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С начала история выглядит интересно, но... Then, the author introduces such elements into the story as: The System, Confession to Dumbledore that he is a reincarnator. All this kills the whole essence of the story. In which the character is Voldemort. Once a character admits to being reincarnated, all sense of becoming Voldemort disappears. This is the end and death of this story.
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El MC en un inicio actúa como una persona normal, con una moralidad respetable, aunque en los primeros capítulos se sienta que el actuar del protagonista sea muy estresante, pero cuando llagan a la parte de la historia donde sale del libro, este se vuelve alguien capaz e imponente, no es alguien arrogan, tiene su orgullo pero no es insoportable ni petulante, también cuenta con un objetivo que es de admirar, otra cosa a agregar es que el desarrollo de personaje es fluido y comprensible respecto a su poder, además, lo mejor de todo es que la historia se actualiza diariamente.
La historia me gusta y demás igual que las tramas originales y de los juegos pero jdr quisiera un poco más avance amoroso por lo menos o algo más intriga con nuevos enemigos o cualquier cosa que inventes aún así me gusta la historia
Honestly it isn’t actually good at all, but I suppose alright enough to kill time. It’s quite obviously a translation, but not all that bad considering the other stuff on webnovel. The story line doesnt make any sense at all however, it’s downright stupid and nonsensical and only somewhat interesting because he has voldemorts memories. His decisions are so illogical sometimes that I need to force myself to keep reading.
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This is a very good fanfic. Although the motive is unclear at first, the story shapes up into an intriguing divergent from the original. The translations is thoughtful and carries great grammar (so much so that I did not even know it was a translation until chapter 30).
Eu sei que há no mtl alguem ou o autor pode dar o link para por ir lendo mais a frente ... estou morrendo de curiosidade --------------------------- I know there is no mtl, can someone or the author give the link so I can read further... I'm dying of curiosity
Absolute trash. MC is stupid. Author is also not so bright. The whole story follows canon like it is it's master. Nothing changes no matter what MC does, all cannon events still happen even if they barely make any sense. It's so moronic that I feel like author should be jailed for wasting peoples time.
Liked the beginning, hated some chapters before his ressurection, Loving the current chapters..........................................Good Job
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The MC is stuck in Tom Riddle diary and instead of doing everything he can to get out as soon as possible and reincarnate, he just follow the plot of the Harry Potter second book... He also makes very stupid decisions. Why do that? I believe it's because the author doesn't have any originality and just follow along the second book Chamber of Secrets plot... The only redeeming quality of this fanfic is that the translation is excellent without any mistakes that I could spot.
ik this is just a translation so can't really blame the translator but the author is one unimaginative dude, he's following the canon like his life depends on it.. a lot of the choices he makes are simply stupid, and even the translator has quite a few errors every chapter, it's an ok read, like if you're bored or something but it ain't that interesting, update stability is great tho
Un excelente fanfic con una historia bien desarrollada siendo su comienzo muy original 👌🏻 en mi caso me atrapó su historia, tiene una buena gramática y traducción fluida, en verdad recomiendo esta novela de HP
—An MC with Riddle's memories. —Is a genuin good person. —Isn't dillusional enough to not kill the bad guys. —Story doesn't depicts Ron like a bad guy and grasps every character for who they are.
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Ok. There are some shows which you don't like or criticize while watching but you still watch it and then watching it becomes an addiction. Sigh, this book is just like that. The story is really good from ch 90 the previous chapters are also nice🙂. Ok. the real reason I like it is because it updates everyday and it has become a habit before going to bed. Just that, I would like to make it clear that I respect the MC for having morals but I Do Not Like some of his decisions.
This is mid. It only got good after ch 90. I recomend it to anyone who is here for a light hearted reading.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The story isn't great even after the starting was very good, the translation was flawed in the starting but it's very good right now, at this point I'm only reading it as a daily sope and because of the good translation, like everyone is saying, it has officially become a guilty pleasure.
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At first, this was not what I was expecting before reading. Now I'm addicted to it and I don't know why, I joined WN a long time ago (some months IDK) and have read HP fics - better ones- yet given a review, this on the other hand is not good but the writing is addictive and its almost have become my guilty pleasure. Alas, I'm writing a review and giving it a 5 stars so that it doesn't gets dropped.
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Hey Guys! This is my review- It's a good story, not great, and not too bad either. I don't think it deserves 5 stars because it has flaws. But I love reading it while relaxing.
