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Great novel again by a good author. I know this will be an even better novel than Lunerra because the author improved and will not make those mistakes again. I have high hopes for this novel just as much as the previous one. [img=recommend]
Well, I am writing this review having 30 caps published, to begin with the progress could be that it is slow but sure which means that it is laying the foundations, the protagonist despite being 15 years old demonstrates a determined mentality, the power system is not very innovative but it also doesn't make the MC instantly OP. I can't say almost anything about secondary characters because they're all dead Even so, knowing who the author is, I know that he will develop a good work and maybe with luck it will succeed just like his previous work.
alright I'm happy to have the honour for writing the first review in this novel I've read the author's first novel it was great so I'm looking forward for his second try to write a novel, I'll read another review once i complete like 100 chapters of the novel. good luck author!
The story is more rich than i thought. Author sama, you should make the synopsis more informative, because I didn't feel like clicking the read button after it. I have added it to my collections. I'll let it stockpile for few hundred chapters and start reading again.
Great novel again by a good author. I know this will be an even better novel than Lunerra because the author improved and will not make those mistakes again. I have high hopes for this novel just as much as the previous one. [img=recommend]
Well, I am writing this review having 30 caps published, to begin with the progress could be that it is slow but sure which means that it is laying the foundations, the protagonist despite being 15 years old demonstrates a determined mentality, the power system is not very innovative but it also doesn't make the MC instantly OP. I can't say almost anything about secondary characters because they're all dead Even so, knowing who the author is, I know that he will develop a good work and maybe with luck it will succeed just like his previous work.
alright I'm happy to have the honour for writing the first review in this novel I've read the author's first novel it was great so I'm looking forward for his second try to write a novel, I'll read another review once i complete like 100 chapters of the novel. good luck author!
The story is more rich than i thought. Author sama, you should make the synopsis more informative, because I didn't feel like clicking the read button after it. I have added it to my collections. I'll let it stockpile for few hundred chapters and start reading again.