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Thank you for translating this fanfic, the ending can be said to be good or bad. I hope we have a new naruto fanfic. thank you author........
The translation of the novel is very good. As a fellow translator, I know this well. Therefore, I would like to ask for permission from the owner of this translated work to translate your work into the language of my country. (The language is Thai because I am Thai. I am telling you in advance in case anyone asks what language you want to translate it into.)
It was good at the beginning but it all changed when the boruto arc started and now he’s just doing ntr left and right without reason
Cant yoichi move without spreading his seed? Honestly i like the earlier chapters but now it just seems like he is becoming more of a degenerate at this point.
Idk man ................................................................................................................................................................
La sipnosis suena tan boba, que vale la pena leerlo solo por las posibles risas, jaja ________________________$___________________$______________#___________&_______________
Take a shit story idea, stolen from chinese fics, make them even worse, create a clickbait cover that borders on hentai and you get this story. Funny how the "author" even admits to stealing & "detoxing" the story and WN let's him get away with it :D
You should rename the title of this story to: an uchiha who takes advantage of vulnerable women. The roulette system is nearly nonexistent throughout the later chapters, oh and the mc who I like to call “Yoiciddy” becomes the diddler of the uchiha, it focuses more on ntr, mc promises of reviving their loved ones through sexual favours and recording the ntr moments to blackmail kushina who wants minato to be revived etc these things really ruined the story imo. The writing is good even if there are typos but it’s manageable 👍 I’ll keep reading as I’ve come this far might as well finish it.
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Sinceramente la historia me gustó mucho, pero desde que empezó la parte de Kushina con el MC me empezó a dar asco el MC, así que sinceramente dejo esto, si fuera otra persona la que pasa por lo mismo (osea un enemigo) lo podría pasar pero me gusta Kushina y odio el trato que recibe
Yet another fanfiction where the author/translator cannot tell the difference between 'Thought' and "Speech".
some characters in the stories are d#mb, there's NTR in the story, harem also. mc stole fugaku's wife btw. other possible members in the harem: tsunade, an uzumaki member name Mina, yugito.
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Começa bem mas como toda história desse modo acaba se enrolando e perdendo a linha no meio do caminho.,.......................,.........................
I like this novel, especially when the mc NTRs my fugaku wife hahaha it's really fun I highly recommend this novel to read, although of course not everyone will like it, everyone has their own tastes.
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another one.... daaamn I have just put all ur novels in my library. gotta go to patreon n donate for the fulfilling works u av been putting out... u sir r 1 of the best fan fic writer out dea
The author just doesn’t miss! Check out his other works, you won’t be disappointed. It’s a refreshing take on a Naruto ff and the quality of writing does not disappoint👌🏻
Extremely Funny novel. I don't understand why everyone is taking this seriously. This is half crack fic with his ridiculous cheats. I absolutely recommend it
OK, this novel seems to be bad because of the reviews, but it has one of the best synopsis I've ever read, so I'm going to give it a chance.
i actually loved the story till the ntr scene. it was exciting till they did it actually. i was hoping that fugaku would die and then take over. now there is ntr and then u are going to make it a hream. im still going to continue since i love ur pokemon novel
I've read till chapter 6 and honestly I'm very disappointed. The transaction itself is excellent with almost no mistakes. So what I'm disappointed about is the stupid Golden Finger the MC received. It is a power roulette where every month he receive a different power. And 9 out of 10 The power he receive is stupid, and many times it will screw him over instead of helping him... I hate reading those kind of fanfics where the MC is constantly bashed around so I dropped it early on.
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I give 5 stars to balance the rate. This fanfic deserved better rating. It should be 4.5 for story development, though some writing is confusing because of miss character name or another. But overall, it is good fanfic to pass the time
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The story is not much about his random powers... It's not bad... not a masterpiece either... but definitely not bad.
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Лично мне понравилось. Когда нечего делать или просто скучно его можно прочитать. Особенно мне понравились несколько моментов. Первое это про то что он стал типа джинчурики. Второе что у него прикольный призыв. И третье надеюсь предложит ей встречаться.
Frankly, I liked the novel very much. but of course because it has a funny and nice plot. I would be very grateful if you could send me the original name. Please let me get notified.
And Another One! I had read it quite a bit, it has some 'chine-poison' but I detox it quite good, so it's enjoyable. The 'Superpowers' the MC obtain are quite different from my other translation, this one are more random, as the powers can be hilarious, but the story is consistent and good. Enjoy It!
