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A rare good translation, would be even better if the translator at least prove read before releasing. Most chapters are fine but there are some stupid ones where part of the chapter loop, Kizaru suddenly changes names with an Uchiha kid, and times where there are some comments from the original author inserted in the middle of the sentence. Any attempts to make the translator correct and re upload the chapters have been unsuccessful. After all, it's too much work compared to the usual copy paste.
trash mtl... "author" dont even read what he post as there are "translation of previous text:" in middle of chapters... pathetic
Funny, exciting, engaging and overall a very entertaining read! The pacing is quite fast but doesn’t feel too rushed, leaving enough room for the story to progress towards its potential. I recommend blitzing through this!
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MC supposedly is a person who wants to slack of but the in first’s chapters already is okay with going after the position of Hokage, it would be understandable if he was just saying so people stopped bothering him but it doesn’t appears to be so
truly good fic, very funny, im waiting for more chapters to continue , good job on translation!
A good translation, laid-back mc, things are happening exactly how they are supposed to happen. There is only one chapter where the translation quality goes 5/10, otherwise the Chinese translation is a soli 8/10 to 9/10 at places.
I am giving an early review. So I actually don't know how the story development will be, but overall it is quite good
This is pretty good quality for a translation. Feel like reading from an actual translation group from novelupdate Absjrjrvrid the djbh
I personally loved the story, each chapter flows to the next very well. it sticks to the onepiece Kizaru powers and doesn't bring any random Bs plot convenience in. Obviously Kizaru becomes very strong later on and there isn't truly anyone who can beat him. which doesn't really take away from the story as much as you would think due to the proper world building elements. it's nice that he's born long before Naruto is. (he's born in Minatos Generation) and it's a nice touch that we also get multiple characters pov's throughout the story. so 5/5 love the story so far if you have any questions let me know
A rare good translation, would be even better if the translator at least prove read before releasing. Most chapters are fine but there are some stupid ones where part of the chapter loop, Kizaru suddenly changes names with an Uchiha kid, and times where there are some comments from the original author inserted in the middle of the sentence. Any attempts to make the translator correct and re upload the chapters have been unsuccessful. After all, it's too much work compared to the usual copy paste.
trash mtl... "author" dont even read what he post as there are "translation of previous text:" in middle of chapters... pathetic
Funny, exciting, engaging and overall a very entertaining read! The pacing is quite fast but doesn’t feel too rushed, leaving enough room for the story to progress towards its potential. I recommend blitzing through this!
who is mc love interest [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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MC supposedly is a person who wants to slack of but the in first’s chapters already is okay with going after the position of Hokage, it would be understandable if he was just saying so people stopped bothering him but it doesn’t appears to be so
truly good fic, very funny, im waiting for more chapters to continue , good job on translation!
A good translation, laid-back mc, things are happening exactly how they are supposed to happen. There is only one chapter where the translation quality goes 5/10, otherwise the Chinese translation is a soli 8/10 to 9/10 at places.
I am giving an early review. So I actually don't know how the story development will be, but overall it is quite good
This is pretty good quality for a translation. Feel like reading from an actual translation group from novelupdate Absjrjrvrid the djbh
I personally loved the story, each chapter flows to the next very well. it sticks to the onepiece Kizaru powers and doesn't bring any random Bs plot convenience in. Obviously Kizaru becomes very strong later on and there isn't truly anyone who can beat him. which doesn't really take away from the story as much as you would think due to the proper world building elements. it's nice that he's born long before Naruto is. (he's born in Minatos Generation) and it's a nice touch that we also get multiple characters pov's throughout the story. so 5/5 love the story so far if you have any questions let me know