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Écrire un avisDidn't like the flowery descriptions for almost everything. What can be conveyed in a paragraph is stretched to fill the whole chapter. The title is about copying and upgrading talents but that only happens in the beginning, the author later moves away from it to focus more on chaos and void. Many elements that were introduced in power system are simply forgotten until the author remembers them after ages, only to mention a few words and forget it.
The glazing never ends, even Northern has started glazing himself. Greatest of all time? Did he really call himself that?
Till around 600 chapters I rly enjoyed it but after, idk what to feel, was too disappointed due to the fact that the major attraction of the novel, the system through which he could copy talents, author just changed it into void and chaos, what's the point of cheat if everything is void chaos and mc began to skip copying talent and directly jump began jumping stages. It quickly fell off for me because the copy and upgrade system was the thing i enjoyed the most.
Just another trash story about the MC being basically tortured over and over. The writing is terrible. Most chapters are pointless. Filled with flowery descriptions for things that aren't necessary. One chapter was basically a description of the sky and moons. Even though we had already been told about them previously. Soo much filler garbage to make more chapters. A decent story concept written by a trash author.
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents" follows Northern, a talentless protagonist who gains the ability to copy powers. The story starts slow but builds up to an exciting journey of growth and strength. Fans of gradual character development and overpowered protagonists will enjoy it.
The text is very messy and disorganized. Is it correctable on the next pages? I left it on the second page, it's annoying.
Ok. Second official review of this book.Before I begin, I'd like to say that, despite my numerous comments in this book, I do enjoy it to an extent.Iv'e invested a lot of time into the story and unfortunately, it's impossible for me to drop it at this point. I have to see it through Now, in light of that, I will first talk about the redeeming qualities of the book 1. Story and world development : One of the best parts of this book is it's rich and expansive world building. It's power system, rankings, locations and characters have a lot of potential. I've said it before. Each of these form a little branch out of the main storyline which I believe, if shed with light and expanded would give the book a more robust cast and story line, something like Naruto and one piece where even the side characters are interesting and aren't just there to assist the main character. A good example is rhusborough (doubt I spelt that right, could never get it right at first try) and his agenda, his story, another is the coup currently underway by Dante which should show us deeper into the inner workings and higher ups of the continent. And our resident Aizen, Raven and her intentions. I want to applaud the author for creating a robust cast with diverse motivations and characters. Lore that isn't that head aching to read and a power system that isn't that generic. .I enjoy expansions such as that 2. I had to think long about a second as I didn't want to drop only a single positive. So, I'd like commend the writing quality, or rather , the improvement of it. The author really listened to us on that one and made efforts to make the delivery easy to digest with killing the quality drastically. Kudos, author Now, I'm going to go into the negative. I hope both the author and the book possess an SSS rank defence talent because I'm about to unleash weeks of venom I've been restraining for this day 1.Forced power progression, plot and interaction. Author, what the fuck... Like really.. what the fuck are you doing??? Sometimes I read your book and I wonder why you wish to irrevocably push ur story towards suicide. Firstly, Northern has to most abilities in his bag than any other web novel mc I've read and trust me, I've read a lot but it now poses the question, does he need that many? It has reached the point where you the author don't remember them for chapters on end and end up having to force them back into the story.Northern is over fed really as a character and it kills the story for me. Let me use a practical example, Naruto learnt the rasengan, then the rasenshuriken, then sage mode, then KCM and finally sage of six paths power. At every junction of these level ups, he was at the right point between powerful enough to keep up and weak enough that it isn't bland watching him. There was struggle, inguinity and creativity on how to use his abilities and the urge to grow stronger to match the plot of the story. Northern on the other hand, is the most rushed shoddy excuse for character growth I've ever seen, to the point that I feel nothing watching him fight, no excitement when he discovers a new way to use his abilities, my heart doesn't shake when he goes up against stronger foes. Nothing. He copies talents with no idea of synergy, even a human like me would think of synergy but anything that looks cool to him, he takes it like it's pokemon. He has to catch them all. Void flames Chaos flames that doesn't exist and can burn away the idea of concepts Void force that works like gojo's limitless black lance chaos eyes (the most ridiculous in this list) reality warping a useless amount of summons that don't impact the story line, their just there to fulfill stereotypes and many more. .. . What the fuck is this list author? What can fight this??? Any struggle you put in front of this would be forced and that's what's killing ur story Every foe he has faced so far can be killed by the base powers of all these abilities Zero struggle, zero resistance, zero excitement The fights are bland and I cry blood reading them sometimes. It's like watching Zeno raid