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This is good for those looking for an anti-villain protagonist. Mc has some orochimaru in him without his sasuke seeking side.
Great premise, great idea about the author but man he does not excuse at all. This story is absolute garbage read 50 chapters and the main character stupid he keeps doing stupid things he’s good keeps going to place where he has no business going and then he doesn’t progress he doesn’t advance at all 50 chapters and still trash. Do you not read it save your time like I said y’all had a great idea, but he does nothing with it. He does absolutely zero with it.
nice book, overall writing is perfect if you're looking for another fantastic read check out paradox of being ancient sukani's Return
This novel is exactly the same as the novel " stealthily cultivating in a chaotic world of demons and cultivators (so annoying!) why do people copy each other ? cant u just write something new?
Trying to make me waste my free passes with 10 or 15 coin chapters ffs. Not going to waste stones or tickets when you play shitty games like that.
the problem with the novel is the over info load the begining ng is kinda faulty but it's alright but u shouldn't use terms unknown to us in the book this isn't any non linear stuff but still can't really do much about over info
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This is a very good book so far. I just found it but with its unique story and nicely thought out characters and interesting view point. This is promising to be a good read. It is not a fast pase book but still holds your attention. It has an intriguing concept that promises many new avenues for the adventure and fun twists with surprising ideas. I’m looking forward to reading more. What first got me curious was one word farming. It’s unlike other farming books in some aspects and it is a nice addition to any reading list.
Nice story ,but I want to see the character setting ,thanks for it .Good luck
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Up to ch 48 Personally , this novel is average n not much going on. Mc is smart but the times he keeps reminding how cruel the cultivation world is just keeping me on the edge. N the plot is the same generic one if i may say to the point it just resembles the “ stealthily cultivating in the cultivation world” i guess the author got some sort of inspiration or smth . If u want the plot n not much yapping about the cruelty of the world , then I recommend u “ my simulated road to immortality” . Otherwise , I don’t recommend u to waste money on this But if u wanna read for a spending time, then go ahead at least it doesn’t have face slapping cringe moments n young master trope . Thank u
Development moves a little slow sometimes, but it’s in the good way of someone trying to put actual quality writing into a story which I planned to come back and finish reading next immediately after I satisfy my OCD needs and finish my previous book
Hey author I think I have read similar novel on Mtl it has same pattern such but different execution. Such as having demon tree from the martial world to connect to himself and achieveing evergreen body which allow him to have more vitality and boost hin in wood art he also was an farmer and had ability to go to different world through a mirror and he also help an female lead to acquire island who ahd objective of reavenge and there was an companion with mother with pregnancy while her husband dead. I just saying it just some similarities but I like your versus on way better because of the different approach and way more imfomative and great approach to world building. Thank you for hard work
Really well written and all around an awesome read. Main complaint is info dumps, there are times where I feel like the dialouge is spread thin while the mc thinks to himself. Other than that perfect tho ;) Strongly recommend
not a fan of romance, especially a baggage and whiney partner. will be trying this once cuz i love the premise but eh, i hope the author hears me.
Review after reading 200 chapters. First, it's not translated (I think) so no mtl. Some mistakes in writing but they are rare. The MC has a golden finger but it's not exaggerated. He has something in his soul which is like a computer, very useful but it can't create things out of nothing. So because of the MC's background, he can't feed a lot of data to his computer, limiting its usefulness, but as the story progress, his golden finger can be really cheated. Wait and see. The MC is careful, which is good, but the cultivation world isn't peaceful so he is getting into dangerous things even if he doesn't to but it is happening realistically, no big issues because a young master wanted his table in a restaurant. The MC has a clear plan for his future and knows how to adapt it because there are a lot of things he doesn't know because he is a farmer. The MC didn't abandon farming so far and I don't think he will so that's good because the author managed to create a balance between action and farming. My only problem is the loneliness of the MC. Because of his "secret", he isn't close to anybody and he does thing on his own all the time, even when it's a group action. It was fine at first because he had nowhere to call home but it changed so I hope the author will create a community around the MC because so far, we don't know anything about the other characters. There is zero background information. More development on the secondary characters will add to the story.
It is a really good novel overall, I love the storyline and I hope the storyline won't divert too much as the story progress. Thank you and keep up the good work Author!
it's really an enjoyable read. It's refreshing to read such characters since most of the main characters in this genre are generic edgy and brain dead.
