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Idk man, just do you a favor. I like your story, keep it up! I see you have other stories published so I'll take a look later. [img=coins]
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It's mythoast, what else to do? Of course you read! Well, I hope you put Demon Slayer in please! I want to read a decent DS FF...
This is great! Another Food Wars fanfic! I have very high hopes for this! Let's go!
Seems like you've changed the way you write your earlier chapters again this time. Honestly, this is the best among your other works! I love how you immediately get straight to business to the canon that I want to read!
Regular reader here! I'm sure you'll do justice to Food Wars! I'm here only for that after all. Make sure to finish this as well please!
It's going well. If there's romance, Erina.++++[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is an advance on the fic, because if it’s mythoast it’s guaranteed to be GOATED 🐐
I like this I mean I didn't find anything I didn't like so that's good and I would recommend you give this a chance because I think it's good and if you don't oh well
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Idk man, just do you a favor. I like your story, keep it up! I see you have other stories published so I'll take a look later. [img=coins]
Mass release please!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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It's mythoast, what else to do? Of course you read! Well, I hope you put Demon Slayer in please! I want to read a decent DS FF...
This is great! Another Food Wars fanfic! I have very high hopes for this! Let's go!
Seems like you've changed the way you write your earlier chapters again this time. Honestly, this is the best among your other works! I love how you immediately get straight to business to the canon that I want to read!
Regular reader here! I'm sure you'll do justice to Food Wars! I'm here only for that after all. Make sure to finish this as well please!
It's going well. If there's romance, Erina.++++[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is an advance on the fic, because if it’s mythoast it’s guaranteed to be GOATED 🐐
I like this I mean I didn't find anything I didn't like so that's good and I would recommend you give this a chance because I think it's good and if you don't oh well