through a Lego world. Secondly, this is very important so I'll try to explain well. You force the shit out of plot. Some many aspects of your story are unnatural and deliberately luminary level cringe 1. Raven's hate for northern: I can't be the only one that sees that what Raven did from the ship to whatever, doesn't warrant the amount of hate this nigga has for her. He literally created a whole as summon just to kill her. Rather than hate, he's obsessed and if that's the route you use to mount a romantic relationship, I pity you. I know you were trying to invert sunny and nephis's relationship but you literally forced it down the readers and northern's throat. Especially when you tried to potray northern as a 'smart' character. He tried to use her as well but got beat, be a man and suck it up 2.The effects of northern's power on his being: Truth be told, I understand wanting to nerf absolute power with a crippling flaw but in my opinion, you ruined the character for me. His power were meant to eat at his humanity and turn him empty. An example of that would be Gabimaru of Hell's paradise, who became numb to morality and emotional stimuli.. That was what I was expecting and was excited for it but instead of turning hollow or less empathetic, he became the most arrogant, cringe delivering, self conceited and prideful mf to walk the nine realms. Nothing about his character is realistic. If you wanted to turn him hollow, it should have been a gradual process, from him understanding he isn't phased by taking a life anymore to being unable to care about the well being of strangers such as Dante's men Instead, this ahh thinks he's the king of the world, with his weird ass "Im enough"self glazing piece of turd mentality and this mentality is born from the plot armour that is his abilities. Again, it is too late to change his character design without making a huge right turn in ur story but I think it's worth it. Ur mc is annoying, narcissistic and full of himself without be charming with it. Characters can't be this level of an ass without be charming, an example is Arsene from monarch of darkness. Without it, you look retarded 3.The glazing: OMG, when does it end????? ? every interaction, every conversation, every character seems to be on the road to sucking this man's already intergalactic ego. Damn!! ! Characters with potential are reduced to mere glazing devices to the point I don't respect them anymore. The story line shifts in a way that must drop the limelight on his ass, with cringe ass lines and development . Everything lives for that man's glazing and it's frustrating as hell Can't I just read a five chapter stretch without hearing "I'm the shit" and "northern is the shit" written in a million different ways? ?? I understand wanting to shine on ur mc but it's become toxic and unhealthy for the story Surprise and concern at his power is reasonable but you stress it so much, the fear, the despair just staring in his eyes, Fuck Sorry, got carried away. I'll swallow the rest and just advice you to kill the glazing and focus on the story. Ur plot line is wonderful, but ur killing it with ur own writing #stopthebloodyglazing Huh, I was able to fit all my complaints into a single section. That's about it I heard you were Nigerian so I was extra motivated when writing this. I want to make it clear, once again, that despite the severity of my words, I'm a supporter of ur story. .If I wasn't so much of a cheap stake, I would have gifted ur book by now My last advice, or rather a suggestion: It's too late to do a u turn on any of the development you've made after derailing it. So through another plot device to derail it once more Throw an arc at northern, crush that pride and arrogance Kill off the summons( most of them but all them is preferably to me as they serve zero purpose) And nearly kill him as well. The paragon and luminary ranks have less meaning now because of him so make it scary again Put him through some kaneki level development and ground him again in something concrete If you want to make his conceited, arrogant or annoying once more, make it interesting Snatch his system from him and leave him with a few powers and make him climb his way back up( if possible, leave the system but lessen that ridiculous list of abilities) Focus more on divergent storylines and characters, Raven, rhusborough, the leaders of the continent, smaller, almost inconsequential storylines to add depth to ur story. Let the characters stand on their own, not as plot devices to notherns shady greatness Show us effort, strife, desperation, bonds, emptiness, grit, suffering As an author, ur emotions should speak through ur work Do you know what I gleem about you from ur work? Ur a shallow anime and novel reader that likes face slapping and overpowered characters that can go against anime's strongest You like flashy anime with powers and explosions and there's nothing wrong with that but aim for more you never know, ur book could get so popular you get both a mange and anime adaptation Keep working and I'll be here to roast you another 100 chapters in if nothing changes Ciao
This novel has so much potential, but the author kinda ruined it because so many things don’t make sense. First, in the early chapters, why didn’t the MC’s parents teach him anything, even though they knew the world was very dangerous?even though there are explanation for this but tbh is still don't make sense, Second, when he became a sage and could potentially defeat a paragon, he was somehow scared of someone weaker than him (academy arc). There are many more issues that I can’t write in this section. The worst part is the author’s inconsistent upload schedule and the constant dragging of the plot with clickbait titles. I hope the author can fix these issues, stop making excuses, and do more action. Tbh, I don’t entirely blame the author for making a novel like this because this platforms are a mess, unlike the good old days when authors genuinely had a passion for writing. Thank you.
