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One of the few high quality fanfic books that I've ever read. Moreover, the mc got brain and how he developed his powers. I want to rate it as 5 stars but sadly, I'm also a fan of Seven Shrek Devils so I'll give it 4 stars. I just hope it wasn't translated otherwise, I'll lower my ratings.
Even if this is not a Harem, just asking, is there any romance in the story??
Is this book truly has no romance? even just a single heroine with no harem???
It’s pretty good and then it gets very cringe very quick, mc hates tang san because his dad killed mc’s parents, which is whatever, but actually the mc hates literally everyone tang san talks to by association, this is an mc that hates the people who have associated with associates of the people who wronged him. Mc develops a public library, and guess who isn’t allowed to partake in the PUBLIC LIBRARY?
One of best soul lands Mc is smart and he will make his own god positon [ the first20 chapters is not too good but it will be much more better
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Great fic. The translation is also very good, but it's not a fic for everyone. The story is interesting, the MC's path and the ways he decided to develop make sense. Most of the time the MC is also at least as intelligent as a normal person, which is really a lot for a Chinese fic and insanely intelligent for a Chinese cultivation fic. Throughout the fic the MC only had one or two bouts of mild stupidity and these moments can be justified as moments where the MC was controlled by his emotions instead of just being stupid. This is really a huge plus point for this fic since 99% of Chinese fics are unreadable due to the levels of stupidity. This is a fic that focuses much more on theory and cultivation development than combat and adventure, basically it's a fic for those who like to read more about a wizard developing magic than fighting. My complaint and the reason I gave 4 stars instead of 5 is that the translator is a complete mercenary on Patreon. He is a translator, translating a fanfic and is charging more than original novels charge, much less fanfics. Seeing someone trying to profit in such a despicable way from someone else's work is really sad. I truly believe that if the translator had chosen to charge more in line with a translated fanfic he could have even received more. I myself would be willing to sponsor $10 for the 50 advanced chapters, even though it is still a lot for a translated fanfic, but paying $40 for a translated fanfic is simply illogical.
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Really good story but I can’t bother reading anymore cause it’s the worst story I’ve ever followed properly in terms of update rate with 1 chapter per day and the chapters are super short with barely any content anymore
5/5 me gusto bastante la historia esperar que no lo abandonen como muchos otros ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like that the story has a new character who neither hates nor loves tang san it's interesting to see the world and not every 2nd or 3rd chapter be dependent on interaction or content from tang san
Author doing a very good translation of the work, I saw this one a while ago but MTL was so terribly done I could barely go past the first 30 chapter without loosing the will to continue reading. By the way author you might wanna point out you are translating it...
Это прекрасная работа, получил истинное удовольствие от прочтения. Жду продолжения.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recomme
If you can add ice empress or 1m old worm on story, its nice.. they have align on spirit power of mc..............................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
When i was reading the early chapter,I thought it was like these depressed fanfic even if the mc got himself a good brain. But ,after that it proved me wrong in giving me fun and also a good charactere development,a well thought evolution of power,and a theory believable enough to receive power. Anyway,Can someone give me a recomendation of a novel or fanfic with similar thème and charactere development please🙏🙏🙏
No geral é bom, o problema e a trama, essas Fanfic de Douluo com os protagonista procurando problema com Tang San ou tendo uma richa de sangue com eles são entediantes e preguiçosas, fazer toda trama girar em torno de ser inimigo do Tang San mostra uma falta de criatividade do autor imensa, sério eu nem gosto do Tang San, larguei de ler Douluo justamente por achar ele um chato, mais o protagonista dessa Fanfic consegue ser pior.
I have read many doulou novel. but this is my one of the personal favourite. all other doulou novel mc become already exists god or with help of the system. But in this novel mc wish to became god of the knowledge by relying on fate. but i really want to know who will be the heroine is a.
YES FINALLY, A WORK WITHOUT ROMANCE! (this is rare so im really hoping the novel ends up being great)
Good novel, it started slow but now it has a good pace............,..........................................................................................................
A genuinely good story and a good power system that’s not just protagonist get strong fast. I hope to see more of this, and any other works. You do in the future
When he goes to Yu Xiaogang and beg him to take him as a disciple, i already stop reading it. 5* for the effort.
Characters are well developed and the strengthening progress is gradual and in line with the story. Using the MCs research to expand and contract the difference in decelopment between him and Tang San also makes sense. However, while the story progresses well there is no romance at all. Read up to chapter 50
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The story is good, but I get bored reading the chapters..... ×××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××
very good, I really liked the idea of not following the support path that is usually followed when the spirit is not a weapon, I want to see how the protagonist will develop.
It's a well-thought-out fic...with great development so far Btw author is this translation or your original ....if it's translation can you give link to raw?
