Danmachi: Captured by Freya at the Beginning!

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U22

You can write your review below. Before reading, please remember that I am translating this from a Chinese source. I really like this story, but there are still some flaws in it. My job is to act as a poison tester to filter out any potential issues, so you won't have to suffer. Furthermore, I may modify the story in the future to suit my preferences, so please be aware of this. Besides, I don't know when I'll lose interest and stop uploading more chapters. So, please make sure to show your support if you like this. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Garland

Yeah, it was pretty much evident that this was a Chinese Translated Story. They always have interesting concepts but overall execution leaves much to be desired. Sure being targeted by Freya isn't anything new but it was with how immediate Freya acted. I also felt like it was just a sudden start with him being already an adventurer and the lack of a good start and explanation. Things are also moving kinda fast with how easy it was for Freya to say that he is from another world, i mean sure his situation is strange but saying that he is from another world and being correct kinda feels like reading a script instead of a situation that is believable. Overall good ideas but bad execution. Some ideas are also kinda eh with just how integrated they are.

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Krishnbarad

Well, hold onto your hats, folks, because this fanfic takes the term 'simp' and runs with it like it's going for Olympic gold! Our protagonist? He's about as deep as a puddle, with all the character development of a cardboard cutout. Yet somehow, he's head over heels for Freya, acting more like a lovesick puppy than a hero. And he's not alone in this puppy love parade; just like everyone in Freya's famalia is vying for her attention like it's the ultimate game of fetch! The plot? About as original as a rerun of last year's Super Bowl halftime show, and the protagonist's supposed 'cheats'? They're about as useful as a screen door on a submarine or more like he doesn’t know how to use them. But hey, if you're into being dominated, this might just be your cup of tea. As for the rest of us? We'll be searching for literary enlightenment elsewhere. Woof woof, indeed.

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Siqui

Not to my liking, the MC is a simp, foot lovers, and submissive, so if you like it you can keep reading.

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HaremLoverKoneko

If you want to read about a MC with the worst qualities of Issei and none of his few good ones as well as being more of a simp this story is for you then good day.

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Milf_Hunter_01

where can I find the original? ..........................................................................................................................................................................

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MifCore

A very interesting idea, I wish you good luck and inspiration[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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JohnSmithEinS

I've liked this Fan-Fic Series a lot but charging $20 to read 20 Chapters ahead is to much. It should be $12 Not $20 for the Next Tier on Patreon, so I've just unsubscribed because of that, hope that U22 changes it. I'll maybe Re-subscribe until after a month or more time has passed.

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KILLER_Pineapple

My few reason why I dropped is mc is a simp, there little interactions with any interesting characters and there’s like like no story progress after all the chapters I read like nothing really happened. And his cheats are garbage cuz the author just want to nurf it. This would be a 1.5 star if it wasn’t a translation

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JohnSmithEinS

This is such a Magnificent Fan-Fic Series as I have just Subscribed to U22's Patreon for $10.70. Keep Up the Amazing work Your doing U22. Also I highly recommend for others to check out U22's Patreon Page as it is Not a scam like other Fake Fan-Fic Authors do. So I John Smith can guarantee that U22's is doing Great work for their community, Your Magnificent U22.

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rosealsaadi

It’s good so far and i like the fast updates W…………………………………………………… …………………………………………………… …………………………………………………… …………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………

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Daichi_kasai

I love it, when is the sequel? ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏👍🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏

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JohnSmithEinS

Magnificent Series and do keep up the Translations of Chapters until You reach the 200 Chapters. Your Grammar Work is impressive and You even put better logic into changing the Original. Do Not mind the haters because all of them are Fake People. It's Your True Fans that You should always cherish and to Keep Up the Great Work You are doing for this Amazing Fan-Fic Danmachi Series.

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Jonathan_Zarco

Ini bininging ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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MacKenzie_50943

Great story so far 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

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U22

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Autumn_Mage

Love this book. The Mc is a man of culture, that alone is worth at least 4 ⭐️