Spoiler de révélationI personally hate the way the author wrote the Novel using complex ,confusing sentences it ruins the story so much that i pretty much couldn't continue this .
It’s 60% similar to shadow slave. Author try’s to change it up, but half the plot is like a paraphrased version of shadow slave.
Solid story, but the Shadow Slave influence is very prominent. This might put some people off, but I personally don't mind. 👍
the mc just became a pushover somewhere along the way but hope that changes.and the romance 😔 it's like trying to copy sunny and neph romance but end up making it atrocious, unbearable even.at this point the only thing that can save the romance is either a new fl or just make it a harem instead.at this point even jeci can be a better option than raven.i beg you author anyone else but raven🙏🏾.his character seems like it will improve hopefully now that hes'saway from raven.romance is the only issue with the book now,all other areas are seeing improvements even if minute,still better than at the start.
i loved it, it is one of my favorites! . . . . . . . . . ......................................................................................................
Northern's attitude and thought process is the biggest rage bait I've seen on this app. Fr Like I think, there's a distinction between feeling like the mc and actually being one. He is angry that they are treating him like a child when he knows something is about to happen but the bloody idiot doesn't want to tell anyone?? ? Imagine you run a cab service and a sixteen year old gets in and starts acting like he's the shit like tf do you think you are really? I don't know whether this is constructive or not but I just had to speak about it because it keeps coming up I wonder if it's only me with this issue
Writing this fresh off of the free chapters and I have a few things to say. Positive and negative. Writing Quality - 4 stars A few errors here and there, especially at the beginning with the author not doing his best at having a proper flow of text rather than abruptly switching topics back and forth. Definitely improves however later on. One issue I had was him noticing a mistake he made and replying to a comment on it, but never fixing it. Story Development - 5 Stars Most novels are generic. MC gets left by big tiddy fiancee because he's lost his talent or crippled. MC gets cheat. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. With little to no consequence or suffering. This MC is however, thrown right into the thick of it (shout-out to KSI). Thrown into dangerous territory with nothing but torment and suffering. It's well done honestly, and makes it feel more interesting because it's not just the same bland story repeated over and over. However, a lot of the development is left with a bitter taste due to the character design. Character Design - 1 star Ignoring how cringe all the sappy scenes are with him missing his family like he wasn't originally an adult man before. Because, let's be honest, everyone would be missing their family in these situations, BUT he's an adult man in a child's body who's lived a lifetime plus his age at the moment. When you grow to that age, you don't tear up and cry just because you miss your mommy. Again, kind of understandable but also off putting with how often and the situations in which it occurs. The only acceptable moment was the mines to me as his mind was semi broken. My biggest issue with the MC however, is in fact that, hmm, how do I say this without being offensive. He's retard*d. Which is funny because he constantly states how smart he is, whether it be over his peers or just in general. Yet through the entire first 36 or so chapters, yes you don't even get 40, he doesn't do a single intelligent thing. Mostly a few stupid things. It'd be understandable if he was actually a child, but he's not. The author almost portrays the MC as if he actually is a child, like he forgets that the MC reincarnated. Nevertheless, another issue is the fact that other characters are cardboard. Mother is almost non-existent. Her only scenes are crying after the first battle, and her saying goodbye. I do NOT count the scene with them finding the MC as a baby, simply because it shows little to nothing about their character. The dad is the only character with screentime besides the MC in this entire 40 chapter section. Screentime that amounts to maybe 10 chapters if I had to guess, possibly a little more. Most of it is taken by the fight and the rest just him talking about how he wants a daughter, no Diddy. He doesn't provide much value to the story himself. Every other character has had one scene total. Updating Stability - 5 Stars Nothing to comment. Didn't look into this. World Background- 5 Stars Honestly, pretty well crafted. The rift tier thing is a little silly to me, specifically with how monsters are born. It's slightly confusing in the sense of strength scaling. Basically, stated that beasts who are hellion rank for example, can never become stronger than hellion, only the peak of hellion. I think that's just a silly concept that other organisms are limited, meanwhile humans are SO special. But that can be argued in both ways, what does confuse me is if they are born weak or not? Are they immediately born at the bottom of hellion rank? Similar to how dragons function possibly? Not important though. The World Building while poorly explained sometimes, especially when related to the academy is still well done and unique. Overall - I think it would be a good read if you committed to it and continued. However, the author did a terrible job with doing what the free chapters are supposed to do, hook you to the novel. That's why most novels are quick paced these days, to get to the point and hook you. Yet the MC hasn't gotten even slightly stronger since the first fight of the novel, nor has anything captivating occurred. The last chapter with the archenemy appearing after he killed the hellion did pique my interest, curious to see the result. I will be continuing, but to be honest, it barely struck interest.
