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I've read the first few chapters and although the translation was done well without any grammar mistakes, the story itself was not that good. The story starts with the MC as already quite powerful without any explanation or details, it really fells like I started to the fanfic from the middle of the story instead of the first chapter. I thought that as I read a few more chapters things will clear up, unfortunately they didn't, and it seem the author unsuccessfully tried to continue with an air of mystery. So eventually after a few chapters I gave up and dropped it...
Не дочитал(~240глав) , обычная китайская хуйня где у персонажей сюжет броня, сколько бы он с биг-мам и Кайдо не дрался, всё живы и здоровы, потраченного времени очень жаль
Best fanfic I have ever read. Truly a enjoyable reading experience. Don't ming my poor English
I love this fanfic, even though it's a translation but I appreciate the hard work and dedication to translate and post chapters regularly....Op mc, smart and shrewd mc, One piece AU world, peak fights, op enemies, thicc plot.....what more do you want? Just read it!!!
Well, this fan fic was translated entirely using 'AI'. Too many unnatural conversations ruined it completely. It's better to read mtl than this. That's my opinion of course. If someone else likes to read AI works try it. Typical Chinese mc of course.
The translation is pretty good way better then most but the mc personality is so unbelievably boring and stale just not for me
Класс. Мне очень интересно. Пишу, подвлиянием 6 литров сидр и тяжёлой рабочей недели. Рок орёт во всю. Не знаю чем ещё добавить отзыв, но я очень жду продолжения. Последняя глава, прям Вауууууу.
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I’m dropping this,the mc is just watching kaido and sengoku fight and when he fights he’s fighting kizaru and fujitora,also where is the mc’s crew,they’ve disappeared,a few chapters ago he struggles against doflamingo tvd he was injured but even so,also 445th chapter this is supposed to be the epilogue why is this still on,the author made the mc launch an attack on mariejois and then ran away when he saw Imu,Overall what is the author doing
Странный фанфик. Сюжет развивается в странной форме, иногда активно, а иногда почти зависает на месте. Вначале автор пытался раскрывать мир, но после 100 главы он перестал это делать. Главный герой иногда противоречит сам себе, делая решения, которые 10 глав назад он бы никогда не сделал. Странные вещи появляются быстро, вводят в стопор всех, и так же быстро исчезают. Этот фанфик очень странный, но мне не понять одного, зачем автору выгораживать в комментариях реальные дыры в сюжете и поведении персонажей(когда комментаторы аргументированно их описывают), иногда автор просто игнорирует аргументированные замечания. 7/10 от силы, но, честно говоря, мало фанфиков по One piece могут получить 9/10.
luxus naprosto skvělý příběh............................................................................................................................
Un trabajo bastante bueno y decente, me fijé que el MC tiene una personalidad estilo xianxia pero no es desagradable y su desarrollo como personaje es fluido y bien pensado, lo que sí me gustó fueron los momentos de combate bien fluidos y detallados 😉👌🏻
I'll be honest I don't really know what it is, it's not like I dislike the story, but somehow there's something wrong fundamentally that irks me every time I read 4 or 5 chapters my mind starts wandering and I end up doing something else or reading something else, am I the only one? have I finally gone insane by reading too much?
I really like the story, the best Part is that it plays in the past. i Hope there will be more charackter development for His crew. The only thing i really don't Like are conpletly illogical things Like Zorros arrival. i Hope you do not put random charackters that have nothing to so with the worldbuilding in the story. Overall i enjoy Reading your fanfiction and Hope you will continue to Update this interesting Story. thank you for your hard Work!
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Translation is super. Mc is just your typical arrogant hypocritical mc xianxia style. I for one cant root for such an mc but thats just my opinion alone. This is just warning for people that dont like that so they can save time.
It is a good novel. The writing is good. only canon stuff is not there. new things are there to energize it. So it is a good thing.
This is an interesting ff as there aren't many stories of the rocks era...as long as the mc isn't a fanboy and blindly relies on the plot then it's already a story worth reading 👍
I like the setting of the story and I am especially looking forward to what happens after the Rocks Pirates disband. One big problem I see with this story is the fact that the the writing / translation quality seems to get worse with every chapter. It starts out allright but as of approximately chapter 70 it really starts bothering me...
I like this au so far, way better then some of the other Goro Goro no Mi users that are out there👍
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Story is going good but sometimes it jumps from A to C. Generally I want to read with every update. There are lots of places to improve but for a light novel and a fanfiction it's a good one.