Thank you for translating this fanfic, the ending can be said to be good or bad. I hope we have a new naruto fanfic. thank you author........
The translation of the novel is very good. As a fellow translator, I know this well. Therefore, I would like to ask for permission from the owner of this translated work to translate your work into the language of my country. (The language is Thai because I am Thai. I am telling you in advance in case anyone asks what language you want to translate it into.)
It was good at the beginning but it all changed when the boruto arc started and now he’s just doing ntr left and right without reason
Cant yoichi move without spreading his seed? Honestly i like the earlier chapters but now it just seems like he is becoming more of a degenerate at this point.
Idk man ................................................................................................................................................................
La sipnosis suena tan boba, que vale la pena leerlo solo por las posibles risas, jaja ________________________$___________________$______________#___________&_______________
Take a shit story idea, stolen from chinese fics, make them even worse, create a clickbait cover that borders on hentai and you get this story. Funny how the "author" even admits to stealing & "detoxing" the story and WN let's him get away with it :D
You should rename the title of this story to: an uchiha who takes advantage of vulnerable women. The roulette system is nearly nonexistent throughout the later chapters, oh and the mc who I like to call “Yoiciddy” becomes the diddler of the uchiha, it focuses more on ntr, mc promises of reviving their loved ones through sexual favours and recording the ntr moments to blackmail kushina who wants minato to be revived etc these things really ruined the story imo. The writing is good even if there are typos but it’s manageable 👍 I’ll keep reading as I’ve come this far might as well finish it.
Spoiler de révélation Sinceramente la historia me gustó mucho, pero desde que empezó la parte de Kushina con el MC me empezó a dar asco el MC, así que sinceramente dejo esto, si fuera otra persona la que pasa por lo mismo (osea un enemigo) lo podría pasar pero me gusta Kushina y odio el trato que recibe
Yet another fanfiction where the author/translator cannot tell the difference between 'Thought' and "Speech".
some characters in the stories are d#mb, there's NTR in the story, harem also. mc stole fugaku's wife btw. other possible members in the harem: tsunade, an uzumaki member name Mina, yugito.
Spoiler de révélation Começa bem mas como toda história desse modo acaba se enrolando e perdendo a linha no meio do caminho.,.......................,.........................
I like this novel, especially when the mc NTRs my fugaku wife hahaha it's really fun I highly recommend this novel to read, although of course not everyone will like it, everyone has their own tastes.
Spoiler de révélation another one.... daaamn I have just put all ur novels in my library. gotta go to patreon n donate for the fulfilling works u av been putting out... u sir r 1 of the best fan fic writer out dea
The author just doesn’t miss! Check out his other works, you won’t be disappointed. It’s a refreshing take on a Naruto ff and the quality of writing does not disappoint👌🏻
Extremely Funny novel. I don't understand why everyone is taking this seriously. This is half crack fic with his ridiculous cheats. I absolutely recommend it
OK, this novel seems to be bad because of the reviews, but it has one of the best synopsis I've ever read, so I'm going to give it a chance.
i actually loved the story till the ntr scene. it was exciting till they did it actually. i was hoping that fugaku would die and then take over. now there is ntr and then u are going to make it a hream. im still going to continue since i love ur pokemon novel
I've read till chapter 6 and honestly I'm very disappointed. The transaction itself is excellent with almost no mistakes. So what I'm disappointed about is the stupid Golden Finger the MC received. It is a power roulette where every month he receive a different power. And 9 out of 10 The power he receive is stupid, and many times it will screw him over instead of helping him... I hate reading those kind of fanfics where the MC is constantly bashed around so I dropped it early on.
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I give 5 stars to balance the rate. This fanfic deserved better rating. It should be 4.5 for story development, though some writing is confusing because of miss character name or another. But overall, it is good fanfic to pass the time
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The story is not much about his random powers... It's not bad... not a masterpiece either... but definitely not bad.
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Лично мне понравилось. Когда нечего делать или просто скучно его можно прочитать. Особенно мне понравились несколько моментов. Первое это про то что он стал типа джинчурики. Второе что у него прикольный призыв. И третье надеюсь предложит ей встречаться.
Frankly, I liked the novel very much. but of course because it has a funny and nice plot. I would be very grateful if you could send me the original name. Please let me get notified.
And Another One! I had read it quite a bit, it has some 'chine-poison' but I detox it quite good, so it's enjoyable. The 'Superpowers' the MC obtain are quite different from my other translation, this one are more random, as the powers can be hilarious, but the story is consistent and good. Enjoy It!