A great story to read really good plot and am overpowered protagonist hope author keep going like this but chapters are short I advise author to make them long
ahhh this I drop it already where the copycat ability I'm very confused 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 when he copy his father ability it's a good novel but I get episode 25 nahhhhhh dropt it
Crazily amazing, how can someone write a book as this?? I'm mind blown.. my best book in webnovel
its not bad but your writing in the wrong platform and wrong audience. You have to realized the readers in Webnovel hate incompetent mc, simp, ntr, stupid. I and the others here prefered novels where the MC is matured, calm, focus, overpowered (if not overpowered at least competent like Sylas Brown in Genetic Ascention), Or Atticus who's the definiton of a proper way to write an overpowered main protagonist. I know another novel name The Greatest of All Legends that way rated lowly because of the girl cheating on the main protagonist even when it's just part of his development. You have to pick which audience your targeting. Berserk is popular but some dislike it including myself, some people think the big three are the best manga of all times but some disagree. This situation is the same, your novel is not that bad but for webnovel readers including myself its infatuating, annoying, obnoxius and stupid.
the power class makes no sense, why bother to make a complex power classification if no characters respects it? the author keep saying how some peoples are immensely powerfull, just for their accomplishments to be overtaken by someone who is like 2 or 3 ranks bellow them
i am in ch 164 right now and with this i can say that u need a lot of patience to read this because of the complex words that the author kept throwing here or there but now it has improved a lot....i didn't realize since where the words and sentences got a bit simple but it is more understandable now, i love our main character the most now because he is the kind of character i prefer the most, of course at first his stupid decisions made him a bit irritating but its much better now... also, i saw some comments saying that he is a simp, i don't know whether they were referring to the present or the past(beginning of the story) i really do hope that he doesn't become a simp or something like that, this trope has become annoying at this point...
where's the character development? it's chapter 200+ and he only become more and more immature brat who keep throwing tantrum at everyone, his character we're better before dark continent arc, intellect ual and mature mc but now he become a 3rd rate thug/mob in face slapping novel, the type that got slapped casually by face slapping mc , i know and understand that character need time to develop but common he has 28+16 years of his life we're wasted without development only to go backwards
unlikeable mc, expecting more of how mc becoming op with his copy system not this void/chaos mumbo jumbo, power system we're mess and chaotic
Spoiler de révélationAnother character with depth potential in Thalen, leader of the citadel reduced to the assistant head of the 'glaze northern till he bust' club
I take it back; this is for those who are into the 'humiliation' genre. The main character is frustratingly incompetent—he hasn't even tried to develop his talent in the first 30 chapters, despite having the necessary fragments. The author attempts to make him resemble Sunny from "Shadow Slave," but fails miserably. At least Sunny is likable and somewhat intelligent. This character lacks common sense, and I’ve heard from others that the female lead is manipulative while the main character is a simp. Additionally, the writing style contains too many grammatical errors and relies on overly grand words just to inflate the word count. This novel had potential, but it's been squandered.
MC is stupid even after getting betrayed by his women. He was discarded like a trash in his first life. I can't understand why MC believes that she will just give him ship. He didn't learn anything after going through hell in last life and this life. MC is naive and stupid even now.
What a destructive writing my boy you have.. It shit you know and you also know that majority of people who use web novel are younglings. So have some mercy and rewrite this shit, which we can understand Story is good but the execution is horrible and shit.
Story is good overall but mc hates female lead too much he doesn't control his anger and think calmly about what happened, Terence told him she can't tell raven about the future but still he believes Raven plotted and used him. To it looks hopeless how are they gonna end together and most importantly when will this misunderstanding be solved and they will get close. Author tell me would this happen how many more chapters. But honestly, 😁😏 it will interesting and fun to mc getting close to someone having feelings towards someone who he hate the most. Author keep it up 👍 I am waiting for the romance between the two
I finally figured out why I do not like this novel. I am fine with an MC not knowing what's going on in the wider sense or context of the world, but as the reader, I SHOULD know what is going on, and I have no fucking clue what is going on MOST of the time. I should know if that gilbert guy is a lap dog psycho or gonna betray that old bastard. Instead, I have no idea because I never read about him or his internal thoughts. Just his actions as if I am the MC himself and that is just a dog shit way of reading a story. I am the reader, not the MC, so I should know at least a bit more than him, but I do not, so screw it. Dropping this hard.
