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it's good but I'm a little confused with some of the chapters but over all it's GOOD waiting for more chapters
Friend, I'm going to give it to you. It improves a lot. I just read the first chapter and there is a lot of difference, although it can be improved. The pace is still fast but it is acceptable. As of now, I have nothing to say.
please don't stop the previous plot chapters update in the series, and this is also OK
Shameless author review. Guys I have to get admission in college so if I have time in future , I would restart my writing.
it's good but I'm a little confused with some of the chapters but over all it's GOOD waiting for more chapters
Friend, I'm going to give it to you. It improves a lot. I just read the first chapter and there is a lot of difference, although it can be improved. The pace is still fast but it is acceptable. As of now, I have nothing to say.
please don't stop the previous plot chapters update in the series, and this is also OK
Shameless author review. Guys I have to get admission in college so if I have time in future , I would restart my writing.