So, I’ve read up to chapter 35, I believe, and here are my initial impressions: The story has promise, and I understand that this seems to be an isekai but not a system novel. I wanted to score it higher but I have three main complaints. The first is exposition, it needs to be done better. Find a way to write it in the story that feels natural, find the timing, and control the length. There have already been several exposition dumps where I reading paragraphs of information that not only broke up the current actions of the characters, but tested my patience because I felt this could have been relayed through the characters themselves. My second complaint is repetition, I don’t know how many times the main character’s motive has been told to me, and I’m tired of hearing about it. The MC wants to farm peacefully, you don’t need to tells over and over again. Last is the farming, where is it? I chose to read a novel about a farmer farming, but that seems to be lacking. All I get are chapters of him cultivating. Find a balance between the farming and cultivating or I’ll just assume this is another battle novel with the skin of ‘farming’. Just my two cents, sorry if it’s harsh.
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Just go read the novel!!! I don’t know what to tell you other than go read the novel it’s really good, interesting, well thought out, and captivating, pretty much all the good words you can use to describe a book. Main character is a very mature, sensible person willing to get dirty to protect their peaceful life, other characters are well thought out so does the world building and everything associated with it. Something some people may not appreciate would be the similarly slow start of the novel and it is understandable but than again it’s better to have a slow start to setup a good foundation for the novel to pick in later chapters without have to stop and explain things later on. And if you other reason to read the novel well I would from his past works the author hasn’t fumbled any of his novels so far, so I have faith of him doing a phenomenal job with this as his other novels.
Finally a novel where the reincarnated Mc isn’t a totally mass murder psychopath . Normal process without endless fighting . Good grammar and sentence build .
Hello, readers! Thank you for taking the time to explore A Farmer’s Journey To Immortality. This novel follows the story of Aksai Everwood, a reincarnator endowed with two unique advantages: the neural link fabric and access to the Enchanted Everwood farm, which he can teleport to at will. With these tools at his disposal, Aksai no longer feels compelled to take risks or seek fortune in the cultivation world. At least not for the most part. The narrative unfolds at an optimal pace, with standard cultivation realms acting as the Paths to Power. Later on, Aksai will make strides in both body cultivation and spirit cultivation simultaneously, earning his advancements through perseverance and dedication. Aksai will also learn Martial Arts to make use of his body cultivation. Also, did I tell you that it’s a multi-worlds story? The second world exploration will start from the second volume so you need to be a bit patient. There will be more worlds to explore as the story progresses forward. What distinguishes this story from others in the Eastern Fantasy genre is Aksai’s unconventional path. Unlike typical wuxia protagonists, he actively avoids confrontation, relying on his intelligence to sidestep trouble before it arises. Aksai considers himself a compassionate individual, aiding those he cares about while safeguarding his own interests. Yet, he is not one to be trifled with, capable of unleashing formidable violence when provoked. Here are a few FAQs to address any lingering doubts: 1) System? No 2) Status Panel? Yes (Aksai's progress will be periodically displayed, courtesy of the neural link fabric, but without system shops, quests or experience points.) 3) Spirit Farming? Yes 4) Relations with Female Leads? Intimate but without formal marriage (No harem or romance for the most part, but Aksai won't lead a solitary life.) 5) OP MC? No 6) Edgelord MC? No 7) Evil/ Villain MC? Yes (With a relatively milder edge; Aksai's actions may seem ruthless to some while reflecting a certain moral code to others.) 8) Standard cultivation realms? Yes 9) Cliched cultivation plot? No 10) Young Master Tropes? Perhaps, but not overly so. 11) Weak to strong progression? Yes 12) $mut scenes? No 13) NTR? No 14) Netori? No 15) Info-dumps? Yes, purposefully placed within the storyline. 16) Slow burn? Not really (The narrative unfolds logically with detailed exposition.) 17) Slice of life elements? Occasionally included to highlight Aksai’s farming life. 18) Daily schedule? Typically 2 chapters/day + Bonus release on weekends 19) Is this novel worth reading? Absolutely (I am deeply invested in my work and believe it offers a worthwhile reading experience.) 20) Are there grammar errors? Possibly, but please do point them out for correction. 21) Memes in the comment section? Always welcome :) Please go through the book synopsis, reviews, and FAQs before posing any questions. I’m happy to address any queries that haven't been covered, provided they won't spoil the storyline for others. That's about it. Happy reading and good day! :)
This is good for those looking for an anti-villain protagonist. Mc has some orochimaru in him without his sasuke seeking side.