Didn't like the flowery descriptions for almost everything. What can be conveyed in a paragraph is stretched to fill the whole chapter. The title is about copying and upgrading talents but that only happens in the beginning, the author later moves away from it to focus more on chaos and void. Many elements that were introduced in power system are simply forgotten until the author remembers them after ages, only to mention a few words and forget it.
The glazing never ends, even Northern has started glazing himself. Greatest of all time? Did he really call himself that?
Till around 600 chapters I rly enjoyed it but after, idk what to feel, was too disappointed due to the fact that the major attraction of the novel, the system through which he could copy talents, author just changed it into void and chaos, what's the point of cheat if everything is void chaos and mc began to skip copying talent and directly jump began jumping stages. It quickly fell off for me because the copy and upgrade system was the thing i enjoyed the most.
Just another trash story about the MC being basically tortured over and over. The writing is terrible. Most chapters are pointless. Filled with flowery descriptions for things that aren't necessary. One chapter was basically a description of the sky and moons. Even though we had already been told about them previously. Soo much filler garbage to make more chapters. A decent story concept written by a trash author.
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents" follows Northern, a talentless protagonist who gains the ability to copy powers. The story starts slow but builds up to an exciting journey of growth and strength. Fans of gradual character development and overpowered protagonists will enjoy it.
The text is very messy and disorganized. Is it correctable on the next pages? I left it on the second page, it's annoying.
Ok. Second official review of this book.Before I begin, I'd like to say that, despite my numerous comments in this book, I do enjoy it to an extent.Iv'e invested a lot of time into the story and unfortunately, it's impossible for me to drop it at this point. I have to see it through Now, in light of that, I will first talk about the redeeming qualities of the book 1. Story and world development : One of the best parts of this book is it's rich and expansive world building. It's power system, rankings, locations and characters have a lot of potential. I've said it before. Each of these form a little branch out of the main storyline which I believe, if shed with light and expanded would give the book a more robust cast and story line, something like Naruto and one piece where even the side characters are interesting and aren't just there to assist the main character. A good example is rhusborough (doubt I spelt that right, could never get it right at first try) and his agenda, his story, another is the coup currently underway by Dante which should show us deeper into the inner workings and higher ups of the continent. And our resident Aizen, Raven and her intentions. I want to applaud the author for creating a robust cast with diverse motivations and characters. Lore that isn't that head aching to read and a power system that isn't that generic. .I enjoy expansions such as that 2. I had to think long about a second as I didn't want to drop only a single positive. So, I'd like commend the writing quality, or rather , the improvement of it. The author really listened to us on that one and made efforts to make the delivery easy to digest with killing the quality drastically. Kudos, author Now, I'm going to go into the negative. I hope both the author and the book possess an SSS rank defence talent because I'm about to unleash weeks of venom I've been restraining for this day 1.Forced power progression, plot and interaction. Author, what the fuck... Like really.. what the fuck are you doing??? Sometimes I read your book and I wonder why you wish to irrevocably push ur story towards suicide. Firstly, Northern has to most abilities in his bag than any other web novel mc I've read and trust me, I've read a lot but it now poses the question, does he need that many? It has reached the point where you the author don't remember them for chapters on end and end up having to force them back into the story.Northern is over fed really as a character and it kills the story for me. Let me use a practical example, Naruto learnt the rasengan, then the rasenshuriken, then sage mode, then KCM and finally sage of six paths power. At every junction of these level ups, he was at the right point between powerful enough to keep up and weak enough that it isn't bland watching him. There was struggle, inguinity and creativity on how to use his abilities and the urge to grow stronger to match the plot of the story. Northern on the other hand, is the most rushed shoddy excuse for character growth I've ever seen, to the point that I feel nothing watching him fight, no excitement when he discovers a new way to use his abilities, my heart doesn't shake when he goes up against stronger foes. Nothing. He copies talents with no idea of synergy, even a human like me would think of synergy but anything that looks cool to him, he takes it like it's pokemon. He has to catch them all. Void flames Chaos flames that doesn't exist and can burn away the idea of concepts Void force that works like gojo's limitless black lance chaos eyes (the most ridiculous in this list) reality warping a useless amount of summons that don't impact the story line, their just there to fulfill stereotypes and many more. .. . What the fuck is this list author? What can fight this??? Any struggle you put in front of this would be forced and that's what's killing ur story Every foe he has faced so far can be killed by the base powers of all these abilities Zero struggle, zero resistance, zero excitement The fights are bland and I cry blood reading them sometimes. It's like watching Zeno raid through a Lego world. Secondly, this