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The concept of the story is very new to me, which is what I love about it. I love how the story begins, allowing the reader to dive right into the story and sail through the creativity crafted by the author. The author did a great job with the character design, and the story line is very fresh. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up, author!
Forgive me if you see any grammatical errors, and please help by pointing it out. English is my only language but I'm not above mistakes.
This story starts off with the birth of a god. It's pretty cool. I like the gods we get introduced to. Very interesting. It is an entertaining and has it's moments of great character design with story development. Good work,
I like the concept for the story. It is a great read and if you enjoy fantasy books this will be a story that you would want to read. Great character and plot development.
Wow, this is a very interesting book, every chapter keeps getting hooked, keep it up author .
I just love how the story is turning into... i absolutely love this novel. I'm waiting to read more of it. It's such a great story 😁👏🏻👏🏻
well this is certainly a new read. the concept of gods manifested from the manna of the universe has been my favorite concept. I hope to read more of this book as it goes on. keep up the good work
This book's concept is so new. I love it. It is a refreshing book. I can't wait for the plot to unfold. Excited for future updates
There are certain aspects of repetitiveness in the series, but its nonetheless an absolute joy to read. The way everything just flows is immaculate.
The imagination of the author really shines through in this novel, the flow and choice of wording could do with a little refinement, but it is a good read overall.
The concept is interesting, the characters are unique, and the grammar is quite good. There are only slight issues with flow and repetitiveness that should resolve as the author gets into the swing of the story.
This novel is a must read. The plot twist is so intellectual and systematic. It's really mind-blowing and I truly recommend it.Keep it up Dear Author.
This is a awesome story. New favorite for sure. Read this book, it's really good. The author is really good at writing. Keep up the good work. Best of luck.
Hello readers, author here. This is the new link for this book. Chapter schedule is the same as before.
listen, I'm not a bot btw, this novel is actually goated asf like straight gas I kid you not I'm actually mad the author put this on web novel, Of all places. If anyone finds a place where the author post this else where with the chapters free pls do notify me cause as always web novel milking us for money of which imma simply not gonna do.
The concept of the story is very new to me, which is what I love about it. I love how the story begins, allowing the reader to dive right into the story and sail through the creativity crafted by the author. The author did a great job with the character design, and the story line is very fresh. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up, author!
Forgive me if you see any grammatical errors, and please help by pointing it out. English is my only language but I'm not above mistakes.
This story starts off with the birth of a god. It's pretty cool. I like the gods we get introduced to. Very interesting. It is an entertaining and has it's moments of great character design with story development. Good work,
I like the concept for the story. It is a great read and if you enjoy fantasy books this will be a story that you would want to read. Great character and plot development.
Wow, this is a very interesting book, every chapter keeps getting hooked, keep it up author .
I just love how the story is turning into... i absolutely love this novel. I'm waiting to read more of it. It's such a great story 😁👏🏻👏🏻
well this is certainly a new read. the concept of gods manifested from the manna of the universe has been my favorite concept. I hope to read more of this book as it goes on. keep up the good work
This book's concept is so new. I love it. It is a refreshing book. I can't wait for the plot to unfold. Excited for future updates
There are certain aspects of repetitiveness in the series, but its nonetheless an absolute joy to read. The way everything just flows is immaculate.
The imagination of the author really shines through in this novel, the flow and choice of wording could do with a little refinement, but it is a good read overall.
The concept is interesting, the characters are unique, and the grammar is quite good. There are only slight issues with flow and repetitiveness that should resolve as the author gets into the swing of the story.
This novel is a must read. The plot twist is so intellectual and systematic. It's really mind-blowing and I truly recommend it.Keep it up Dear Author.
This is a awesome story. New favorite for sure. Read this book, it's really good. The author is really good at writing. Keep up the good work. Best of luck.
Hello readers, author here. This is the new link for this book. Chapter schedule is the same as before.
listen, I'm not a bot btw, this novel is actually goated asf like straight gas I kid you not I'm actually mad the author put this on web novel, Of all places. If anyone finds a place where the author post this else where with the chapters free pls do notify me cause as always web novel milking us for money of which imma simply not gonna do.