Great premise, great idea about the author but man he does not excuse at all. This story is absolute garbage read 50 chapters and the main character stupid he keeps doing stupid things he’s good keeps going to place where he has no business going and then he doesn’t progress he doesn’t advance at all 50 chapters and still trash. Do you not read it save your time like I said y’all had a great idea, but he does nothing with it. He does absolutely zero with it.
nice book, overall writing is perfect if you're looking for another fantastic read check out paradox of being ancient sukani's Return
This novel is exactly the same as the novel " stealthily cultivating in a chaotic world of demons and cultivators (so annoying!) why do people copy each other ? cant u just write something new?
Trying to make me waste my free passes with 10 or 15 coin chapters ffs. Not going to waste stones or tickets when you play shitty games like that.
the problem with the novel is the over info load the begining ng is kinda faulty but it's alright but u shouldn't use terms unknown to us in the book this isn't any non linear stuff but still can't really do much about over info
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This is a very good book so far. I just found it but with its unique story and nicely thought out characters and interesting view point. This is promising to be a good read. It is not a fast pase book but still holds your attention. It has an intriguing concept that promises many new avenues for the adventure and fun twists with surprising ideas. I’m looking forward to reading more. What first got me curious was one word farming. It’s unlike other farming books in some aspects and it is a nice addition to any reading list.
Nice story ,but I want to see the character setting ,thanks for it .Good luck
Spoiler de révélation Up to ch 48 Personally , this novel is average n not much going on. Mc is smart but the times he keeps reminding how cruel the cultivation world is just keeping me on the edge. N the plot is the same generic one if i may say to the point it just resembles the “ stealthily cultivating in the cultivation world” i guess the author got some sort of inspiration or smth . If u want the plot n not much yapping about the cruelty of the world , then I recommend u “ my simulated road to immortality” . Otherwise , I don’t recommend u to waste money on this But if u wanna read for a spending time, then go ahead at least it doesn’t have face slapping cringe moments n young master trope . Thank u
Development moves a little slow sometimes, but it’s in the good way of someone trying to put actual quality writing into a story which I planned to come back and finish reading next immediately after I satisfy my OCD needs and finish my previous book
Hey author I think I have read similar novel on Mtl it has same pattern such but different execution. Such as having demon tree from the martial world to connect to himself and achieveing evergreen body which allow him to have more vitality and boost hin in wood art he also was an farmer and had ability to go to different world through a mirror and he also help an female lead to acquire island who ahd objective of reavenge and there was an companion with mother with pregnancy while her husband dead. I just saying it just some similarities but I like your versus on way better because of the different approach and way more imfomative and great approach to world building. Thank you for hard work
Really well written and all around an awesome read. Main complaint is info dumps, there are times where I feel like the dialouge is spread thin while the mc thinks to himself. Other than that perfect tho ;) Strongly recommend
not a fan of romance, especially a baggage and whiney partner. will be trying this once cuz i love the premise but eh, i hope the author hears me.
Review after reading 200 chapters. First, it's not translated (I think) so no mtl. Some mistakes in writing but they are rare. The MC has a golden finger but it's not exaggerated. He has something in his soul which is like a computer, very useful but it can't create things out of nothing. So because of the MC's background, he can't feed a lot of data to his computer, limiting its usefulness, but as the story progress, his golden finger can be really cheated. Wait and see. The MC is careful, which is good, but the cultivation world isn't peaceful so he is getting into dangerous things even if he doesn't to but it is happening realistically, no big issues because a young master wanted his table in a restaurant. The MC has a clear plan for his future and knows how to adapt it because there are a lot of things he doesn't know because he is a farmer. The MC didn't abandon farming so far and I don't think he will so that's good because the author managed to create a balance between action and farming. My only problem is the loneliness of the MC. Because of his "secret", he isn't close to anybody and he does thing on his own all the time, even when it's a group action. It was fine at first because he had nowhere to call home but it changed so I hope the author will create a community around the MC because so far, we don't know anything about the other characters. There is zero background information. More development on the secondary characters will add to the story.
It is a really good novel overall, I love the storyline and I hope the storyline won't divert too much as the story progress. Thank you and keep up the good work Author!
it's really an enjoyable read. It's refreshing to read such characters since most of the main characters in this genre are generic edgy and brain dead.