С начала история выглядит интересно, но... Then, the author introduces such elements into the story as: The System, Confession to Dumbledore that he is a reincarnator. All this kills the whole essence of the story. In which the character is Voldemort. Once a character admits to being reincarnated, all sense of becoming Voldemort disappears. This is the end and death of this story.
Spoiler de révélation El MC en un inicio actúa como una persona normal, con una moralidad respetable, aunque en los primeros capítulos se sienta que el actuar del protagonista sea muy estresante, pero cuando llagan a la parte de la historia donde sale del libro, este se vuelve alguien capaz e imponente, no es alguien arrogan, tiene su orgullo pero no es insoportable ni petulante, también cuenta con un objetivo que es de admirar, otra cosa a agregar es que el desarrollo de personaje es fluido y comprensible respecto a su poder, además, lo mejor de todo es que la historia se actualiza diariamente.
La historia me gusta y demás igual que las tramas originales y de los juegos pero jdr quisiera un poco más avance amoroso por lo menos o algo más intriga con nuevos enemigos o cualquier cosa que inventes aún así me gusta la historia
Honestly it isn’t actually good at all, but I suppose alright enough to kill time. It’s quite obviously a translation, but not all that bad considering the other stuff on webnovel. The story line doesnt make any sense at all however, it’s downright stupid and nonsensical and only somewhat interesting because he has voldemorts memories. His decisions are so illogical sometimes that I need to force myself to keep reading.
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Spoiler de révélation This is a very good fanfic. Although the motive is unclear at first, the story shapes up into an intriguing divergent from the original. The translations is thoughtful and carries great grammar (so much so that I did not even know it was a translation until chapter 30).
Eu sei que há no mtl alguem ou o autor pode dar o link para por ir lendo mais a frente ... estou morrendo de curiosidade --------------------------- I know there is no mtl, can someone or the author give the link so I can read further... I'm dying of curiosity
Absolute trash. MC is stupid. Author is also not so bright. The whole story follows canon like it is it's master. Nothing changes no matter what MC does, all cannon events still happen even if they barely make any sense. It's so moronic that I feel like author should be jailed for wasting peoples time.
Liked the beginning, hated some chapters before his ressurection, Loving the current chapters..........................................Good Job
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Spoiler de révélation The MC is stuck in Tom Riddle diary and instead of doing everything he can to get out as soon as possible and reincarnate, he just follow the plot of the Harry Potter second book... He also makes very stupid decisions. Why do that? I believe it's because the author doesn't have any originality and just follow along the second book Chamber of Secrets plot... The only redeeming quality of this fanfic is that the translation is excellent without any mistakes that I could spot.
ik this is just a translation so can't really blame the translator but the author is one unimaginative dude, he's following the canon like his life depends on it.. a lot of the choices he makes are simply stupid, and even the translator has quite a few errors every chapter, it's an ok read, like if you're bored or something but it ain't that interesting, update stability is great tho
Un excelente fanfic con una historia bien desarrollada siendo su comienzo muy original 👌🏻 en mi caso me atrapó su historia, tiene una buena gramática y traducción fluida, en verdad recomiendo esta novela de HP
—An MC with Riddle's memories. —Is a genuin good person. —Isn't dillusional enough to not kill the bad guys. —Story doesn't depicts Ron like a bad guy and grasps every character for who they are.
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Spoiler de révélation Ok. There are some shows which you don't like or criticize while watching but you still watch it and then watching it becomes an addiction. Sigh, this book is just like that. The story is really good from ch 90 the previous chapters are also nice🙂. Ok. the real reason I like it is because it updates everyday and it has become a habit before going to bed. Just that, I would like to make it clear that I respect the MC for having morals but I Do Not Like some of his decisions.
This is mid. It only got good after ch 90. I recomend it to anyone who is here for a light hearted reading.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The story isn't great even after the starting was very good, the translation was flawed in the starting but it's very good right now, at this point I'm only reading it as a daily sope and because of the good translation, like everyone is saying, it has officially become a guilty pleasure.
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At first, this was not what I was expecting before reading. Now I'm addicted to it and I don't know why, I joined WN a long time ago (some months IDK) and have read HP fics - better ones- yet given a review, this on the other hand is not good but the writing is addictive and its almost have become my guilty pleasure. Alas, I'm writing a review and giving it a 5 stars so that it doesn't gets dropped.
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Hey Guys! This is my review- It's a good story, not great, and not too bad either. I don't think it deserves 5 stars because it has flaws. But I love reading it while relaxing.