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Écrire un avisExcellent, not boring story. The heroes are not Mary Sues. The world is well-written. The main character, in my opinion, should gather people around him like the Death Eaters or the Order of the Phoenix, and not work alone with his ladies.
Personally, I really like the story until he started becoming enemies with everyone for no goddamn reason it felt like his personality was just changing overnight from destroying his relationship with Hermione to stealing Harry’s cloak honestly I wish I never read this because it was so good and I don’t want to read another fanfic about an asshole mc.
Spoiler de révélationFairly good book, but had a few problems and one big one that made me drop it. at the start of the book the character feels way younger then the book says he is, then to essencially retcon it every time by having him get magically more mature every night by having him be trained by essencially his old incarnation. every chapter begins with 12 lines talking about their patreon, which i dont mind but i usually am an audio listener so its a big pain. the big problem i had was when the same week he meets/learns about his soulmates he immediately goes and sexually assults someone in the library, i just gave up on it then. had potential but I lost all respect for the mc.
Spoiler de révélationIt's actually one of the best HP fanfictions i have read. It's nice to see an author that canges the cannon a little to make the magical system a little more robust. Because the original never made any sense, nor was it meant to. But it's also fun amd engaging to read the great effort authors go through to extend something coherent out of all that wand movement and butchered latin nonsense.
One of the best a.u. Harry Potter fanfic, really amazing story and lore, the story feels fresh and doesn’t fallow the original story (we dont fallow harry and the story of the au progress on its own without constantly being restricted to the original). 5/5 star from me, please keep up the amazing work
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Average, at best. If smn just started with HP ffns, do give this a try. Personally tho, having read countless HP fics before, novels that copy paste the original story's developments r just boring & a waste of time. Nothing unique ot even remotely interesting here. I believe 3 stars is more than generous rating.
La historia se toma a si misma demasiado enserio y aun que es buena, entretenida y cumple con su función de entretener, hay demasiados deus ex machine que benefician al protagonista pe sin mencionar que no termina de aclarar si tiene metaconocimiento o no y de ambas formas el protagonista sabe demasiado para su conveniencia pero otras las ignora para que la trama pueda seguir así que todo se sostiene con pegamento y cinta de aislar. En mi opinión no pagaría por leer esta historia y por ninguna en realidad pero es buena si la lees solo para pasar el rato y no tienes nada mas
Spoiler de révélationHello author. Your fic deserves a lots of merits. You have appropriated the Harry potter world for yourself and you have a lot of good idea concerning the plot and magic in general. Keep producing such a good work!
While the story may seem to be slow, it's intriguing enough to keep reading. I like the premise of the story and hope to see more of it. I wish the author good luck!
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It’s a pretty good read for those of you who are hesitant to pick it up. I suggest you give it a try. It also has a really interesting choice of background and abilities that the author chose. It’s not “Fae” like Merlin, but Fae like the magical beings. Like the nature loving earthy people. I don’t know the exact definition, but something along those lines. Overall I am enjoying it so far. Keep up the great work author!
Excellent, not boring story. The heroes are not Mary Sues. The world is well-written. The main character, in my opinion, should gather people around him like the Death Eaters or the Order of the Phoenix, and not work alone with his ladies.
Personally, I really like the story until he started becoming enemies with everyone for no goddamn reason it felt like his personality was just changing overnight from destroying his relationship with Hermione to stealing Harry’s cloak honestly I wish I never read this because it was so good and I don’t want to read another fanfic about an asshole mc.
Spoiler de révélationFairly good book, but had a few problems and one big one that made me drop it. at the start of the book the character feels way younger then the book says he is, then to essencially retcon it every time by having him get magically more mature every night by having him be trained by essencially his old incarnation. every chapter begins with 12 lines talking about their patreon, which i dont mind but i usually am an audio listener so its a big pain. the big problem i had was when the same week he meets/learns about his soulmates he immediately goes and sexually assults someone in the library, i just gave up on it then. had potential but I lost all respect for the mc.
Spoiler de révélationIt's actually one of the best HP fanfictions i have read. It's nice to see an author that canges the cannon a little to make the magical system a little more robust. Because the original never made any sense, nor was it meant to. But it's also fun amd engaging to read the great effort authors go through to extend something coherent out of all that wand movement and butchered latin nonsense.
One of the best a.u. Harry Potter fanfic, really amazing story and lore, the story feels fresh and doesn’t fallow the original story (we dont fallow harry and the story of the au progress on its own without constantly being restricted to the original). 5/5 star from me, please keep up the amazing work
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Average, at best. If smn just started with HP ffns, do give this a try. Personally tho, having read countless HP fics before, novels that copy paste the original story's developments r just boring & a waste of time. Nothing unique ot even remotely interesting here. I believe 3 stars is more than generous rating.
La historia se toma a si misma demasiado enserio y aun que es buena, entretenida y cumple con su función de entretener, hay demasiados deus ex machine que benefician al protagonista pe sin mencionar que no termina de aclarar si tiene metaconocimiento o no y de ambas formas el protagonista sabe demasiado para su conveniencia pero otras las ignora para que la trama pueda seguir así que todo se sostiene con pegamento y cinta de aislar. En mi opinión no pagaría por leer esta historia y por ninguna en realidad pero es buena si la lees solo para pasar el rato y no tienes nada mas
Spoiler de révélationHello author. Your fic deserves a lots of merits. You have appropriated the Harry potter world for yourself and you have a lot of good idea concerning the plot and magic in general. Keep producing such a good work!
While the story may seem to be slow, it's intriguing enough to keep reading. I like the premise of the story and hope to see more of it. I wish the author good luck!
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It’s a pretty good read for those of you who are hesitant to pick it up. I suggest you give it a try. It also has a really interesting choice of background and abilities that the author chose. It’s not “Fae” like Merlin, but Fae like the magical beings. Like the nature loving earthy people. I don’t know the exact definition, but something along those lines. Overall I am enjoying it so far. Keep up the great work author!