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Bien, pero... En general la novela está bien pero hay detalles a nivel del personaje del mc y del trasfondo del mundo que simplemente no puedo entender. -MC: no entiendo su obsesión con mantenerse en su clan y convertirse en su jefe cuando ellos lo desprecian, no lo apoyan en su cultivo e incluso han intentado asesinar a su madre y a él. Si al menos lo dijera casualmente, lo dejaría pasar, pero es que encima lo repite cada 3 capítulos. Parece casi un demonio interno suyo. -Trasfondo del mundo: se deja demasiado al misterio de forma que al no tener suficiente información, cuesta empatizar más con la trama. Entiendo que no todo puede ser revelado, porque perdería la gracia, pero en el momento en el que se necesita de mirar comentarios para poder entender alguna cosa por falta de información, mal vamos.
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I started reading MISSION: SEDUCE THE MASTER! and it's so funny and enjoyable! The way he add humorous comments right in the middle of the action is incredibly refreshing and gives me so many good laughs!! I really like his writing style!!! try to read this book it is really funny it will give you many great laugh
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Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
I read 20 chapters and being honest the story is average, I'm not saying that is trash, but it's not mind blowing good, it's a nice read to pass the time, there are only a feel things that I didn't like, the MC and his cheat being of them, I know it's a erotica story, but it could have been better developed in my humble opinion, like the fact the MC is handsome is ok, but for every woman to be head over heels for him it's just boring, maybe I'm just pick, but you can give it try and if it's your cup of tea go for it.
its great if anyone wants to read this type of novel go read " please, i really didn't want to fall in love with my master" it has 400 chapters i think
I love this novel! Very few errors. The only issue is, to me, there aren’t enough chapters. Other novels that came out at the same time have 200 chapters. I want to read more but I like to spend money not on 10 chapters but more imo.
just reads 2 chapter, it was good writing,.... i like it. i will review it later
A good novel to read. The story flows well, and it's much better than the Interracial one. There is also no clutter with women and politics, leaving room for quality developments. A quality story worth the read to be honest. There are some mistakes here and there with grammar and character name mixup, but other than that, there's nothing that makes you turn away.
I had a great time reading this novel! the writing quality is good making it imaginable. I have enjoyed the chapters so far and want more, lol. 🥰🥰🥰nicee work author kutley.
I like the way the story goes, the female characters and their relationship with MC. I've settled on Chapter 49, I think I'll wait until I accumulate more.
Hello! I found your book when you talked about it on Discord and will start reading it today. I hope it will be a good job. Thanks for your work
Good Starting point, good plot and good grammar, i thought this is a common thing in many novels, what's made this novel diferent, the briliant flow of story and MC. Keep writing and improving
The premise is quite interesting and the tone made me chuckle a couple of times. Definitely an interesting read and a story with potential. I hope you keep writing!
This book creates an exciting story atmosphere where the characters face challenges and unexpected turns of events. Intriguing moments, such as the appearance and activation of the system, promise exciting plot development and debunking readers' expectations. Details about the characters and their surroundings, as well as internal conflicts, create the basis for the dynamic development of the plot and the possible development of the characters. A comment on the system, its goals and its impact on the further course of events anticipates interesting developments and supports the reader's interest in the further development of the plot.
Too early for a informative review, but it starts great. I ll do one after 50 chaps. Give it a try guys.
Honestly, I had no expectations before I started reading the novel, but after reading it, it changed completely. This was a hidden gem for me. After encountering a lot of disgusting novels under the name of comedy, this novel came like medicine. The best thing is that there is no polyamory abomination in the harem. The comedy entertained me, I laughed a lot. 5/5
for author support .no red flags .anyone can .good grammar & pronouns.smooth story flow.gals are good.mc is not dumb or Simp.he does best of his capacity.give the author a chance u won't REGRET
We need more chapters, comrade daoist. We look forward to more chapters [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am writing this review just to help the author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The first two chapters aren't bad, I'll be waiting for more chapters! Thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Friends, allow me to have your attention for a moment. I would like to start by announcing this book and offering you complete freedom to express your own opinions (within reasonable bounds, of course). I welcome any advice, ideas, and the like. If you find a spelling error, a plot-related issue, or anything similar, my Discord is always open to you! (The link is in the Warning). Enjoy your reading!