One of the few high quality fanfic books that I've ever read. Moreover, the mc got brain and how he developed his powers. I want to rate it as 5 stars but sadly, I'm also a fan of Seven Shrek Devils so I'll give it 4 stars. I just hope it wasn't translated otherwise, I'll lower my ratings.
Even if this is not a Harem, just asking, is there any romance in the story??
Is this book truly has no romance? even just a single heroine with no harem???
It’s pretty good and then it gets very cringe very quick, mc hates tang san because his dad killed mc’s parents, which is whatever, but actually the mc hates literally everyone tang san talks to by association, this is an mc that hates the people who have associated with associates of the people who wronged him. Mc develops a public library, and guess who isn’t allowed to partake in the PUBLIC LIBRARY?
One of best soul lands Mc is smart and he will make his own god positon [ the first20 chapters is not too good but it will be much more better
Spoiler de révélation Great fic. The translation is also very good, but it's not a fic for everyone. The story is interesting, the MC's path and the ways he decided to develop make sense. Most of the time the MC is also at least as intelligent as a normal person, which is really a lot for a Chinese fic and insanely intelligent for a Chinese cultivation fic. Throughout the fic the MC only had one or two bouts of mild stupidity and these moments can be justified as moments where the MC was controlled by his emotions instead of just being stupid. This is really a huge plus point for this fic since 99% of Chinese fics are unreadable due to the levels of stupidity. This is a fic that focuses much more on theory and cultivation development than combat and adventure, basically it's a fic for those who like to read more about a wizard developing magic than fighting. My complaint and the reason I gave 4 stars instead of 5 is that the translator is a complete mercenary on Patreon. He is a translator, translating a fanfic and is charging more than original novels charge, much less fanfics. Seeing someone trying to profit in such a despicable way from someone else's work is really sad. I truly believe that if the translator had chosen to charge more in line with a translated fanfic he could have even received more. I myself would be willing to sponsor $10 for the 50 advanced chapters, even though it is still a lot for a translated fanfic, but paying $40 for a translated fanfic is simply illogical.
Good............................................................................................................................................................................................................... ... .
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
Really good story but I can’t bother reading anymore cause it’s the worst story I’ve ever followed properly in terms of update rate with 1 chapter per day and the chapters are super short with barely any content anymore
5/5 me gusto bastante la historia esperar que no lo abandonen como muchos otros ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like that the story has a new character who neither hates nor loves tang san it's interesting to see the world and not every 2nd or 3rd chapter be dependent on interaction or content from tang san
Author doing a very good translation of the work, I saw this one a while ago but MTL was so terribly done I could barely go past the first 30 chapter without loosing the will to continue reading. By the way author you might wanna point out you are translating it...
Это прекрасная работа, получил истинное удовольствие от прочтения. Жду продолжения.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recomme
If you can add ice empress or 1m old worm on story, its nice.. they have align on spirit power of mc..............................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
When i was reading the early chapter,I thought it was like these depressed fanfic even if the mc got himself a good brain. But ,after that it proved me wrong in giving me fun and also a good charactere development,a well thought evolution of power,and a theory believable enough to receive power. Anyway,Can someone give me a recomendation of a novel or fanfic with similar thème and charactere development please🙏🙏🙏
No geral é bom, o problema e a trama, essas Fanfic de Douluo com os protagonista procurando problema com Tang San ou tendo uma richa de sangue com eles são entediantes e preguiçosas, fazer toda trama girar em torno de ser inimigo do Tang San mostra uma falta de criatividade do autor imensa, sério eu nem gosto do Tang San, larguei de ler Douluo justamente por achar ele um chato, mais o protagonista dessa Fanfic consegue ser pior.
I have read many doulou novel. but this is my one of the personal favourite. all other doulou novel mc become already exists god or with help of the system. But in this novel mc wish to became god of the knowledge by relying on fate. but i really want to know who will be the heroine is a.
YES FINALLY, A WORK WITHOUT ROMANCE! (this is rare so im really hoping the novel ends up being great)
Good novel, it started slow but now it has a good pace............,..........................................................................................................
A genuinely good story and a good power system that’s not just protagonist get strong fast. I hope to see more of this, and any other works. You do in the future
When he goes to Yu Xiaogang and beg him to take him as a disciple, i already stop reading it. 5* for the effort.
Characters are well developed and the strengthening progress is gradual and in line with the story. Using the MCs research to expand and contract the difference in decelopment between him and Tang San also makes sense. However, while the story progresses well there is no romance at all. Read up to chapter 50
Spoiler de révélation [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is good, but I get bored reading the chapters..... ×××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××
very good, I really liked the idea of not following the support path that is usually followed when the spirit is not a weapon, I want to see how the protagonist will develop.
It's a well-thought-out fic...with great development so far Btw author is this translation or your original ....if it's translation can you give link to raw?
Better than I expected it to be🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