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i love all your work nut im waiting for the update of naruto hatake son/your other ff when are you gonna update that? many of us is waiting
I'm put off by the story when I see elements from outside the original anime. I think it would have been better if it had been introduced as "a Kekkei genkai where he can transform chakra into reishi form" instead of using reishi. His desire to establish a Sternritter also distracted me from the story. In fact, it would be a pleasure to read a story in which he discovered his powers on his own, without his System. Almost reaching Jonin level in 4 years? I'm sure there are people who love it, but I'm one of those who love it "from weak to strong". The overall score I give to this story is 2.8, but there is no need to deduct points as I have not encountered a situation that I did not like or particularly hated due to my personal tastes.
The author should differentiate between the use of reishi and chakra. rather than equating the use of reishi with chakras...............................................................................................................................................................................................
as usual this dudes stories are always amazing. just dont drop this one and upload consistantly.
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i love all your work nut im waiting for the update of naruto hatake son/your other ff when are you gonna update that? many of us is waiting
I'm put off by the story when I see elements from outside the original anime. I think it would have been better if it had been introduced as "a Kekkei genkai where he can transform chakra into reishi form" instead of using reishi. His desire to establish a Sternritter also distracted me from the story. In fact, it would be a pleasure to read a story in which he discovered his powers on his own, without his System. Almost reaching Jonin level in 4 years? I'm sure there are people who love it, but I'm one of those who love it "from weak to strong". The overall score I give to this story is 2.8, but there is no need to deduct points as I have not encountered a situation that I did not like or particularly hated due to my personal tastes.
The author should differentiate between the use of reishi and chakra. rather than equating the use of reishi with chakras...............................................................................................................................................................................................
as usual this dudes stories are always amazing. just dont drop this one and upload consistantly.
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