grammar doesn't have as many errors the other newbies have. Not only that, the scenes can be understood with proper thinking! It feels real, like I myself am inside it. The plot in the beginning may look same as most of the novels, but isn't after you reach the 1.5 chapter. Honestly, the author is doing great even though this is his first time. Keep going author!
VERY INTERESTING!!! I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE ITS BETTER THAN THE NOVEL/MANHWA/ETC ETC N MIXTURE OF THEM I LOVE 2 READ THIS NOVEL GUD WORK BRO/SIS..👍🏻🙃
Shameless author here! This is my first being published novel, so there may be some mistakes, but I hope you (The reader's) will point it out for me, and I will improve upon it. Anyways , the story is about a teenager who's a psychopath and insane. (Maybe these two terms are same?) He will be a different main character than most of them who are popping up. Expect the Mc to be ruthless and cold hearted, every action he takes will be for his own advantage and good. He will remain reasonable and logical till the end, and the story will contain a ton of pain as well, so sensitive readers may leave now. Hope it will be read by at least 100k people. Have a good day ahead.