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the story is good. it's just frustrating that some names are still in Chinese. the author should be careful before uploading and not just keep on asking for our powerstones. other than that, all is good.
Newbie Reader desu~~~ A very good Naruto fanfic. Would recommend to read. Please continue the story please
I've only read two chapters but this narrative POV is just way too ai generated, description of the novel included. Feels like one paragraph we're just reading about how the MC walked one step and then the next paragraph we fast forwarded the whole day. I can't not be bothered reading like this so I have to drop it. maybe it turns out better but it ain't it for me unfortunately.
This is some good stuff. In the future this guy could probably create his own summon beast clan with senjutsu.
shameless author (or translator here), this is a rewrite and translation , so cheer me up and give me your stones ! 😁
the story is good. it's just frustrating that some names are still in Chinese. the author should be careful before uploading and not just keep on asking for our powerstones. other than that, all is good.
Newbie Reader desu~~~ A very good Naruto fanfic. Would recommend to read. Please continue the story please
I've only read two chapters but this narrative POV is just way too ai generated, description of the novel included. Feels like one paragraph we're just reading about how the MC walked one step and then the next paragraph we fast forwarded the whole day. I can't not be bothered reading like this so I have to drop it. maybe it turns out better but it ain't it for me unfortunately.
This is some good stuff. In the future this guy could probably create his own summon beast clan with senjutsu.
shameless author (or translator here), this is a rewrite and translation , so cheer me up and give me your stones ! 😁