Shameless review from the Scholar here, This story is based around our mc who came from earth and knows the plot pretty well. Enjoy the world building and the exhilarating action scenes. Please continue to support this fanfic so that i can continue to release it for free
I've read the first few chapters and although the translation was done well without any grammar mistakes, the story itself was not that good. The story starts with the MC as already quite powerful without any explanation or details, it really fells like I started to the fanfic from the middle of the story instead of the first chapter. I thought that as I read a few more chapters things will clear up, unfortunately they didn't, and it seem the author unsuccessfully tried to continue with an air of mystery. So eventually after a few chapters I gave up and dropped it...
Не дочитал(~240глав) , обычная китайская хуйня где у персонажей сюжет броня, сколько бы он с биг-мам и Кайдо не дрался, всё живы и здоровы, потраченного времени очень жаль
Best fanfic I have ever read. Truly a enjoyable reading experience. Don't ming my poor English
I love this fanfic, even though it's a translation but I appreciate the hard work and dedication to translate and post chapters regularly....Op mc, smart and shrewd mc, One piece AU world, peak fights, op enemies, thicc plot.....what more do you want? Just read it!!!
Well, this fan fic was translated entirely using 'AI'. Too many unnatural conversations ruined it completely. It's better to read mtl than this. That's my opinion of course. If someone else likes to read AI works try it. Typical Chinese mc of course.
The translation is pretty good way better then most but the mc personality is so unbelievably boring and stale just not for me
Класс. Мне очень интересно. Пишу, подвлиянием 6 литров сидр и тяжёлой рабочей недели. Рок орёт во всю. Не знаю чем ещё добавить отзыв, но я очень жду продолжения. Последняя глава, прям Вауууууу.
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I’m dropping this,the mc is just watching kaido and sengoku fight and when he fights he’s fighting kizaru and fujitora,also where is the mc’s crew,they’ve disappeared,a few chapters ago he struggles against doflamingo tvd he was injured but even so,also 445th chapter this is supposed to be the epilogue why is this still on,the author made the mc launch an attack on mariejois and then ran away when he saw Imu,Overall what is the author doing
Странный фанфик. Сюжет развивается в странной форме, иногда активно, а иногда почти зависает на месте. Вначале автор пытался раскрывать мир, но после 100 главы он перестал это делать. Главный герой иногда противоречит сам себе, делая решения, которые 10 глав назад он бы никогда не сделал. Странные вещи появляются быстро, вводят в стопор всех, и так же быстро исчезают. Этот фанфик очень странный, но мне не понять одного, зачем автору выгораживать в комментариях реальные дыры в сюжете и поведении персонажей(когда комментаторы аргументированно их описывают), иногда автор просто игнорирует аргументированные замечания. 7/10 от силы, но, честно говоря, мало фанфиков по One piece могут получить 9/10.
luxus naprosto skvělý příběh............................................................................................................................
Un trabajo bastante bueno y decente, me fijé que el MC tiene una personalidad estilo xianxia pero no es desagradable y su desarrollo como personaje es fluido y bien pensado, lo que sí me gustó fueron los momentos de combate bien fluidos y detallados 😉👌🏻
I'll be honest I don't really know what it is, it's not like I dislike the story, but somehow there's something wrong fundamentally that irks me every time I read 4 or 5 chapters my mind starts wandering and I end up doing something else or reading something else, am I the only one? have I finally gone insane by reading too much?
I really like the story, the best Part is that it plays in the past. i Hope there will be more charackter development for His crew. The only thing i really don't Like are conpletly illogical things Like Zorros arrival. i Hope you do not put random charackters that have nothing to so with the worldbuilding in the story. Overall i enjoy Reading your fanfiction and Hope you will continue to Update this interesting Story. thank you for your hard Work!
Mehhh The novel is bored. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Translation is super. Mc is just your typical arrogant hypocritical mc xianxia style. I for one cant root for such an mc but thats just my opinion alone. This is just warning for people that dont like that so they can save time.
It is a good novel. The writing is good. only canon stuff is not there. new things are there to energize it. So it is a good thing.
This is an interesting ff as there aren't many stories of the rocks era...as long as the mc isn't a fanboy and blindly relies on the plot then it's already a story worth reading 👍
I like the setting of the story and I am especially looking forward to what happens after the Rocks Pirates disband. One big problem I see with this story is the fact that the the writing / translation quality seems to get worse with every chapter. It starts out allright but as of approximately chapter 70 it really starts bothering me...
I like this au so far, way better then some of the other Goro Goro no Mi users that are out there👍
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Story is going good but sometimes it jumps from A to C. Generally I want to read with every update. There are lots of places to improve but for a light novel and a fanfiction it's a good one.
Shameless review from the Scholar here, This story is based around our mc who came from earth and knows the plot pretty well. Enjoy the world building and the exhilarating action scenes. Please continue to support this fanfic so that i can continue to release it for free