is very important so I'll try to explain well. You force the shit out of plot. Some many aspects of your story are unnatural and deliberately luminary level cringe 1. Raven's hate for northern: I can't be the only one that sees that what Raven did from the ship to whatever, doesn't warrant the amount of hate this nigga has for her. He literally created a whole as summon just to kill her. Rather than hate, he's obsessed and if that's the route you use to mount a romantic relationship, I pity you. I know you were trying to invert sunny and nephis's relationship but you literally forced it down the readers and northern's throat. Especially when you tried to potray northern as a 'smart' character. He tried to use her as well but got beat, be a man and suck it up 2.The effects of northern's power on his being: Truth be told, I understand wanting to nerf absolute power with a crippling flaw but in my opinion, you ruined the character for me. His power were meant to eat at his humanity and turn him empty. An example of that would be Gabimaru of Hell's paradise, who became numb to morality and emotional stimuli.. That was what I was expecting and was excited for it but instead of turning hollow or less empathetic, he became the most arrogant, cringe delivering, self conceited and prideful mf to walk the nine realms. Nothing about his character is realistic. If you wanted to turn him hollow, it should have been a gradual process, from him understanding he isn't phased by taking a life anymore to being unable to care about the well being of strangers such as Dante's men Instead, this ahh thinks he's the king of the world, with his weird ass "Im enough"self glazing piece of turd mentality and this mentality is born from the plot armour that is his abilities. Again, it is too late to change his character design without making a huge right turn in ur story but I think it's worth it. Ur mc is annoying, narcissistic and full of himself without be charming with it. Characters can't be this level of an ass without be charming, an example is Arsene from monarch of darkness. Without it, you look retarded 3.The glazing: OMG, when does it end????? ? every interaction, every conversation, every character seems to be on the road to sucking this man's already intergalactic ego. Damn!! ! Characters with potential are reduced to mere glazing devices to the point I don't respect them anymore. The story line shifts in a way that must drop the limelight on his ass, with cringe ass lines and development . Everything lives for that man's glazing and it's frustrating as hell Can't I just read a five chapter stretch without hearing "I'm the shit" and "northern is the shit" written in a million different ways? ?? I understand wanting to shine on ur mc but it's become toxic and unhealthy for the story Surprise and concern at his power is reasonable but you stress it so much, the fear, the despair just staring in his eyes, Fuck Sorry, got carried away. I'll swallow the rest and just advice you to kill the glazing and focus on the story. Ur plot line is wonderful, but ur killing it with ur own writing #stopthebloodyglazing Huh, I was able to fit all my complaints into a single section. That's about it I heard you were Nigerian so I was extra motivated when writing this. I want to make it clear, once again, that despite the severity of my words, I'm a supporter of ur story. .If I wasn't so much of a cheap stake, I would have gifted ur book by now My last advice, or rather a suggestion: It's too late to do a u turn on any of the development you've made after derailing it. So through another plot device to derail it once more Throw an arc at northern, crush that pride and arrogance Kill off the summons( most of them but all them is preferably to me as they serve zero purpose) And nearly kill him as well. The paragon and luminary ranks have less meaning now because of him so make it scary again Put him through some kaneki level development and ground him again in something concrete If you want to make his conceited, arrogant or annoying once more, make it interesting Snatch his system from him and leave him with a few powers and make him climb his way back up( if possible, leave the system but lessen that ridiculous list of abilities) Focus more on divergent storylines and characters, Raven, rhusborough, the leaders of the continent, smaller, almost inconsequential storylines to add depth to ur story. Let the characters stand on their own, not as plot devices to notherns shady greatness Show us effort, strife, desperation, bonds, emptiness, grit, suffering As an author, ur emotions should speak through ur work Do you know what I gleem about you from ur work? Ur a shallow anime and novel reader that likes face slapping and overpowered characters that can go against anime's strongest You like flashy anime with powers and explosions and there's nothing wrong with that but aim for more you never know, ur book could get so popular you get both a mange and anime adaptation Keep working and I'll be here to roast you another 100 chapters in if nothing changes Ciao
This novel has so much potential, but the author kinda ruined it because so many things don’t make sense. First, in the early chapters, why didn’t the MC’s parents teach him anything, even though they knew the world was very dangerous?even though there are explanation for this but tbh is still don't make sense, Second, when he became a sage and could potentially defeat a paragon, he was somehow scared of someone weaker than him (academy arc). There are many more issues that I can’t write in this section. The worst part is the author’s inconsistent upload schedule and the constant dragging of the plot with clickbait titles. I hope the author can fix these issues, stop making excuses, and do more action. Tbh, I don’t entirely blame the author for making a novel like this because this platforms are a mess, unlike the good old days when authors genuinely had a passion for writing. Thank you.
