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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The novel is very good, especially in terms of world building and power balances! In fact, it can be said that this world is without borders, and thus development and events themselves can become unlimited
Absolutely captivating! This novel stands out from others in its category with its unique twist. As a fellow author participating in the Webnovel Spirity Awards 2024, I'm impressed by your craftsmanship. I'd love to receive your support as well! My novel, "IsChange," is also competing in the awards. If you have the time, I'd greatly appreciate your read, comments, and votes. Your encouragement would mean a lot to me. Best of luck in the contest, and I look forward to seeing your work shine!
I am giving you a 5 because it is well written and interesting! The only thing I would suggest is possibly push the world building out a few chapters because the first 3 chapters are slow and you want to ideally capture your reader's attention front the start. I would find a way to weave this stuff into the events of the story as trickles of info.
Fantastic world building, this novel is really good, update more please. Keep it up author,I believe this novel is a masterpiece
Great world building although I just started I can feel that this novel is one of a kind. Keep it up author this novel is great . And to all readers out there this novel will not waste your time.
Great read I’m surprised this is not more popular! I don’t usually give reviews but Definitely a gem hidden in a pile of coal 10/10 from me
The novel is very good, especially in terms of world building and power balances! In fact, it can be said that this world is without borders, and thus development and events themselves can become unlimited
Absolutely captivating! This novel stands out from others in its category with its unique twist. As a fellow author participating in the Webnovel Spirity Awards 2024, I'm impressed by your craftsmanship. I'd love to receive your support as well! My novel, "IsChange," is also competing in the awards. If you have the time, I'd greatly appreciate your read, comments, and votes. Your encouragement would mean a lot to me. Best of luck in the contest, and I look forward to seeing your work shine!
I am giving you a 5 because it is well written and interesting! The only thing I would suggest is possibly push the world building out a few chapters because the first 3 chapters are slow and you want to ideally capture your reader's attention front the start. I would find a way to weave this stuff into the events of the story as trickles of info.
Fantastic world building, this novel is really good, update more please. Keep it up author,I believe this novel is a masterpiece
Great world building although I just started I can feel that this novel is one of a kind. Keep it up author this novel is great . And to all readers out there this novel will not waste your time.
Great read I’m surprised this is not more popular! I don’t usually give reviews but Definitely a gem hidden in a pile of coal 10/10 from me