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We have successfully reached the One hundred and fiftieth chapter! (I had promised myself I'd review at the one hundred and fiftieth chapter.) This is a new volume of the Alpha's long lost heir (Nyx plans her revenge). This volume revolves around Nyx, and her revenge that is to be served to those who had wronged her in the past (including Oberon). This is just a continuation of volume one, where she was being totally wronged, by Oberon, and her own sister. Now, she also decides to revenge on Aegis who has humiliated her pack. Now, she plans to avenge her sufferings in the past, and claim her position as the rightful Luna of the lycanthropy pack. ===== Please continue supporting my book with power stones, Golden tickets, and gifts. I hope you enjoy Volume 2 of 'The Alpha's long lost heir.' Enjoy! I do appreciate all of you who decides to give my book a chance! Thank you all, and I love y'all 💕.
Great book I really enjoy reading except could use a lot of spell corrections where she should be he or he should be she, remove the unnamed chapters great character design. So I’m looking at your profile and see at the bottom it says translator so confused you’re the author
This is going faster than I expected😅 oh wow Oberon finally asks for forgiveness
The story is really nice though but I don't think Oberon is such a nice husband, he actually treated Nyx like a toy and then divorces her as soon as he finds his fated mate? That's really unfair of him. On the other hand, Nyx is just so nice, she quietly divorced him without a scene and just ran away to allow Oberon be with his mate. I really applaud her. Overall , the story is really great
Wow, Oberon is so unbelievable! What will happen now Nyx carries his child and his pack needs a heir ? The story's plot is nice though 👍
This is the best story ever! Nyx is one of a kind and the most patient FL I've ever seen. She keeps me wanting thirsting for more and I've fallen in love with Archi too! 🤭🤗
I've been with this story so far and i must say it's completely mind-blowing. I love this book so much and hope to stay with it till the end..
Very talented writer👍 Your Novel is a captivating masterpiece that effortlessly weaves together intricate plotlines, rich character development, and evocative prose. It's a testament to your talent as a writer, and I'm in awe of how you've created such a compelling and immersive world within its pages. Reading your book was a truly unforgettable experience, and I have no doubt that it will leave a lasting impact on all who have the pleasure of delving into its depths.
Best novel I have read this year, I love this chapter2 (She's getting married) "Nyx! Nyx! Get up you lazy brat!" Her mother, Lisa, shouted from outside her room. She stretched and yawned, she slowly opened her eyes and groaned. "Why do I have to wake up so early?" She groaned. Lisa hit her head very hard, "Lazy thing! You always wake up late! Goodness knows what you do before you go to bed that makes you wake up this late." She said angrily. Nyx sniffed and slowly got down from the bed. "Listen to me very carefully young lady, a very important person is coming over to visit us today. Make sure to be at your best behavior, don't disgrace us and go clean yourself up real good." She said. "Are you listening to me?" She held her ear. Nyx nodded, "Yes mother." She said lowly. "Now be quick!" She pushed her to the bathroom. Nyx wiped her eyes and picked up her towel, "Who is coming over and why is she being so adamant about everything?" Just superb
Author could use an editor or proofreader since there are a lot of errors. The word choice during the 18+ were entertaining though
We have successfully reached the One hundred and fiftieth chapter! (I had promised myself I'd review at the one hundred and fiftieth chapter.) This is a new volume of the Alpha's long lost heir (Nyx plans her revenge). This volume revolves around Nyx, and her revenge that is to be served to those who had wronged her in the past (including Oberon). This is just a continuation of volume one, where she was being totally wronged, by Oberon, and her own sister. Now, she also decides to revenge on Aegis who has humiliated her pack. Now, she plans to avenge her sufferings in the past, and claim her position as the rightful Luna of the lycanthropy pack. ===== Please continue supporting my book with power stones, Golden tickets, and gifts. I hope you enjoy Volume 2 of 'The Alpha's long lost heir.' Enjoy! I do appreciate all of you who decides to give my book a chance! Thank you all, and I love y'all 💕.
Great book I really enjoy reading except could use a lot of spell corrections where she should be he or he should be she, remove the unnamed chapters great character design. So I’m looking at your profile and see at the bottom it says translator so confused you’re the author
This is going faster than I expected😅 oh wow Oberon finally asks for forgiveness
The story is really nice though but I don't think Oberon is such a nice husband, he actually treated Nyx like a toy and then divorces her as soon as he finds his fated mate? That's really unfair of him. On the other hand, Nyx is just so nice, she quietly divorced him without a scene and just ran away to allow Oberon be with his mate. I really applaud her. Overall , the story is really great
Wow, Oberon is so unbelievable! What will happen now Nyx carries his child and his pack needs a heir ? The story's plot is nice though 👍
This is the best story ever! Nyx is one of a kind and the most patient FL I've ever seen. She keeps me wanting thirsting for more and I've fallen in love with Archi too! 🤭🤗
I've been with this story so far and i must say it's completely mind-blowing. I love this book so much and hope to stay with it till the end..
Very talented writer👍 Your Novel is a captivating masterpiece that effortlessly weaves together intricate plotlines, rich character development, and evocative prose. It's a testament to your talent as a writer, and I'm in awe of how you've created such a compelling and immersive world within its pages. Reading your book was a truly unforgettable experience, and I have no doubt that it will leave a lasting impact on all who have the pleasure of delving into its depths.
Best novel I have read this year, I love this chapter2 (She's getting married) "Nyx! Nyx! Get up you lazy brat!" Her mother, Lisa, shouted from outside her room. She stretched and yawned, she slowly opened her eyes and groaned. "Why do I have to wake up so early?" She groaned. Lisa hit her head very hard, "Lazy thing! You always wake up late! Goodness knows what you do before you go to bed that makes you wake up this late." She said angrily. Nyx sniffed and slowly got down from the bed. "Listen to me very carefully young lady, a very important person is coming over to visit us today. Make sure to be at your best behavior, don't disgrace us and go clean yourself up real good." She said. "Are you listening to me?" She held her ear. Nyx nodded, "Yes mother." She said lowly. "Now be quick!" She pushed her to the bathroom. Nyx wiped her eyes and picked up her towel, "Who is coming over and why is she being so adamant about everything?" Just superb
Author could use an editor or proofreader since there are a lot of errors. The word choice during the 18+ were entertaining though