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Eu adorei essa fanfic sério mesmo, mas tem uma parte que me fez dar um 3: a parte da Lilith ficar mandando os demônios se transformarem na aparência de deus, sendo o prota para fazer sexo com "ele" ? sério, era melhor nem ter feito que ela gostasse de Deus, isso só fica parecendo que o prota está sendo cornado, isso me deixa MUITO PUTO, foda-se se era para criar mais demônios que ela teve que casar com Lúcifer, isso aqui é uma fanfic, CARALHO, era só mudar essa porra. Desculpa o desabafo mais isso realmente me deixou puto e fiquei meio enojado quando lucifer se transformou em mulher e mandou os demonios ficarem parecidos com deus para comerem os seus 4 buracos
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So far it's all almost going exactly like the og except for some small changes hence this 3 star review.
I don't know how to fight off the feeling that God is a cuckold in this story. This applies only to Lilith. Honestly, I don't know how else to describe this feeling
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So good please don’t let this end I really enjoy this if I have to I will continue to give my three votes up every time for you to continue 🥺🥺
Nie wiem dlaczego ale czyta mi się to mega przyjemnie czekam aż oś czasu pójdzie trochę dalej :) miłego czytania i dzięki autor na rozdziały
thanks to you, Your story taught me some things about the Bible, but I'm not sure if everything is exactly right. So I'm double-checking things online as I read. Keep up the good work!
IS this same story on QuestioanableQuestion? Here 5 star. But still, gonna read it on QQ. Thanks for the chapter.......................................
Que perdida de tiempo, es como leer la Biblia sin cambiar nada , esperando algo interesante y solo leo como envia a Lilith al infierno y los demás similares, hasta como va seguir lo mismo de dxd . - decepción total estos 8 capitulos. Perdí mi tiempo.
Well at first I didn't like the fanfic since I can barely immerse myself in the story until kaoishin a comment said that it was more advanced in ff.net which I had to go read it and well now I can say that the story is my type
As a reader on FF.net, I really found it good. An idea to start from the beginning of everything. It will also be interesting to see how he will deal with the other gods.
There are disadvantages, but it's pretty good..................................................................................................
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Eu adorei essa fanfic sério mesmo, mas tem uma parte que me fez dar um 3: a parte da Lilith ficar mandando os demônios se transformarem na aparência de deus, sendo o prota para fazer sexo com "ele" ? sério, era melhor nem ter feito que ela gostasse de Deus, isso só fica parecendo que o prota está sendo cornado, isso me deixa MUITO PUTO, foda-se se era para criar mais demônios que ela teve que casar com Lúcifer, isso aqui é uma fanfic, CARALHO, era só mudar essa porra. Desculpa o desabafo mais isso realmente me deixou puto e fiquei meio enojado quando lucifer se transformou em mulher e mandou os demonios ficarem parecidos com deus para comerem os seus 4 buracos
Spoiler de révélation So far it's all almost going exactly like the og except for some small changes hence this 3 star review.
I don't know how to fight off the feeling that God is a cuckold in this story. This applies only to Lilith. Honestly, I don't know how else to describe this feeling
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So good please don’t let this end I really enjoy this if I have to I will continue to give my three votes up every time for you to continue 🥺🥺
Nie wiem dlaczego ale czyta mi się to mega przyjemnie czekam aż oś czasu pójdzie trochę dalej :) miłego czytania i dzięki autor na rozdziały
thanks to you, Your story taught me some things about the Bible, but I'm not sure if everything is exactly right. So I'm double-checking things online as I read. Keep up the good work!
IS this same story on QuestioanableQuestion? Here 5 star. But still, gonna read it on QQ. Thanks for the chapter.......................................
Que perdida de tiempo, es como leer la Biblia sin cambiar nada , esperando algo interesante y solo leo como envia a Lilith al infierno y los demás similares, hasta como va seguir lo mismo de dxd . - decepción total estos 8 capitulos. Perdí mi tiempo.
Well at first I didn't like the fanfic since I can barely immerse myself in the story until kaoishin a comment said that it was more advanced in ff.net which I had to go read it and well now I can say that the story is my type
As a reader on FF.net, I really found it good. An idea to start from the beginning of everything. It will also be interesting to see how he will deal with the other gods.
There are disadvantages, but it's pretty good..................................................................................................