Spoiler de révélationI personally hate the way the author wrote the Novel using complex ,confusing sentences it ruins the story so much that i pretty much couldn't continue this .
It’s 60% similar to shadow slave. Author try’s to change it up, but half the plot is like a paraphrased version of shadow slave.
Solid story, but the Shadow Slave influence is very prominent. This might put some people off, but I personally don't mind. 👍
the mc just became a pushover somewhere along the way but hope that changes.and the romance 😔 it's like trying to copy sunny and neph romance but end up making it atrocious, unbearable even.at this point the only thing that can save the romance is either a new fl or just make it a harem instead.at this point even jeci can be a better option than raven.i beg you author anyone else but raven🙏🏾.his character seems like it will improve hopefully now that hes'saway from raven.romance is the only issue with the book now,all other areas are seeing improvements even if minute,still better than at the start.
i loved it, it is one of my favorites! . . . . . . . . . ......................................................................................................
Northern's attitude and thought process is the biggest rage bait I've seen on this app. Fr Like I think, there's a distinction between feeling like the mc and actually being one. He is angry that they are treating him like a child when he knows something is about to happen but the bloody idiot doesn't want to tell anyone?? ? Imagine you run a cab service and a sixteen year old gets in and starts acting like he's the shit like tf do you think you are really? I don't know whether this is constructive or not but I just had to speak about it because it keeps coming up I wonder if it's only me with this issue
Writing this fresh off of the free chapters and I have a few things to say. Positive and negative. Writing Quality - 4 stars A few errors here and there, especially at the beginning with the author not doing his best at having a proper flow of text rather than abruptly switching topics back and forth. Definitely improves however later on. One issue I had was him noticing a mistake he made and replying to a comment on it, but never fixing it. Story Development - 5 Stars Most novels are generic. MC gets left by big tiddy fiancee because he's lost his talent or crippled. MC gets cheat. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. With little to no consequence or suffering. This MC is however, thrown right into the thick of it (shout-out to KSI). Thrown into dangerous territory with nothing but torment and suffering. It's well done honestly, and makes it feel more interesting because it's not just the same bland story repeated over and over. However, a lot of the development is left with a bitter taste due to the character design. Character Design - 1 star Ignoring how cringe all the sappy scenes are with him missing his family like he wasn't originally an adult man before. Because, let's be honest, everyone would be missing their family in these situations, BUT he's an adult man in a child's body who's lived a lifetime plus his age at the moment. When you grow to that age, you don't tear up and cry just because you miss your mommy. Again, kind of understandable but also off putting with how often and the situations in which it occurs. The only acceptable moment was the mines to me as his mind was semi broken. My biggest issue with the MC however, is in fact that, hmm, how do I say this without being offensive. He's retard*d. Which is funny because he constantly states how smart he is, whether it be over his peers or just in general. Yet through the entire first 36 or so chapters, yes you don't even get 40, he doesn't do a single intelligent thing. Mostly a few stupid things. It'd be understandable if he was actually a child, but he's not. The author almost portrays the MC as if he actually is a child, like he forgets that the MC reincarnated. Nevertheless, another issue is the fact that other characters are cardboard. Mother is almost non-existent. Her only scenes are crying after the first battle, and her saying goodbye. I do NOT count the scene with them finding the MC as a baby, simply because it shows little to nothing about their character. The dad is the only character with screentime besides the MC in this entire 40 chapter section. Screentime that amounts to maybe 10 chapters if I had to guess, possibly a little more. Most of it is taken by the fight and the rest just him talking about how he wants a daughter, no Diddy. He doesn't provide much value to the story himself. Every other character has had one scene total. Updating Stability - 5 Stars Nothing to comment. Didn't look into this. World Background- 5 Stars Honestly, pretty well crafted. The rift tier thing is a little silly to me, specifically with how monsters are born. It's slightly confusing in the sense of strength scaling. Basically, stated that beasts who are hellion rank for example, can never become stronger than hellion, only the peak of hellion. I think that's just a silly concept that other organisms are limited, meanwhile humans are SO special. But that can be argued in both ways, what does confuse me is if they are born weak or not? Are they immediately born at the bottom of hellion rank? Similar to how dragons function possibly? Not important though. The World Building while poorly explained sometimes, especially when related to the academy is still well done and unique. Overall - I think it would be a good read if you committed to it and continued. However, the author did a terrible job with doing what the free chapters are supposed to do, hook you to the novel. That's why most novels are quick paced these days, to get to the point and hook you. Yet the MC hasn't gotten even slightly stronger since the first fight of the novel, nor has anything captivating occurred. The last chapter with the archenemy appearing after he killed the hellion did pique my interest, curious to see the result. I will be continuing, but to be honest, it barely struck interest.
