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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I, of course, have to give myself a 5-star review. As a long-time reader of this genre, I plan to avoid clichés as much as possible. I hope to update this story at least once per day. Although he will gain points for killing people, I don't plan to make him too much of a murder-hobo. I mostly want him to scheme against people stronger than him.
this is looking like a banger! uqjigduqyvduhyqwbqwhvuywqiugdqyqwuiydbqwidgqwiybujqvdiyqgdqudbgwquyigqwiuqbwyuwqgwqgdqiyudgqwydgqwiydgqwi
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