So, I’ve read up to chapter 35, I believe, and here are my initial impressions: The story has promise, and I understand that this seems to be an isekai but not a system novel. I wanted to score it higher but I have three main complaints. The first is exposition, it needs to be done better. Find a way to write it in the story that feels natural, find the timing, and control the length. There have already been several exposition dumps where I reading paragraphs of information that not only broke up the current actions of the characters, but tested my patience because I felt this could have been relayed through the characters themselves. My second complaint is repetition, I don’t know how many times the main character’s motive has been told to me, and I’m tired of hearing about it. The MC wants to farm peacefully, you don’t need to tells over and over again. Last is the farming, where is it? I chose to read a novel about a farmer farming, but that seems to be lacking. All I get are chapters of him cultivating. Find a balance between the farming and cultivating or I’ll just assume this is another battle novel with the skin of ‘farming’. Just my two cents, sorry if it’s harsh.
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Spoiler de révélation Just go read the novel!!! I don’t know what to tell you other than go read the novel it’s really good, interesting, well thought out, and captivating, pretty much all the good words you can use to describe a book. Main character is a very mature, sensible person willing to get dirty to protect their peaceful life, other characters are well thought out so does the world building and everything associated with it. Something some people may not appreciate would be the similarly slow start of the novel and it is understandable but than again it’s better to have a slow start to setup a good foundation for the novel to pick in later chapters without have to stop and explain things later on. And if you other reason to read the novel well I would from his past works the author hasn’t fumbled any of his novels so far, so I have faith of him doing a phenomenal job with this as his other novels.
Finally a novel where the reincarnated Mc isn’t a totally mass murder psychopath . Normal process without endless fighting . Good grammar and sentence build .
Hello, readers! Thank you for taking the time to explore A Farmer’s Journey To Immortality. This novel follows the story of Aksai Everwood, a reincarnator endowed with two unique advantages: the neural link fabric and access to the Enchanted Everwood farm, which he can teleport to at will. With these tools at his disposal, Aksai no longer feels compelled to take risks or seek fortune in the cultivation world. At least not for the most part. The narrative unfolds at an optimal pace, with standard cultivation realms acting as the Paths to Power. Later on, Aksai will make strides in both body cultivation and spirit cultivation simultaneously, earning his advancements through perseverance and dedication. Aksai will also learn Martial Arts to make use of his body cultivation. Also, did I tell you that it’s a multi-worlds story? The second world exploration will start from the second volume so you need to be a bit patient. There will be more worlds to explore as the story progresses forward. What distinguishes this story from others in the Eastern Fantasy genre is Aksai’s unconventional path. Unlike typical wuxia protagonists, he actively avoids confrontation, relying on his intelligence to sidestep trouble before it arises. Aksai considers himself a compassionate individual, aiding those he cares about while safeguarding his own interests. Yet, he is not one to be trifled with, capable of unleashing formidable violence when provoked. Here are a few FAQs to address any lingering doubts: 1) System? No 2) Status Panel? Yes (Aksai's progress will be periodically displayed, courtesy of the neural link fabric, but without system shops, quests or experience points.) 3) Spirit Farming? Yes 4) Relations with Female Leads? Intimate but without formal marriage (No harem or romance for the most part, but Aksai won't lead a solitary life.) 5) OP MC? No 6) Edgelord MC? No 7) Evil/ Villain MC? Yes (With a relatively milder edge; Aksai's actions may seem ruthless to some while reflecting a certain moral code to others.) 8) Standard cultivation realms? Yes 9) Cliched cultivation plot? No 10) Young Master Tropes? Perhaps, but not overly so. 11) Weak to strong progression? Yes 12) $mut scenes? No 13) NTR? No 14) Netori? No 15) Info-dumps? Yes, purposefully placed within the storyline. 16) Slow burn? Not really (The narrative unfolds logically with detailed exposition.) 17) Slice of life elements? Occasionally included to highlight Aksai’s farming life. 18) Daily schedule? Typically 2 chapters/day + Bonus release on weekends 19) Is this novel worth reading? Absolutely (I am deeply invested in my work and believe it offers a worthwhile reading experience.) 20) Are there grammar errors? Possibly, but please do point them out for correction. 21) Memes in the comment section? Always welcome :) Please go through the book synopsis, reviews, and FAQs before posing any questions. I’m happy to address any queries that haven't been covered, provided they won't spoil the storyline for others. That's about it. Happy reading and good day! :)