Creating games in the future

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A_Light_Caster

more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please

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kirkblackwell21

Really liking this story please keep it up you got me hooked I started reading on a whim and really got sucked in was sad when I got to the “to be continued” message already wanting more

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Heavenly_Will_007

Brother please continue your Doulou Dalu fanfiction.................................................. ................................................

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Daoiste5BdjV

I love this story Whenever I find these types of stories I can't get them out of my mind and I think about how it will develop, keep it up.

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Aizen_Sosuke_2864

Writing Quality: 5/5 The prose in this novel is exceptional. The author has a masterful command of language, crafting sentences that are both beautiful and impactful. The descriptive passages are vivid and evocative, immersing the reader in the story's world. Dialogue is sharp and true to the characters, making interactions feel authentic and engaging. Updating Stability: 3/5 While the writing itself is strong, the novel's updating stability leaves something to be desired. There are noticeable gaps between updates, which can disrupt the reading experience and make it difficult for readers to stay engaged with the story. More consistent updates would greatly enhance the overall experience. Story Development: 5/5 The plot is well-constructed and expertly paced. Each chapter builds on the last, keeping the reader hooked from beginning to end. The author does an excellent job of weaving together various plot threads, leading to satisfying and unexpected twists. The story's progression feels natural, with each development adding depth and complexity. Character Design: 5/5 Characters are a standout feature of this novel. Each one is meticulously crafted, with distinct personalities, motivations, and growth arcs. The protagonist is relatable and well-rounded, while the supporting characters add richness to the narrative. The relationships between characters are dynamic and evolve in meaningful ways throughout the story. World Background: 5/5 The world-building in this novel is top-notch. The setting is richly detailed and immersive, with a well-thought-out history and culture that enhances the story. The author skillfully integrates world background into the narrative without overwhelming the reader with exposition. This creates a believable and engaging backdrop for the characters and plot. --- Overall, this novel excels in many areas, particularly in writing quality, story development, character design, and world background. With more consistent updates, it has the potential to become even more compelling. " sorry for the AI review my grammar is not there good " 😂😂

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OneeyedDaoist

pls tell the originals name rfbtrghtyhyththytjy6rjuykkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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Kkzinho

I really, really love this, the world background is super creative, a mesh of futuristic sci-fi, but still maintaining the slice of life aspect and the great characters. Excited to see which more games and movies the MC will adapt and how the people will react to them. My only critique is the update stability, but I can hardly fault someone for that. Keep the good work :) Ps: if possible, tell us when the next chapter will launch every time you write one, otherwise I will always be checking.

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Heavy_Space

this is a awesome and very unique game making novel and i love is... recommend to read :)

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Aris82

The storyline and MC is very good. but it kinda slowwwww. so when reading one need a lot of patience. 😅😅

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RS_1

it really need a new chapter... but the aouthur got hit by a cat... so ill wait and see

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Bottom_Climber

I'm not very good at making reviews, but I tried it here. I was looking for a story similar to the novel "Black tech internet Cafe system", and I found it (it took a long time), I think this story is good, it's more or less the same as the story I mentioned above, what I enjoy about this kind of story is the reaction of the players and how the players play it, and that's why I enjoy this story, although the update is a bit long (in my opinion). this is a translation, please understand.

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MahoV

The story is good but you should tell us the original name !

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LordLho

Só posso dizer que a história é muita boa e envolvente. Tem poucos capítulos mais vejo um grande potencial,espero por mais capítulos [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Alex_Parker_6199

I hope you get well soon and I love your novel and hope you can continue to write new chapters. Thanks for bringing to life this story and don’t be discouraged by any negative comments know that I will continue reading so long as you continue writing ;)

me gusta mucho pero la falta algo tampoco me gusta onda que siempre las cosas que haga el protagonista sean muy bien recibidas sin criticas y me parece exagerado pero aparte de eso me parece una buena historia para pasar el rato

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PurpleBear

It's good story, with each character have their own development and background. Even one used character have more character development than I have. Simply this is NOICE.

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PedagangSiput

CH 44. So far the world background is quite good, a very ADVANCED world but lacking in entertainment. Knowing films, anime and games in this world is impressive as Copy - Paste because AI plays an important role in this world. People are starting to enjoy Instant Things, like they are too dependent on AI. So here's what's interesting, MC brings his knowledge of the past into this world with a slightly different nuance. I even found some of the POV reactions very entertaining. So far MC hasn't had any issues that make for a suspenseful story but a slice of relaxed life is also good for my soul, hahaha. Well this is good, Recommendation for a cup of coffee.

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Akshay_Ashokan

can you update faster, and be a faster potato 🥔

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LavaBom

Дуже сподобалося ця новелла, чекаю на продовження. Чекаємо на більшу кількість ігор, та на подорожі по іншим планетам. Я думаю, що можна добавити ще World of Warcraft, та зробити гру або фільми про Star Wars я думаю людям у цьому всесвіті сподобається це.