A great story to read really good plot and am overpowered protagonist hope author keep going like this but chapters are short I advise author to make them long
ahhh this I drop it already where the copycat ability I'm very confused 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 when he copy his father ability it's a good novel but I get episode 25 nahhhhhh dropt it
Crazily amazing, how can someone write a book as this?? I'm mind blown.. my best book in webnovel
its not bad but your writing in the wrong platform and wrong audience. You have to realized the readers in Webnovel hate incompetent mc, simp, ntr, stupid. I and the others here prefered novels where the MC is matured, calm, focus, overpowered (if not overpowered at least competent like Sylas Brown in Genetic Ascention), Or Atticus who's the definiton of a proper way to write an overpowered main protagonist. I know another novel name The Greatest of All Legends that way rated lowly because of the girl cheating on the main protagonist even when it's just part of his development. You have to pick which audience your targeting. Berserk is popular but some dislike it including myself, some people think the big three are the best manga of all times but some disagree. This situation is the same, your novel is not that bad but for webnovel readers including myself its infatuating, annoying, obnoxius and stupid.
the power class makes no sense, why bother to make a complex power classification if no characters respects it? the author keep saying how some peoples are immensely powerfull, just for their accomplishments to be overtaken by someone who is like 2 or 3 ranks bellow them
i am in ch 164 right now and with this i can say that u need a lot of patience to read this because of the complex words that the author kept throwing here or there but now it has improved a lot....i didn't realize since where the words and sentences got a bit simple but it is more understandable now, i love our main character the most now because he is the kind of character i prefer the most, of course at first his stupid decisions made him a bit irritating but its much better now... also, i saw some comments saying that he is a simp, i don't know whether they were referring to the present or the past(beginning of the story) i really do hope that he doesn't become a simp or something like that, this trope has become annoying at this point...
where's the character development? it's chapter 200+ and he only become more and more immature brat who keep throwing tantrum at everyone, his character we're better before dark continent arc, intellect ual and mature mc but now he become a 3rd rate thug/mob in face slapping novel, the type that got slapped casually by face slapping mc , i know and understand that character need time to develop but common he has 28+16 years of his life we're wasted without development only to go backwards
unlikeable mc, expecting more of how mc becoming op with his copy system not this void/chaos mumbo jumbo, power system we're mess and chaotic
Spoiler de révélationAnother character with depth potential in Thalen, leader of the citadel reduced to the assistant head of the 'glaze northern till he bust' club
I take it back; this is for those who are into the 'humiliation' genre. The main character is frustratingly incompetent—he hasn't even tried to develop his talent in the first 30 chapters, despite having the necessary fragments. The author attempts to make him resemble Sunny from "Shadow Slave," but fails miserably. At least Sunny is likable and somewhat intelligent. This character lacks common sense, and I’ve heard from others that the female lead is manipulative while the main character is a simp. Additionally, the writing style contains too many grammatical errors and relies on overly grand words just to inflate the word count. This novel had potential, but it's been squandered.
MC is stupid even after getting betrayed by his women. He was discarded like a trash in his first life. I can't understand why MC believes that she will just give him ship. He didn't learn anything after going through hell in last life and this life. MC is naive and stupid even now.
What a destructive writing my boy you have.. It shit you know and you also know that majority of people who use web novel are younglings. So have some mercy and rewrite this shit, which we can understand Story is good but the execution is horrible and shit.
Story is good overall but mc hates female lead too much he doesn't control his anger and think calmly about what happened, Terence told him she can't tell raven about the future but still he believes Raven plotted and used him. To it looks hopeless how are they gonna end together and most importantly when will this misunderstanding be solved and they will get close. Author tell me would this happen how many more chapters. But honestly, 😁😏 it will interesting and fun to mc getting close to someone having feelings towards someone who he hate the most. Author keep it up 👍 I am waiting for the romance between the two
I finally figured out why I do not like this novel. I am fine with an MC not knowing what's going on in the wider sense or context of the world, but as the reader, I SHOULD know what is going on, and I have no fucking clue what is going on MOST of the time. I should know if that gilbert guy is a lap dog psycho or gonna betray that old bastard. Instead, I have no idea because I never read about him or his internal thoughts. Just his actions as if I am the MC himself and that is just a dog shit way of reading a story. I am the reader, not the MC, so I should know at least a bit more than him, but I do not, so screw it. Dropping this hard.