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Honestly, I recommend reading it only when you're bored... I didn't like some things, the main one is the author using () to inform unnecessary things, 2nd him awakening the conqueror's haki was also quite anticlimactic and quite forced, after all I think the author was unable to develop the protagonist's relationship with the duke. It also has the cliché of the powerful and unknown old man, something that seems quite forced in the plot. The character designs are terrible, I can't imagine the protagonist or his crew. Now, I praise the author for being able to develop the issue of them being pirates, but without this "stereotype" of an evil villain, will he kill? It goes but it doesn't give you that "bad" feeling that he took a life, it gives you the same feeling as the Straw Hats, they've probably already killed a lot of people, mainly indirectly.
The story is very good so far. I would prefer if possible to include photos of the crew members. I'm terrible at memorizing Oc's name. I need an image to decorate.
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, to be honest I really like it and don't follow the plot and characters in One Piece. That's the best part that gives the impression of a new adventure. I hope 1 day 1 Chapter 😂😂😂🔥🔥
Honestly, I recommend reading it only when you're bored... I didn't like some things, the main one is the author using () to inform unnecessary things, 2nd him awakening the conqueror's haki was also quite anticlimactic and quite forced, after all I think the author was unable to develop the protagonist's relationship with the duke. It also has the cliché of the powerful and unknown old man, something that seems quite forced in the plot. The character designs are terrible, I can't imagine the protagonist or his crew. Now, I praise the author for being able to develop the issue of them being pirates, but without this "stereotype" of an evil villain, will he kill? It goes but it doesn't give you that "bad" feeling that he took a life, it gives you the same feeling as the Straw Hats, they've probably already killed a lot of people, mainly indirectly.
The story is very good so far. I would prefer if possible to include photos of the crew members. I'm terrible at memorizing Oc's name. I need an image to decorate.
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, to be honest I really like it and don't follow the plot and characters in One Piece. That's the best part that gives the impression of a new adventure. I hope 1 day 1 Chapter 😂😂😂🔥🔥
I hope he gets a left hand on the level of the right hand