Bien, pero... En general la novela está bien pero hay detalles a nivel del personaje del mc y del trasfondo del mundo que simplemente no puedo entender. -MC: no entiendo su obsesión con mantenerse en su clan y convertirse en su jefe cuando ellos lo desprecian, no lo apoyan en su cultivo e incluso han intentado asesinar a su madre y a él. Si al menos lo dijera casualmente, lo dejaría pasar, pero es que encima lo repite cada 3 capítulos. Parece casi un demonio interno suyo. -Trasfondo del mundo: se deja demasiado al misterio de forma que al no tener suficiente información, cuesta empatizar más con la trama. Entiendo que no todo puede ser revelado, porque perdería la gracia, pero en el momento en el que se necesita de mirar comentarios para poder entender alguna cosa por falta de información, mal vamos.
Spoiler de révélation I started reading MISSION: SEDUCE THE MASTER! and it's so funny and enjoyable! The way he add humorous comments right in the middle of the action is incredibly refreshing and gives me so many good laughs!! I really like his writing style!!! try to read this book it is really funny it will give you many great laugh
I love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this storyI love this story
Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
I read 20 chapters and being honest the story is average, I'm not saying that is trash, but it's not mind blowing good, it's a nice read to pass the time, there are only a feel things that I didn't like, the MC and his cheat being of them, I know it's a erotica story, but it could have been better developed in my humble opinion, like the fact the MC is handsome is ok, but for every woman to be head over heels for him it's just boring, maybe I'm just pick, but you can give it try and if it's your cup of tea go for it.
its great if anyone wants to read this type of novel go read " please, i really didn't want to fall in love with my master" it has 400 chapters i think
I love this novel! Very few errors. The only issue is, to me, there aren’t enough chapters. Other novels that came out at the same time have 200 chapters. I want to read more but I like to spend money not on 10 chapters but more imo.
just reads 2 chapter, it was good writing,.... i like it. i will review it later
A good novel to read. The story flows well, and it's much better than the Interracial one. There is also no clutter with women and politics, leaving room for quality developments. A quality story worth the read to be honest. There are some mistakes here and there with grammar and character name mixup, but other than that, there's nothing that makes you turn away.
I had a great time reading this novel! the writing quality is good making it imaginable. I have enjoyed the chapters so far and want more, lol. 🥰🥰🥰nicee work author kutley.
I like the way the story goes, the female characters and their relationship with MC. I've settled on Chapter 49, I think I'll wait until I accumulate more.
Hello! I found your book when you talked about it on Discord and will start reading it today. I hope it will be a good job. Thanks for your work
Good Starting point, good plot and good grammar, i thought this is a common thing in many novels, what's made this novel diferent, the briliant flow of story and MC. Keep writing and improving
The premise is quite interesting and the tone made me chuckle a couple of times. Definitely an interesting read and a story with potential. I hope you keep writing!
This book creates an exciting story atmosphere where the characters face challenges and unexpected turns of events. Intriguing moments, such as the appearance and activation of the system, promise exciting plot development and debunking readers' expectations. Details about the characters and their surroundings, as well as internal conflicts, create the basis for the dynamic development of the plot and the possible development of the characters. A comment on the system, its goals and its impact on the further course of events anticipates interesting developments and supports the reader's interest in the further development of the plot.
Too early for a informative review, but it starts great. I ll do one after 50 chaps. Give it a try guys.
Honestly, I had no expectations before I started reading the novel, but after reading it, it changed completely. This was a hidden gem for me. After encountering a lot of disgusting novels under the name of comedy, this novel came like medicine. The best thing is that there is no polyamory abomination in the harem. The comedy entertained me, I laughed a lot. 5/5
for author support .no red flags .anyone can .good grammar & pronouns.smooth story flow.gals are good.mc is not dumb or Simp.he does best of his capacity.give the author a chance u won't REGRET
We need more chapters, comrade daoist. We look forward to more chapters [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am writing this review just to help the author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The first two chapters aren't bad, I'll be waiting for more chapters! Thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Friends, allow me to have your attention for a moment. I would like to start by announcing this book and offering you complete freedom to express your own opinions (within reasonable bounds, of course). I welcome any advice, ideas, and the like. If you find a spelling error, a plot-related issue, or anything similar, my Discord is always open to you! (The link is in the Warning). Enjoy your reading!